Date: 05/13/20 11:43 am Title: Bathtub
Good chapter
Author's Response: Shaddix: thanks so much!rn
rnStarling011: I am glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the update
Date: 05/12/20 10:05 pm Title: Bathtub
At least Bill enjoyed the night before. It's nice to see that Tom has a tender and playful side, he seemed to be just a total controller. Oh oh .... I hope Bill's expression "Tom" brings him not a bad punishment, just a sexy and cute one, after all they only have little time to finish that weird contract.
Author's Response: Shaddix: Bill definitely enjoyed it, he loves nothing more than a soak in the bath. Tom is a real sweetheart really and has a really playful side. You will see what happens! I'm glad you liked it. rn
rnStarling011: I loved writing a more tender and playful side of Tom. You will just have to read the update to find out. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05/12/20 09:49 pm Title: Bathtub
A very lovely evening they’ve been having. I hope that Tom will not ruin it because of one slip.
Great chapter! Cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: Shaddix: Yeah i think it was really important for them to have a close evening away from everything else. You will find out! thanks for the review.rn
rnStarling011: It is a good night and they are definitely enjoying each other's company. I am glad you liked. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05/11/20 07:39 pm Title: Advice
Okay, I really want to know what Tom did to his former subs. Like really really want to know.... LOVE the story so far and you write amazingly good!
Author's Response:
Starling: All will be explained in godo time. I am gld you love the story and hope you will continue to enjoy it. Thanks for the review.
rnShaddix: I promise everything will be explained! You will fully learn everything about Tom in future chapters. I'm so happy you love it, thank you so much for your sweet words.
Date: 05/11/20 02:08 am Title: Advice
Panicked Tom in Bill’s sweatpants made me laugh. What’s a scene! :)
I am glad that they both decided to try harder to adjust. It’s a two-way street.
Author's Response:
Starling: That was alot of fun to write so I am glad it made you laugh. We wanted to show that Tom was coming to care for Bill not just the sub he wanted. I am glad you liked this. Thanks for the review.
rnShaddix: I liked that scene too, it was really cute and definitely helped to build their relationship away from the contract. It definitely is a two way street and it won't be easy for them, but they both want to try. Thank you for the review!
Date: 05/10/20 05:32 pm Title: Advice
Poor Bill, independence and control is something difficult to give up or lose, I understand very well, and as for the thong, I am a woman and that garment is horrible to wear for more than 1 hr. Gus is a good friend. Thank you and I read to you on Tuesday.
Author's Response:
Starling: Independence and control are very hard to give up but sometimes worth it. Thongs are awful but they are hot. I loved writing Gus in this scene. Thanks for the review.
rnShaddix: Bill is definitely a very independant character. Gustav is a good friend to Bill and definitely can talk some sense into him. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/10/20 05:38 am Title: Advice
Excited for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Starling011: I am glad you enjoyed. I hope you enjoy the updates.
rnShaddix: I'm glad you are enjoying it! Hope you like the next chapter
Date: 05/10/20 02:28 am Title: Advice
This is a good chapter, I like the sweet ending
Author's Response:
Starling011: I am glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for the review.
rnShaddix: Thanks so much for your review. I'm glad you liked it
Author's Response:
Starling011: I am glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for the review.
rnShaddix: Thanks so much for your review. I'm glad you liked it
Date: 05/06/20 09:40 pm Title: Handcuffs
shit that was hot... I have to sleep because I'm literally dying. my next review will be longer, but fuck, this was hot. poor bill < 3
Author's Response: Shaddix: hahaha thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. Poor Bill secretly liked it because he is a hory little shit. rn
rnStarling011: I am so glad you liked it. Your reviews don't have to be long and I would definitely prefer you sleep. Thanks for the review babe.
Date: 05/06/20 05:12 pm Title: Handcuffs
I liked everything to the point when Tom gagged Bill, because he called Tom “Tom” in throes of passion. I guess I just don’t get BDMS relationships. Tom treats Bill as an object and everything in me screams against it.
I hope this “affair” will truly end after the week is over. Bill is beautiful in his independence and spontaneity, but Tom only wants to break that.
I wonder what Tom did to his last Sub. I hope it’ll be explained.
Author's Response: Shaddix: Thank you for your review. Everything will be explained and Tom isn't actually a bad person in this fic. I hope we manage to make it clearer in the upcoming chapters why Tom is like he is. rn
rnStarling011: thanks for the read and review. Tom doesn't want to ruin Bill's personality he wants to temper it a little. I am sorry it bothers you. Everything will be explained. I hope you will continue to read
Date: 05/06/20 03:25 pm Title: Handcuffs
this was a really good/hot chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Shaddix: I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you.rn
rnStarling011: I am glad you enjoyed. thanks for the review.
Date: 05/06/20 12:58 pm Title: Handcuffs
Good chapter
Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks so much!rn
rnStarling011: thanks for the review
Date: 05/06/20 12:46 pm Title: Handcuffs
You’re too beautiful to be real. Don’t disappear with the sunrise,” that killed me 😭d84; .. lovely chapter!!
Author's Response: Shaddix: That genius line is all down to Starling! I absolutely died when she wrote that, it's one of my favourite lines too. I'm so glad you liked it.rn
rnStarling011: I am glad you liked it. That was one of my favorite lines to write
Date: 05/05/20 08:09 pm Title: Handcuffs
Ahhh! Yes! Yes! Yes! Everything yes!
Great chapter
Author's Response: Shaddix: Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it. rn
rnStarling011: I am glad you enjoyed it so much. thanks for the review
Date: 05/03/20 11:44 am Title: Balcony
this was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Starling: Thanks for the review. I am glad you enjoyed it. I hope you like the new chapter
rnShaddix: thank you for the review, i'm glad you are enjoying it
Date: 05/03/20 09:46 am Title: Balcony
Good chapter
Author's Response:
Starling: Thanks for the review. I am so glad you liked it.
rnShaddix: thank you so much!
Date: 05/02/20 11:36 pm Title: Balcony
Tom is being quite patient with Bill, I hope he continues like this, after all, Bill I think he can end that contract and send his article to fly, always looking out for his integrity and satisfaction.
Author's Response:
Starling: I wanted to show he is trying to make up for his behavior the other day. He really is a decent guy. Thanks for the review. I hope you continue to read and enjoy.
rnShaddix:Tom is actually a very patient person and is very understanding. Bill is just nervous because he has never experienced anything like this before so it is all new to him. Thank you for your review. I'm glad you like it
Date: 05/02/20 10:18 pm Title: Balcony
I love what they did on the balcony. Very romantic and at the same time not at all. Very curious what will happen next.
Author's Response:
Starling:I wanted to show Tom was able to be romantic. He wants Bill comfortable. I am glad it came across alright. Enjoy the next chapter.
rnShaddix: Tom does have a romantic side. He wants Bill to be comfortable and happy whilst he is staying there. I'm glad you loved it! I hope you like the next chapter
Date: 05/02/20 10:18 pm Title: Balcony
It's getting intense 👀👀.. next chapter is gonna get juice.!
Author's Response:
Starling:I loved building this intensity. I am so glad you like it. Thanks for the review.
rnShaddix:It really does get juicy next chapter! I hope you liked it! Thank you so much for your review
Date: 05/02/20 07:58 pm Title: Balcony
Poor Bill, so nervous and small. Tom is so persistent. I almost feel bad for Bill that he wants to fuck him right away. Can't wait for more < 3
Author's Response:
Starling: Yeah Shaddix's Bill is fabulous. I love it. Tom is a bit pushy yes but he is working in a very small time frame. I am so happy you liked it. Enjoy your smut in the next chapter.
rnShaddix: Bill was such an adorable thing to write, I fell in love with his character. Tom definitely is persistant, but he only has a week to show Bill as much as he can so he is aware they are on a limited time schedule. I'm glad you loved it! I hope you like the next chapter! < 3