Reviews For Domain of Mortia
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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/23 03:36 am Title: Marked

Please update this story! Edit

Reviewer: Chiro Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/21 03:14 am Title: Coronation

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Reviewer: isab2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/21 03:16 pm Title: Coronation

What nerves !!! At least Bill hasn't vomited on someone yet, the vase doesn't count. Waiting for update

Reviewer: TokioHotelLover483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/21 04:57 pm Title: Coronation

I'm so happy to see this updated again! In my opinion, your work is a lot better when you write on your own. Can't wait to read the rest!

Reviewer: AryaStark Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/21 04:42 pm Title: Coronation

Yay, I was sooo happy after seeing the update! Thank you for returning to this Story. I just love the whole concept

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/20 08:24 pm Title: Morning

please update this soon!

Author's Response:

Update finally up. I hope you enjoy. 

Reviewer: inlovewithTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/20 09:16 am Title: Morning

Why do I feel like Georg is going to cause more problems in the future. Also Tom is so sweet and I love his character so far. He could’ve been a lot worse growing up hiding himself like that so I’m glad he’s not a complete asshole. He would’ve had a reason anyways since he was so isolated .

Author's Response:

Georg definitely has a role to play. Tom is very sweet in this one. I truly enjoyed his character. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the new chapter. 

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/20 03:36 am Title: Morning

This was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/20 09:59 am Title: Morning

I guess it is not a coincidence that Bill’s hand fits the shape of Tom’s mark. I am intrigued about what this means. I am also intrigued by why Bill wears gloves.

Great chapter! Can it wait for more!

Author's Response:

All secrets will be revealed in time. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it. Enjoy the new chapter. 

Reviewer: isab2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/20 09:19 am Title: Morning

Continue your fight for your health! I am happy that Bill had no problems with Tom's mark on his face and did not become an obstacle in his marriage. The little princess will now be alone without Bill and with some evil brothers, hopefully her father will take better care of her. Thank you!!

Author's Response:

I am always working on my health but it is just so difficult sometimes. I enjoyed writing the marriage and Bill's reaction to the mark. I am glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/20 11:36 pm Title: Kiss

this was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the update. 

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/20 07:24 am Title: Kiss

Very lovely chapter!

Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the update. 

Reviewer: isab2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/20 10:07 pm Title: Kiss

From shy virgin to sex machine .... very good script. It was tender and quite sexy, excellent !!!. Likewise, stay safe until the next week.

Author's Response:

i am glad you liked that line. It was one of my favorites. thanks for the well wishes and the review. Enjoy the update. 

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/20 11:21 am Title: Kiss

i wish bill would take off the gloves but you have your reasons :)

Author's Response:

Bill's gloves are one for a reason. Stick around. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the update. 

Reviewer: tomssweetheart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/08/20 05:33 pm Title: Kiss

YESSSS THIS WAS SO HOT < 3

Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked it. I had so much fun writing this. Thank you for the beta. 

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/20 11:58 am Title: Champagne

loving it

Author's Response:

Yay I am so glad. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/20 05:04 pm Title: Champagne

this was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: tomssweetheart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/02/20 02:59 pm Title: Champagne

I love when they get all hot and bothered from just one kiss. Just wait until you get naked, boys. This is nothing. I love this so much < 3

Author's Response:

They are so lusty for each other. I enjoyed writing it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: tomssweetheart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/02/20 02:56 pm Title: Dance

Ahw their first kiss was so fucking sweet, God that killed me. I love this story so much < 3

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it. I wanted it to be sweet and so amazing after everyone had waited so long. I am so glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for the review babe.

Reviewer: isab2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/20 10:19 am Title: Champagne

Georg is looking to provoke a war between nations ... Bill and Tom finally managed to get married and without major inconveniences. Tom's brand took second place. Poor spouses, both under scrutiny as to whether they knew how to do it on their wedding night ... ji, ji ...

Author's Response:

Georg is definitely a nasty character. I loved the wedding scene it was super fun and I am very happy with how it turned out. It was also really fun to write all of the people trying give him advice. I enjoy embarrassing them what can I say.

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