Date: 04/20/23 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 05/08/20 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 14
this was a really good story!!
I wish it had a sequel to this!
Date: 02/10/16 02:44 am Title: Chapter 14
Like the other ones, I enjoyed reading this as well. Gosh! Bill's way of talking is ADORABLE. I like it how you're able to convey out your story with such fine ease. :3
Date: 09/20/13 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oh, his grammar gives me a headache
Date: 06/16/13 05:55 am Title: Chapter 14
I really don’t know what to say. Just “Wow”. I enjoyed reading this story so much.
Date: 08/14/12 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
For some reason all I could think of when I read this chapter was of the quote: "God is love but Satan does that thing with his tongue that you love." haha
Date: 08/29/10 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 14
ohhh nice end lol horny boyssss
Date: 08/20/10 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 14
& they lived happily ever after :]
i think the end was really good. to tell the truth, i wasn't expecting it at all. the whole time, i didn't know how it could end because there were so many possibilties for the given situation. anyways, this was a great story. i definitely laughed a lot due to bill's innocent cuteness :] i think everyone, in the end, turned out happier than in the beginning [obviously] & it was all for the best. but, if i can ask... what do you think happened to andreas & his family?
Date: 08/20/10 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 9
*tries not to squeal*
it's so cute watching bill learn about hardwood floors, marble, stairs, etc... it's just... an unexplainable level of cuteness :3
Date: 08/20/10 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
i've got one question: how does bill know about sexual actions? i mean, did simone teach him when he was younger or is it just instict? don't get me wrong, i REALLY loved the chapter, i just wanted to know since bill doesn't know much... umm... grammer/english? haha, idk how to phrase the last part, but hopefully you get what i mean.
AWESOME FREAKING STORY XD
Date: 08/20/10 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
hmm... she knows something bout bill & possibly 'the others'. can't wait to read on :]
Date: 08/20/10 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
haha, i absolutely LOVE gordon's pet name :3 it made me laugh VERY much :D
Date: 08/20/10 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
hahaha, for some STRANGE reason, bill kinda reminds me of... tarzan? lol. it's great so far :] even tho it's just chapter one :3
Date: 06/18/10 12:43 am Title: Chapter 14
RedNinja, IM SOOOO GLAD THEY DIDNT DIE!!! yayyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!! omg i flipped out when i found out andreas' mom was a dude...im sitting there like WTF? lmao! im glad that it was a fabricated death instead of a real death!
Love,
Orangina
Author's Response: Hahahaa :D Congratulations on finishing this one. Love, Redninja
Date: 06/18/10 12:38 am Title: Chapter 13
RedNinja, THEYRE GOING TO DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! NEIIIIIIIN
Orangina
Author's Response: Oh no!! :P Love, Redninja
Date: 06/18/10 12:36 am Title: Chapter 12
RedNinja, WHAT JUST HAPPENED??? -wails-
Love,
Orangina
Author's Response: I can't remember! :O Love, Redninja
Date: 06/18/10 12:34 am Title: Chapter 11
RedNinja, I JUST NOTICED THERES MAJOR CHARACTER DEATH IN THIS FIC! BILL AND TOM ARE GOIN TO DIE! -flails- WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?
Love,
Orangina
Author's Response: Dun-Dun-DUUUUUUUUUH! :O Love, Redninja
Date: 06/18/10 12:31 am Title: Chapter 10
RedNinja, how cute! i like the sex scene and i love how bills favorite phrase is "what the fuck" lol
Love,
Orangina
Author's Response: What the fuck!? :O Love, Redninja