Reviews For Domain of Mortia
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Reviewer: isab2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/20 02:40 pm Title: Marked

Bill's gloves left me with doubts? The story is original, Tom's brand? I would love to see it, will it be as terrifying as they describe it? I go to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Doubts? Such as? Let me know in the next review. i am glad my story strikes you as original. I try to bring something unique to every story I add on here. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the update.

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/20 07:58 pm Title: Uncovered

i am medically quarantined due to severe diabetes. i have been since 15 March. these wonderful stories are keeping me from having cabin fever. this one is great! thank you.

Author's Response:

Icky. I hate quarantine and I am sorry that you are in the high risk group. That is so awful. I am glad my stories along with others helps. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the update.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/20 08:03 am Title: History

this was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Enjoy the new chapter.

Reviewer: tomssweetheart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/26/20 09:59 pm Title: History

This history intrigues me so bad. I love this story, I am completely hooked on it. Even though I beta read and I've read way more, I still enjoy going back and rereading a chapter. Fuck, I love it so much, these boys are so precious! < 3

Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoy it and the history. I try not to make history boring but I do sometimes worry that a chapter like this is going to read like a dull class. I am glad you are so hooked and still review that is awesome to me. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the update.

Reviewer: AryaStark Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/20 09:09 pm Title: Marked

It really lightens my mood when I see a new update popping up^^

I like Bill and Tom together. Sure it's unconventional that two strangers suddenly click that well especially when facing arranged marriage. Good for them though! I wonder, if Bill might actually be closer to Death than it seems. They both hate that Tom wears the mask, one of them doesn't show his hands, while the other has a distingtive feature on one of them. I don't know, maybe my brain just runs wild xD Annnyyywaayyy I love your story and will be keeping up with the updates.

Stay healthy and motivated despite those strange times.

Author's Response:

I am really glad. I get that way when I get a notice about a review.

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I wanted this to be unconventional. I just hope it's not unrealistic. I wanted both men to accept the arranged marriage with grace befitting their stations. Neither one was forced into this. As for all the guesses about Bill and Death you're just going to have to wait and see. No spoilers. Thank you for the love. Enjoy the new chapter.

rn

I am definitely trying but I am getting a bit stir crazy and I miss working. Weird I know but I liked my job. You stay healthy and safe as well.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/20 04:39 am Title: Uncovered

this was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the new chapter.

Reviewer: tomssweetheart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/19/20 06:34 pm Title: Uncovered

I LOVE THIS STORY. Those boys are sooooo made for each other, istg! The whole Death concept really has me so intrigued, I keep finding myself getting more curious to where this is going. Also, Bill teasing Tom? LOVE IT, LIVE FOR IT. GIMME MORE PRETTY PLEASE.

Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoy it especially not liking period pieces before. I have never really written anything like this but I find I am having a ball. Bill teasing Tom is something I adore so I try to incoporate it into my stories. More coming up soon. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Dolly kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/20 10:15 am Title: Marked

Ok you caught me , simply I loved it
, waiting for your update!

Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. The new chapter is going to be posted right after this.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/20 11:12 pm Title: Marked

this sounds like a really good story!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoy it. Thanks for the review. The next chapter will be up soon.

Reviewer: AryaStark Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/20 08:02 pm Title: Marked

Hi there,

this is so interesting and something new! You realy manage to keep up a mysterious atmosphere, which has so much potential. I can't wait to read chapter 2!

Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked it. I was idly scrolling pinterest and came across a post about death and it got the wheels spinning. I am glad the atmosphere translated. Chapter two will be up soon. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: tomssweetheart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/10/20 02:10 pm Title: Marked

I have never had any interest in period pieces and when you asked me to beta this, I was a little apprehensive, but you completely blew my mind and now I'm hooked. I fucking love this story, I love me some gay prince Tom and Bill is really fucking sweet. I can't wait to read more! < 3

Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it especially not typically being into period pieces. Makes me super happy. I will be working on more soon. Thanks for the review.

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