Date: 10/24/20 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 6 Tom's Masculine Moves
Awww, it's finished! I'm glad that Tom and Gustav sorted their shit out in the end, and I love the little Bill and Georg interlude where Georg's just like "I'll let them out in the morning, go back to sleep!" 😂 I sincerely hope you'll be back to write more! Feel free to shoot me a message if you want to discuss anything!
Date: 10/20/20 10:45 am Title: Chapter 5 Tom’s Admission
Aww, the poor guys. They're so frustrated at the beginning but it's nice to see them a little less growly at the end. Cute chapter. Can't wait to read the last one!
Author's Response: CELEBRATE,GOOD TIMES AHEAD! maybe? thanks for reading and commenting. :)
Date: 10/16/20 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 4 Tom's Entrapment
*spoiler alert to people who read reviews first*
They locked them in bahahahaha! I mean haven't we all said we'd do that to a few people and couldn't do it, well Bill and Georg did. Let's see how Tom and Gus will come out of there ... if they wanna come out at all.
Author's Response: I had to do it, it's fiction after all! Time to see the truth about their feelings. The Motown Magic is moving in to over power them. I hope this story inspires the reader to listen to the songs mentioned. Much love to you:)
Date: 10/13/20 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 3 Tom's Realization
Ah Tom, Tom. You're a bit of a thickie, Tom, but you're lucky Gus is already heads over heels. I can't wait to see how this plays out and what Tom will do. I love Bill in this, it's rare to see him be the voice of reason and it's very entertaining! Good work!
Author's Response: Thank you dear one! I wanted Bill to insert a bit of humor even though he didn’t realize it. Georg quietly (um, maybe not so quietly) guides him. Gus can be stubborn but his heart is so big and he really is a softie. Poor Tom is all I can say. Thank you so much for your kind words. 🤗
Date: 10/13/20 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 2 Tom's Predicament
Ouch, I am a little torn here! I feel bad for tom, but i am also not sure if Gustav should take him back!
Author's Response: Love can be a bitch, yes? I hope you will be happy with the way it all goes. Your review is especially appreciated! Thank you a86;a039;
Date: 10/13/20 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1 Tom's Difficulties
This is such an interesting pairing and I am excited to see that you are writing. I never really read these kind of stories but I was positively surprised.
One thing, though. Some of your dialogue is awfully close, like, in the same paragraph. I think it would be easier to read if you divided them, if you know what I mean? :) other than that, I am enjoying this so far!
Author's Response: I just received your review for chapter one. I greatly appreciate your advice and hope I improved. 🤗
Date: 10/10/20 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 2 Tom's Predicament
Ah Tom, Tom, if only you hadn't been stupid, Tom! I like Gus, he better not take Tom back unless he does something to deserve it.
It's chapter 2 and I'm already getting all worked up about it, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Haha! Yes, Tom can be a bit obtuse and Gus may need a good kick! Thanks for reviewing and encouraging me.
Date: 10/10/20 08:37 am Title: Chapter 2 Tom's Predicament
Ooh, I'm definitely interested to see where you're going with this! Can't wait for an update
Author's Response: When I began writing this I wasn’t sure where I was going either 😂 Motown is such a high influence on my life and I wanted to incorporate it in the story. I let the music be my muse so here we are. Once again, thanks for your kind comments!
Date: 10/06/20 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 Tom's Difficulties
Oooh I’m so excited to see you writing! What an unexpected, lovely surprise! And your note is so sweet, Rion! Thank youuuuu! Anyways, I’m really interested to see where this goes. Poor Gustav, I have a real soft spot for him! One moment that really stood out to me was when Tom forgot his cigarettes and Gus was right there to hand them to him. Super sweet! I’ll be looking out for the next chapter! 💜
Author's Response: I was afraid to tell anyone, Ha ha! I didn’t want to jinx myself . You have. been such an inspiration to me. You know I adore your style and I hope I don’t let you down . I think you are going to love my Gustav and Tom of course you know it won’t be easy . I hope you will see the humor as well. Now I am rambling . Thanks so much for reading and your more than kind review .🤗 🥰
Date: 10/06/20 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 1 Tom's Difficulties
I am so proud of you.
You have come far since 5 years ago. Your stories really show your personality, style and a great imagination. It feels good to see you here...! I say that with humour and a degree of relief. But mostly, with a lot of love for all the time spent on the finer points of Canadian/British VS American speech. And thank you for being open (and putting up) with my requests for various changes and suggestions.
Love you back xx
Author's Response: I knew you would mention the language thing ! It was a learning experience for sure. We both got so frustrated, but we love each other enough to overcome . I could hug you so hard. You are such a wonderful person 🤗😘
Date: 10/06/20 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1 Tom's Difficulties
Throw me a dm on twitter and I'll help you out :)
Author's Response: thanks but it is sorted out :)
Date: 10/06/20 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 Tom's Difficulties
It's so nice to read a story from you!
This took quite an interesting turn and I'd really love to read more!
Author's Response: My laptop went down so I don’t know if you got my response but I’m so excited that you read and reviewed!! There are 6 chapters. I hope I live up to your expectations. I have been a nervous wreck. 🤗
Author's Response: My laptop went down so I don’t know if you got my response but I’m so excited that you read and reviewed!! There are 6 chapters. I hope I live up to your expectations. I have been a nervous wreck. 🤗
Date: 10/06/20 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 1 Tom's Difficulties
Yay! Congratulations on your first story, super happy for you to start posting! Thank you for the sweet note. Looking forward to see where this goes! x
Author's Response: OMG! I never expected a review from you. Thank you so much. There are 6 chapters. I have been a nervous wreck and am exhausted. Thank you so much once again 🤗
Date: 10/06/20 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 1 Tom's Difficulties
How exciting to see you write something for the page! Let me know if you want a banner :)
Author's Response: i would love one, thanks. um, there is a problem. due to not feeling well I let my beta post the story. it seems it is a bit messed up, how can it be fixed?