Date: 10/21/20 09:20 am Title: Seven
YAY! but I wish they would have talked about how the sex felt in the here and now.
Author's Response: Shaddix: They do end up talking, I think at the minute they just got caught up in each other.rn
rnStarling: I am glad you enjoyed it. They will talk, it just takes time.
Date: 10/20/20 07:17 pm Title: Six
WHAT!!! MEANIES :(
Author's Response: Shaddix: Haha! Oops?rn
rnStarling: Oh we are just terrible aren't we. Enjoy the next chapter ;prn
Date: 10/18/20 11:58 pm Title: Six
Tom is an excellent father and husband .... It is good to know that despite the amnesia, Tom is feeling the birth of love for his husband, and Bill after so much pain is recovering his beloved.
Author's Response: Shaddix: He definitely is an amazing husband and father. I think in the process of getting his memory back, he's rediscovering himself and reigniting that spark in his marriage. rn
rnStarling: Tom despite the amnesia still has the potential to be that person. He really is falling for Bill all over again and it's wonderful. thanks for the review.
Date: 10/18/20 07:19 pm Title: Six
this was a really good chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks so much!rn
rnStarling: Thanks for the review. Glad you enjoyed it
Date: 10/15/20 10:39 pm Title: Five
At least Tom is already beginning to have dreams or memories, let's hope that little by little he remembers ... meanwhile the wound of the loss of the baby is healing ...
Author's Response: Shaddix: Fingers crossed! Hopefully Tom is healing. rn
rnStarling: They definitely deserve happiness. Hopefully they can find their way back to each other.
Date: 10/15/20 09:47 pm Title: Five
Are they moving too fast or going on instinct ? I just want them to have happiness. Little Ben is precious 🤗
Author's Response: Shaddix: Ben is absolutely adorable! I love him.rn
rnStarling: I guess you will have to wait and see. Writing Ben was so much fun.
Date: 10/15/20 09:10 pm Title: Four
This was too close. Memories of a cousin long stored away. Happy Halloween little one.
Author's Response: Shaddix: Sorry if it hit too close to home. Sending you love!rn
rnStarling: I am sorry this brought up bad memories for you. I am also sorry you lost someone.
Date: 10/14/20 11:06 pm Title: Five
this was a really good chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks so much!rn
rnStarling: Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 10/11/20 10:21 pm Title: Four
He was so sad ... it is very horrible and tragic that parents have to bury a child who was just beginning to live ... Hopefully Tom little by little awakens love for her husband and by the time she remembers everything, the wounds have already started to heal ...
Author's Response: Shaddix: It's super sad, this chapter was so incredibly hard to write and made me cry like a baby. rn
rnStarling: It is awful for parents to have to bury a child especially one so young. I definitely hope Tom can recover his memoriesrnthanks for the review
Date: 10/11/20 01:37 am Title: Four
this was a good/sad chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Shaddix: I'm glad you are enjoying it, thank you!rn
rnStarling: This is a very sad story but I am glad you still enjoyed it. Thanks for the review
Date: 10/06/20 11:51 pm Title: Three
this was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Shaddix: thanks so much!rn
rnStarling: I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 10/06/20 11:28 pm Title: Three
It's so sad ... I can't imagine how Bill must feel, after a tremendous tragedy and with a husband without memory, his only consolation that at least he survived the accident. I hope Tom recovers his memory as soon as possible, to be a real support for Bill. Is there something hidden with Tom's parents? because they wouldn't want me to remember, the only reason I see is that if Tom recovers his memory it will be another tragedy, because he will suffer a lot ...
Author's Response: Shaddix: It's definitely a super sad and emotional story. There is something going on with Tom's parents, but don't worry, you will find out what that is! Thanks for your review.rn
rnStarling: It is very sad. Bill lost his baby and lost his husband at least memory wise. It was hard to write. Tom's parents are just disapproving because of how young Bill is. Thanks for the review.
Date: 10/06/20 09:10 pm Title: Three
This was sweet and encouraging yet, I feel I know what is to come. And tears to. Flow😢
Author's Response: Shaddix: I adore these two characters, they are so sweet together and their love for each other is amazing. Definitely more tears to come before it gets better, I'm afraid!rn
rnStarling: We tried to interject with moments of sweetness to show them trying to keep things normal for their son. I hope you continue to enjoy it despite the tears.
Date: 10/04/20 10:07 pm Title: Two
It is so sad .... I think Tom did not remember this having a chance and time to digest the unfortunate outcome of that accident. Bill, on the other hand, must be very strong to get his home going. I am very sad for Bill and Tom, they are in a very tragic and sad situation.
Author's Response: Shaddix: It's a super sad story and we both sobbed whilst writing it, but I hope you enjoy it anyway!rn
rnStarling: I cried like a baby while we wrote this. It is very sad but hopefully they will be able to get through it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 10/04/20 09:21 pm Title: Two
this was a really good chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks so much!rn
rnStarling: Thanks for the review.
Date: 10/04/20 04:13 pm Title: Two
Keep going!!!!
Author's Response: Shaddix: I'm glad you like it!rn
rnStarling: I am glad you like it. I was worried after your last review that you hated it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 10/02/20 07:24 pm Title: One
so different um...
Author's Response: Shaddix: Definitely different to what we usually write, but hopefully interesting! rn
rnStarling: Yes this story is different. It is the first time I have ever written something like this.
Date: 10/01/20 02:40 pm Title: One
They made me cry!!!! Such a sad story .... but at least Tom will do his part to try to remember. Waiting for the next chapter ... to cry again .....
Author's Response: Shaddix: It really is a sad story, but hopefully with a happy ending. I adore these two characters and their little family. I hope you love it, despite the tears.rn
rnStarling: It is one of the saddest openings I have written to date. I am glad you enjoyed it enough to continue despite the tears.
Date: 09/30/20 02:31 am Title: One
this sounds like a really good story!!
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks so much!rn
rnStarling: Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review