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Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/20 04:33 am Title: Tony

Ooooh , What an ass hole! I foresee a major discussion . Great read 🧐😃

Author's Response: Shaddix: Oh, he definitely was! This isn't the last we hear about Tony either, these boys have alot of discussions they need to have in the future.rn

rnStarling: Tony really was a massive asshole. At least he's not in Tom's life anymore. So glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: elixirsix Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/20 02:05 pm Title: Spanking

Excellent! Its so good reading the imperfections of the Dom, just like in real life -new partner, lots of checking in :)

Author's Response: Shaddix: I'm so glad you like it. It was important for us to touch on all aspects and not everything is perfect. Thanks so much for your review.rn

rnStarling: I wanted this to be very reflective of a real life relationship. I am glad it came across properly. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: arevalobren Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/20 02:43 am Title: Video

d84;

Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks for the review.rn

rnStarling: Thanks for the review

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/20 11:06 pm Title: Video

Well that was Interesting Tom should have went incognito , haha 😎

Author's Response: Shaddix: I actually considered that but I thought it would work out better like this. Sexy spy Tom does sound pretty good though.rn

rnStarling: om definitely should have been there all stealth like. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/20 10:30 am Title: Plug

ooh, this is an interesting turn of events! bilshido/tomshido/tibishido??? it all sounds good :)

Author's Response: Shaddix: it was thought about, but maybe someone else? Who knows. rn

rnStarling: Considered it briefly but decided probably not. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Hoe345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/20 04:51 pm Title: Balcony

🔥🔥

Author's Response:

Shaddix: Glad you liked it!

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Starling: This was fun to write. Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: Bbbiitch Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/20 08:30 am Title: Virgin

Looooove that you wrote about aftercare for doms and not only subs. Love everything with this. Amazing

Author's Response: Shaddix: It was important for us to get across all the aspects of this type of relationship, we wanted to make it as realistic as we could. Thanks so much.rn

rnStarling: As always I wanted that realism there. I am glad it came across properly. Thanks for the review

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/20 10:16 am Title: Alex

crammed a lot into that one, ha ha!

Author's Response:

Shaddix:  Defintely, a lot of information in this one! Thanks for the review

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Starling: This one was definitely a lot. Glad you seemed to enjoy it. 

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/20 12:39 pm Title: Sir

time for tom to be completely honest

Author's Response:

Shaddix: Definitely,  hopefully it will help their relationship. Thanks for the review

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Starling: It definitely is. I should make them stronger. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Reneekcole Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/20 10:10 pm Title: Virgin

This was THEE funniest chapter! Loved it!

Reviewer: Reneekcole Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/20 08:21 pm Title: Virgin

This was THEE funniest chapter! Loved it!

Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks! It was so much fun to write. rn

rnStarling: I am glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/20 09:24 am Title: Virgin

cant wait to see Tom's version :)

Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks for the review!rn

rnStarling: Thanks for the review

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/20 10:16 am Title: Finances

as always i love it !!!

Author's Response:

Shaddix: Thanks so much, I'm so happy you are still loving it

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Starling: Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/20 09:22 am Title: Quitting

Sweet, but not sure what to think.

Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks for the review:rn

rnStarling: I am glad you thought it was sweet. Thanks for the review

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/20 12:15 pm Title: Love

Y'all know I love this story and wish it could go on for a 100 chapters :) May I make just one suggestion? Perhaps find another way of describing Bill's skin. 'Milky white' is getting a bit repetitive.

Author's Response:

Shaddix:  I mean, it won't go on for 100 chapters but there is still plenty left. Thanks for your review!

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Starling: Problem with writing it so quickly stuff like that does get missed. We went through and fixed some of it hope it helps. Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: supagrl_123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/20 11:19 am Title: Love

Fabulous and hot as always.

Author's Response:

Shaddix: Thanks so much, I'm glad you are still loving and reading this!

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Starling: I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: Hoe345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/20 03:46 pm Title: Moving

Hahaha i love Andy

Author's Response: Shaddix: Right? He really is the best!rn

rnStarling: I enjoyed writing Andy. I am glad he came across like I intended

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/20 07:23 am Title: Moving

wow, Andy is something else!

Author's Response: Shaddix: I absolutely adore how Starling wrong Andy! He's amazing. rn

rnStarling: Andy was so fun to write. Thanks for the review

Reviewer: supagrl_123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/20 05:32 pm Title: Negotiations

Yesssss. Love this.

Author's Response:

Shaddix: Thanks so much!

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Starling: Glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/20 09:08 am Title: Negotiations

I loved how you reviewed their contract again. Anyone that has gotten this far in the story without being familiar with "The Life" needs to be reminded of all that is involved. That this is not a fairytale, many people live this way and are very happy. I hope you keep Bill and Tom together but, absolutely, it's your story. Well done!!!!!

Author's Response:

Shaddix: I think it helped to go over the contract again, since it had been so many chapters since it was spoken about. It was good to give it a fresh, plus things have changed for the boys now. Rules would be different. Thanks so much for the review. 

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Starling: I wanted this to be very true to the lifestyle and to read as true. The contract review was something that was important. I wanted to show how Tom interpreted these rules and show that Bill truly understood the rules this time. Thanks for the review. 

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