Date: 05/31/20 01:49 am Title: Control
Love love love this :)
Author's Response:
Shaddix: I'm so glad you like it! thank you.
rnStarling001: I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the review
Date: 05/30/20 10:11 pm Title: Control
I still think this Bdsm thing is crazy (generally a long step ...), poor Bill, at that rate he would end up with health problems and his visit to the urologist would be for life, poor bladder ... Tom definitely has to change and Bill must stay strong and fight, that he does not give up, sex may seem excellent but lose his freedom against his nature and his being as a person, force Bill, if you want Tom you must change his form of twisted and empty life.
Author's Response:
Shaddix: They are always very careful and Tom's priority is Bill's wellbeing. Bill is definitely a strong character, so he will be okay. They definitely have some growing to do together
rnStarling011: As mentioned Tom looks after Bill's wellbeing and there are things in place to make sure that stays that way. That said they do need to grow and change together and communicate. Bill is a very strong individual and while he may not have intially wanted this he came into their arragment of his own freewill. I hope you continue to read and enjoy at least some of it.
Date: 05/28/20 07:32 pm Title: Amore
Great chapter! Cannot wait for more!
I first was not sure about this story, but now it’s completely sucked me in. Love it!
Author's Response: Shaddix: I'm really glad you gave it a chance and are enjoying it! It means alot, thank you.rn
rnStarling: I am so glad you are enjoying it especially since you were unsure about it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05/27/20 12:08 pm Title: Amore
good chapter
Author's Response: Shaddix: Thank you!rn
rnStarling: I am glad you enjoyed it
Date: 05/26/20 10:06 pm Title: Amore
Poor Bill, he fell in love with a sexy and cute man but at the same time a man like Tom himself said "twisted", if Tom really feels something for Bill, he should be honest with himself and try to change and open a possibility to be able to be with Bill. Tom can change and leave that twisted world and be happy, come on Tom, you can ...
Author's Response: Shaddix: They definitely have a lot of talking to do. Hopefully they will work through things!
rnrnStarling: They both have alot of growth ahead of them but they'll figure it out. Thanks for the review
Date: 05/24/20 01:35 pm Title: Aftermath
Hot chapter! As always :)
I wish they just told each other that they want a real relationship, but of course it’s not easy or appropriate given their arrangement.
Great chapter. Cannot wait for more!
Author's Response:
Starling: I am glad you enjoyed it. I really wish they would talk but they are stubborn. Thanks for the review. Hope you continue to enjoy.
rnShaddix: I'm glad you liked it. I know, they both are very stubborn. They really should talk to each other more. Thanks so much for the review.
Date: 05/24/20 12:51 pm Title: Aftermath
💦💦💦💦
Author's Response:
Starling: I am glad you enjoyed it.
rnShaddix: Thanks so much!
Date: 05/24/20 04:43 am Title: Aftermath
good chapter
Author's Response:
Starling: I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review.
rnShaddix: Thanks so much. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 05/23/20 06:44 am Title: Panic
LISTENNNNNNNNN THAT last line!!!! Sheeeshhh
Author's Response: Shaddix: Haha that was all Starling! She has such good one liners! Thanks for the review.rn
rnStarling011: I am so glad you liked that line. At least I am assuming like. It was a last minute idea. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05/21/20 03:16 pm Title: Panic
This Bdsm thing is really hard, Tom has a horrible character when he gets angry, luckily he knew how to control himself ... Bill already fell in love and by now it seems that his article is the least of it ...
Author's Response: Shaddix: It definitely isn't an easy week and it is very intense for the both of them. They both have a lot of growing and understand to do. Thank you for the review.rn
rnStarling011: Tom has a bit of temper but he is working on control. I feel for poor Bill's heart. rnthanks for the review
Date: 05/21/20 01:41 pm Title: Panic
Bill and Tom are hot together and the question is: Can they actually start dating once the contract week is over?
I think Bill is a very lonely guy who just wants to be loved and taken care of. Tom could love and care for Bill, but the price for his love is submission. Bill cannot submit the way Tom wants him without losing himself. They would need to reach a compromise, like may be limit submission games to bedroom only. If of course Tom, being a control freak, is capable of that.
Tom does not seem as lonely as Bill, but has other issues. He thinks people who date him use him. As a result, cannot connect with them well. The problem is amplified by being a control freak. Bill can clearly love and care for Tom the way that Tom will not feel used, but communication is a key, and they have not been good at it yet.
All of these of course makes them a very interesting couple. I am looking forward to reading more about the evolution of their relationships.
Author's Response: Shaddix: Who knows! You will have to wait and see what happens once the contract is up. They both definitely have a lot of things to figure out and it won't be easy for either of them as they work past both of their issues. They definitely aren't good with communication. Thanks so much for your review, I look forward to seeing what you think as the week goes on. rn
rnStarlng011: Bill and Tom are very hot together. That question will be answered as the story moves on. I hope you will continue to enjoy it.
Date: 05/21/20 03:53 am Title: Panic
this was a really good chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks so much.rn
rnrnStarling011: I am glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 05/20/20 02:18 am Title: Panic
Misunderstanding is mutual of course, but it seems that Tom as a Dom should be responsible for achieving clear communication. He should try a bit harder to figure out Bill.
The chapter was both stressful and hot. I am very curious to learn how their date will go.
Author's Response: Shaddix: He definitely has a lot to figure out, both are just as stubborn as each other. I hope you enjoy what we have planned for these two. Thanks for your review.rn
rnStarling011: Both are definitely at fault and that is something they will have to figure out. I am glad you enjoyed the chapter and I hope you like the date.
Date: 05/19/20 05:13 am Title: Sweaters
this was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Shaddix: thanks so much!
rnStarling: I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05/17/20 11:22 pm Title: Sweaters
You can see a light on the horizon ... it will be that Bill manages to change Tom, even a little bit ... he is already getting into his heart and he is making him behave more kindly with him and Tom's brain is doing an excellent work scolding him for that twisted and loveless life he leads .. My poor Bill, he is falling in love !!! and of course, he is devastated by the end of the contract ...
Author's Response:
Shaddix: Bill is definitely getting into Tom's heart, even if Tom doesnt realise what's happening yet! I'm glad you love the story, I can't wait for you to see what happens
rnStarling: Tom is not as twisted and loveless as he seems and Bill is definitely getting to him. I am so glad you are enjoying the story. I hope you will continue to enjoy and tell us what you think. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05/17/20 03:57 pm Title: Sweaters
this is so good
Author's Response:
Shaddix: I'm glad you love it, thanks for all your support for our little story, it means the world.
rnStarling: Thanks for the review. I am glad you are enjoying our story.
Date: 05/17/20 12:20 pm Title: Advice
I’m so far behind in my reading, not feeling very well. Trying to stay awake to read this, I really like it but my concentration slips away. It deserves more than a sleepy nod. Keep up the great work 👍🏼
Date: 05/17/20 03:10 am Title: Sweaters
Good chapter
Author's Response:
Shaddix: Thank you! I am glad you liked it.
rnStarling: Thanks for the review. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 05/17/20 02:35 am Title: Sweaters
Love this :)
Author's Response:
Starling: I am so glad you liked it. Thanks
rnShaddix: Thanks so much!
Date: 05/16/20 09:34 pm Title: Sweaters
I now understand better where Tom comes from. It’s too bad that Bill and Tom are into each other, but don’t know that it’s mutual. Hopefully, the next day will turn better for both of them.
Great story! It’s really captured me.
Author's Response:
Starling: I am glad this cleared up some of Tom for you. Thanks for the review. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
rnShaddix: I'm glad you understand better, everything does get explained and Tom has reasons behind his actions. I'm really glad you are enjoying it though. thanks for the review