Date: 03/26/08 11:29 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh yes! YES! You hit me like no other! That went straight to the heart! Man, I need a cold shower! AAAAHHH! YEEEEAH!
Date: 03/26/08 11:25 am Title: Chapter 2
LOL. The slash version makes everyone happy now.
Date: 03/26/08 11:20 am Title: Chapter 2
omg... I lyk ttly luv yer fic. Plsss updat rght now lyk. NOW...
wat wil happen next lyk? omg I can't wait..
oh btw I luv it and I'mma give yo a ten xD LIKE ME! LIKE ME! I AM SOOO COOL "insert a bunch of hearts and nonsense here"
"Oh, and no constructive criticism what so ever"
Date: 03/26/08 10:54 am Title: Chapter 1
just kind of noticed in a lot of fics:
'THEN' is used when it should be 'THAN'.
I probably should just shut up since I'm just a mere reader. heheh -_-'
Date: 03/26/08 10:48 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a meaningfull story (not x)
Date: 03/26/08 10:43 am Title: Chapter 1
oh you rock so very hard :)
My favorite was the sudden appearance of correct grammar :)
*also hopes the lesson is learned*
Date: 03/26/08 10:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Hahaha, I loved this xD Too many hopefull fangirls out there, I'd have to say! Nothing wrong with dreaming, though! But dreaming with bad writing skills and grammar is a big no-no.
Date: 03/26/08 10:39 am Title: Chapter 1
^___________^
I LOVE YOU!
Date: 03/26/08 10:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Eep.. i hope i dont write like this!
point taken though.. some i've read are actually like this =)
xD
Date: 03/26/08 10:34 am Title: Chapter 1
wow very very harsh on some storys coz some do jus happen by miricleslol but its kl i supose
Date: 03/26/08 10:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I.. uh.. Point taken :)
Date: 03/26/08 10:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Can they end up doing it on a Madras?
Date: 03/26/08 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooooh... I seee.. Basically the message here is that Georg is a loser?!
Nah, I've learnt my lesson, ta =)