Date: 10/08/14 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is just HYSTERICAL!!!! You should totally continue! Please! Please! Please!
Date: 10/08/14 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
" ' I'm glad we're not fighting anymore,' she said, scaring herself with her sudden ability to spell and punctuate things correctly. " Definitely my favorite line!! And I agree with all the stuff here. I can't write very well myself, but I know that and I don't pretend I can.
Date: 12/05/11 04:43 am Title: Chapter 1
""BOOBS, CHICKS, SEX, MY DICK, ETC," Tom screamed."
Omg c r y i n g.
Date: 07/18/11 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
that was quite entertaining:)
Date: 06/18/11 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
i'm late to this but it really made me laugh.
i made some of these mistakes when starting out so it's like i'm laughing at myself.
Date: 03/07/11 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
This fic has made my life complete, and for some reason I can't stop laughing at the fact it's got a watersports warning on it
Date: 12/11/10 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
"BOOBS, CHICKS, SEX, MY DICK, ETC," Tom screamed.
this line pretty much killed me.
Date: 09/28/10 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just stumbled upon this fic, and I think it's hularious!
Way to show by example, what not to do in a fic ;D
Date: 08/25/10 12:19 am Title: Chapter 2
OMG BEST FIC EVAR
Date: 08/25/10 12:19 am Title: Chapter 1
"BOOBS, CHICKS, SEX, MY DICK, ETC," Tom screamed.
I LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING U GUIZE
Date: 07/24/10 10:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Hahahahaha!! It's so true! I was dying of laughter reading this xD "BOOBS, CHICKS, SEX, MY DICK, ETC," Tom screamed." EPIC!!
Date: 07/18/10 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
Is there going to be more?
Date: 07/10/10 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
This site has the most awesome mods ever XD The second chapter just nailed it LOL.
If this isn't in the Writing Guide, please put this up. I don't want anymore badly-written fics to ever show up. It kills me inside. I think it kills everyone inside.
Date: 07/10/10 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've read this before, but it's still awesome. XD However, I think one giant picture of a random scene girl would have made a hilarious banner. :P
Date: 06/20/10 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL!! haha this is so true! You don't know how many het stories that I've read that are just like this! So annoying
Date: 06/12/10 12:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Freakin' amazing. I don't know why i didn't read this sooner. XD
Date: 06/06/10 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
lol that was great i was on the floor i was laughing so hard :D
Date: 04/13/10 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ahahaha, so true. I completely agree. I've seen so many "normal, average, American girl" fics. You, mein Freund, have managed to put in writing what so many of our souls have been wanting to yell out for AGES. Thank you for putting up this, ahem, completely spot-on post. Or handy-guide. Point is, Kudos for pin-pointing our faults. That was short and sweet, yeah? xD
Date: 03/22/10 12:38 am Title: Chapter 2
Awesome. You guys are hilarious.