Date: 11/04/24 10:26 am Title: Anything?
Sorry for my bad English but I speak Spanish :( but i love this story so much. Oficial Bill is soooo sexy 🫦 and Tom whoa he is so yummy. Thank you so much for share your art 🫂 I was looking to something to read and this story have Tom bottom which is one of my fav genre d84;a039;
Date: 04/01/23 11:46 pm Title: Anything?
OMG - Tom's arc from protesting, to accepting, to begging...... damn! Definitely hot.
Date: 05/19/21 10:27 am Title: Anything?
Okay, I'm literally screaming. I shouldn't have been reading this while on online school cause I'm paranoid and I had to double check that no one could see what I was reading lol
When Bill told Tom to get on his knees, I fucking screamed. I was expecting it but it shocked me anyway
And Tom thinking he wasn't gay. Sure, he isn't. He still wanted to be fucked, tho. Like... That doesn't make you gay, but also doesn't make you straight lol
Let me tell you that I love the way you write and I'm definitely reading more of this series cause holy shit. It's fucking amazing. And I expect Tom to "steal" something just to tease Bill. Sorry not sorry
That's all. I'm going to read the next part of this now
Date: 04/08/20 11:48 pm Title: Anything?
Yeah, Officer Bill did a great job!
Date: 03/19/20 04:06 pm Title: Anything?
I think this deserves a sequel. Tom stealing something small just to provoke Bill into doing it again. He could be all conflicted about it. Comes in a few times always looks to steal something but walks out with nothing until he actually does it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! Don't worry, there will be a sequel! In fact, this is quite possibly going to be turned into a series, so there will be plenty more Officer Bill soon! The next one should be out next week!
Date: 03/11/20 07:15 pm Title: Anything?
this was a really good story!!
you should do a sequel to this!!
Author's Response: Haha thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 03/11/20 04:43 pm Title: Anything?
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Author's Response: < 3
Date: 03/11/20 01:12 pm Title: Anything?
Baaaaabe! Thanks for being so sweet in your story notes < 3 I love love love this story so fucking much! I'm so proud of you and how much you've grown! < 3
Author's Response: You are more than welcome my love! None of this would be possible if it wasn’t for you. < 3
Date: 03/11/20 11:01 am Title: Anything?
So glad I logged in today, because YASSSS!!! I love an obvious age gap between these two given that they're twins irl, especially when there's power roles so heavily involved in the story as well. I absolutely adored the way you portrayed young Tom and officer Bill, you did so good on their characterisations and how they acted together. There was a perfect contrast between the two, you really nailed it. I would love to read more of your work!
Author's Response: Awh thank you! That means so much! I worked really hard on this story, it was my absolute baby! I’m so glad you enjoyed it!