Date: 06/11/20 05:24 am Title: IV.
I HATE YOU
Author's Response: Thank you! 😇rn
Date: 06/02/20 03:47 pm Title: IV.
__“She said… she said I’m too fat and my pas de deux partner would need a crane to lift me.”__
I am going to CUT A BITCH
four chapters in & already ready to defend Natalie with my life. precious little dancing child
also YAS @ GEORG. I love that he's a dad & a bit awkward & that he asks Bill out ("just to talk about Natalie's dancing" my ASS). I sense a storm coming from Tom when he finds out, & I am excited for angst.
also I kind of really love that Bill's in the corps. like. he's good but you haven't made him mind-bogglingly amazing & an instant soloist & all of that. he's very real, very human.
gahhhh I just love everything about this. Bill is a wonderful character. you've made all of them so interesting & complex. I'm so EXCITED. thank you for updating!! < 3
Author's Response: Georg is my love. This Georg is everything to me. Just wait. You'll love him more, I promise. And Natalie is so wonderful and precious and just... I love her, You'll love her more too, later on. She's my comic relief, ahaha. I hope that the rest of the story continues to be interesting and entertaining, your reviews are so lovely and just... ugh. Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I can't tell you how much it means <3
Date: 06/02/20 01:55 pm Title: III.
__Inside the club feels like walking on the Northern Lights; beneath the dry-ice smoke swirls an array of blues, greens, and pinks, and the pounding bass-beat fuses bodies together across the dance floor.__
this is it, you're canceled, how dare you, fuck off with your beautiful descriptions.
the way you write their dancing, it's breathtaking. your own passion for music & performance comes out with every word & just adds so much life to this & nnnnngh don't ever stop.
I like the A twins so far, it gives our twins' dynamic just a little push (over the edge, in Tom's case) (but I like that). the tension between them is palpable. & I am HERE for bisexual Bill. which reminds me, I am super curious about Georg & where he comes in! (again, that is)
god, Erin, this is AMAZING. I'm so glad I finally got my shit together to read this because I don't wanna miss a word of this story [all the heart eyes] < 3
Author's Response: Your reviews make me smile so hard, Mafalda, I hope you know that! I'm so so glad you're enjoying this, and I hoped that my own passion for dance and music and performance would come through, because it really is super important to me. Also, Bisexual Bill is... so much fun to write. A little weird to imagine because I usually only read and write a Bill who wouldn't touch a woman with a ten foot pole, but hey. Always room for something different right? ugh, you're the best. Thank you thank you thank you <3
Date: 06/02/20 12:50 pm Title: II.
OH. OOOOOH. I just looked at the fic tags & oooooooh. okay. okay.
I kind of love Tom? I am not 100% sure I _like_ him but he's definitely a character I want to have in about a billion more chapters. which is incidentally also how I feel about David. but maybe I'm just overly suspicious because I've read too many of Sandra's fics & now I always expect Bill to get hurt. xD
either way I am super excited for this. & your style is so lovely, it flows so well, it just picks me up right at the start of the chapter & doesn't lose me for a second < 3
Author's Response: Look, I can definitely see how Sandra's fits would condition you to think that Bill will always get hurt... and I mean, he's going to here too, but maybe not how you'd expect. I love love love Tom's character, too. He's so complex and a bit uncomfortable to write but that kind of presents a fun challenge, you know? Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews, they always make me smile, and I'm so so glad you're enjoying this! I hope it keeps entertaining youuuu!
Date: 06/02/20 12:39 pm Title: I.
__He’s talented and good-looking and everything just seems to fall into his lap. As fiercely as Bill loves him, he also wants to kill him. Slowly. Preferably painfully.__
true sibling thoughts
yes I am finally here. I've been excited about this story since you told me about it & just kept postponing actually reading it for no good reason. which is dumb because I love this already, exactly as I knew I would.
this is so FASCINATING. are we supposed to have mixed feelings about David? because I do, I'm not sure I like/trust him. & Bill with an injury but still determined to continue makes me love him fiercely already.
I am really really curious to find out what your plans are for this! [insert heart eyes emoji]
Author's Response: AH I'M SO EXCITED THAT YOU'RE READING THIS! :D I'm literally so proud of this so I hope you love it as much as I do. As for David, I don't know. I haven't finished writing this yet so I'm not entirely sure where I'm taking his character but I have a few ideas and it might be smart to be wary of him... maybe? Thank you sooooo muchhhhh! <3
Date: 05/25/20 06:41 pm Title: III.
As I said, I adore this. It is so beautifully written and I can't get enough of this. I really hope you'll keep posting cause I am addicted!
Author's Response: I very much will! New chapter today or maybe tomorrow!
Date: 05/21/20 01:18 am Title: III.
I love this so much, you have no idea!
Author's Response: Ahh, thank you <3rn
Date: 05/11/20 06:57 pm Title: II.
jesus christ i love how complex you've made the twins' relationship. like i am literally so torn up on the inside about it. And as for your question about Tom, as I've told you many times I am so fucking CONFLICTED. Cause on one hand I feel bad for him but on the other hand I am freaked out xD
Author's Response: Hahaha, freaked out was kind of the point! I'm glad you're enjoying! 💜
Date: 05/06/20 03:09 pm Title: I.
Really like this so far and intrigued to see where it goes :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, lovely! I'm glad you're liking it!
Date: 05/06/20 02:31 pm Title: I.
AS I SAID I HATE YOU AND THIS STORY DOES SO MUCH TO ME AND I ALSO LOVE YOU BUT FUCK YOU AND I AM SO GLAD YOU POSTED
Author's Response: AHH I hope you KEEP enjoying it! You're so lovely, too nice to me! Thank youuuu for your wonderful review and I love youuuuuu!
Date: 05/06/20 12:09 pm Title: I.
im intrigued. keep going!
Author's Response: Ahh, I'm so glad! I definitely will keep going. I have up to chapter 14 written so... we're getting there :D
Date: 05/06/20 11:47 am Title: I.
Hi lovely.
OMG, so I did read all the chapters you sent to me last week and completely forgot to tell you about it?!!? Mainly because I began reading at stupid o'clock in the morning whilst in bed and thought I'd tell you what I thought in the morning. BUT I completely forgot to!! I have SO many questions about what I've read so far, so I'll throw them at you in the chat and not mention or drop spoilers here! SORRY (!!!)
But I'm so glad to see that you've begun uploading this on THF, the fandom definitely needs to read this! This is an amazing concept you've used and I can't wait to see where you take it. I especially adore all of the technical terms you use when it comes to ballet, stuff I know absolutely nothing about, but as it IS written from Bill's perspective who is a ballet dancer, I think you've nailed the narrative type without making it too confusing to follow. If that makes sense? Basically, I fucking love the tone of your writing in this story, it's so refined? Blah, you write so beautifully. As ballet is a beautiful dance, your writing matches it perfectly and it all flows oh so seamlessly. I think I could learn a lot from you, which excites me more than anything else.
I can't wait to check in to see what other people think of this. Amazing work and I love you < 3
Author's Response: Ohhhh my goodness, this review is so lovely, thank you SO much! I'm very happy to hear that you've enjoyed what I've written so far! You're such an amazing writer yourself so it's so flattering to know that you like this! Thank you so so so so much, I can't even tell you what this means to me! You're so lovely and I love youuuu! <3