Date: 04/22/20 04:30 pm Title: Bad omen
this was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! The next chapter is up!
Date: 04/22/20 05:18 am Title: Bad omen
Yes, you definitely get cheesecake. I freaking LOVE this story. Like, you have no idea. If I lived closer, I'd spend all day in the kitchen baking cheesecake for you to bribe you to keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank youuuuuuu Erin. You might need to bake more of that, I posted a new one heheheh!
Date: 04/20/20 11:14 pm Title: Bad omen
Holy crap! I need the next one. Honey that was amazing. I feel for all these characters. And thank you Georg for being voice of reason. Jeez, Tom was gonna let his men murder all those people. Of course now we need to see him get all sorted out because right now, he needs some chill time.
So good my love keep it up
Author's Response: Awww hey there! Thanks so much for those comments, they really mean a lot! Yess Georg turned out good in this one.
Date: 04/20/20 11:02 pm Title: Born of fire
Okay this Georg and Tom bromance is freaking adorable. You know I kinda have a soft spot for Torg, so seeing this cute little like bros that love each other connection, ah it makes me happy lol. However I am very happy they didn’t just blow the Aressians up in their sleep, there’s some respect there.
Once again, I am so happy with this story and just seeing how great it’s going, yay! Super proud. Love it
Date: 04/20/20 10:53 pm Title: Besieged
Okay, I have one word to describe this: unbelievable. My heart kinda hurts for all these characters. This is an unsure time and yet I kinda also love that we have this warrior Tom coming in. Born of fire. Sheesh. It’s great and thank you so much for the shout out! You know I love this plot and I am so excited to see how you take it because I am in awe.
10/10 love it d84;a039;
Date: 04/20/20 04:06 pm Title: Bad omen
Its great! I cant wait for the next to happen. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! There's another one up now!
Date: 04/20/20 01:56 pm Title: Bad omen
Good chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! The next one is up!
Date: 04/20/20 01:54 pm Title: Bad omen
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! There is more to read now!
Date: 04/17/20 03:33 pm Title: Born of fire
Damn, Ari. This Tom just makes me shiver, and yet I can't wait to see more of him. I want it ALL. All of it.
Also did I tell you how brilliant I think the summary is? I think I did, but I'm gonna tell you again.
So much different and so much alike, the two men will come to know that even a King's crown can become a crown of thorns.
SHIVER! ALL OVER!
I love this and I love YOU!
Author's Response: I spend so much time writing summaries that this is such a beautiful compliment, you can't imagine. Thank you so much for all your help with this story! Love you too < 3
Date: 04/17/20 05:46 am Title: Born of fire
Can’t wait to see where this is going, really liking it so far!
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! I'm glad this is keeping you company in quarantine!
Date: 04/17/20 05:35 am Title: Besieged
Love this idea! But can’t talk now, I need to go to the next one!
Date: 04/16/20 08:08 pm Title: Born of fire
I truly enjoy the way you write this one. Thomas seem to be the kind of character you can't tell if you can trust or not. I sense there will be a lot of complications before we will have enough information to have an actual opinion of him.
Lovely work, I look forward to more
Author's Response: Your reviews are always so nice and encouraging! Thank you so much! There is more up now!
Date: 04/15/20 01:46 pm Title: Born of fire
Good chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 04/13/20 03:16 pm Title: Born of fire
I looove the language in this, takes my breath away. I mean, I love all about it but especially that!
Author's Response: Ah ain't it nice to have fellow nerds around? Thank you so much!!
Date: 04/13/20 01:07 pm Title: Born of fire
Ugh, Ari. I love this. I'm hooked. More please. Like, now? I'll trade it for cheesecake?
Author's Response: Well I posted now, where is my cheesecake? Hehehe, thank you so much!
Date: 04/10/20 04:55 pm Title: Besieged
this was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! There's more to read now!
Date: 04/06/20 03:55 pm Title: Besieged
😍😱
Author's Response: Thanks for that sweet review! There's more now!
Date: 04/06/20 03:29 pm Title: Besieged
I’m very intrigued to see where this goes :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hope you enjoy the next one! It's up now!
Date: 04/06/20 01:30 pm Title: Besieged
Sounds very promising!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! You can check out the next chapter now!
Date: 04/06/20 12:28 pm Title: Besieged
I haven't been a member here in many years, coming back I decided I would read the first story I saw on the recent page when I had some time off work, must say I'm not disappointed in my choice!this is really interesting and I am already intruged. Hope to see you update soon!
and a strange question perhaps but since I haven't been on the page in years - do you have any favorite writers or stories you would reccommend?
Author's Response: That review was just so moving! Thanks so much! I'm glad I made you stick around and reading your comments is delightful. There's a lot of nice material on the site, I'll make sure to send a message soon with some suggestions!