Date: 05/02/20 12:27 am Title: Champagne
Why are Georg and Gustav so nasty?
I want to try that cake!
Author's Response:
Yeah the Gs were interesting to write in this verse. I am weirdly in love with them but I also want to strangle them. That cake was inpsired by a red velvet cake I was actually eating at the time and was so good. I am glad it translated. Thank you for reviewing. Enjoy the new update.
Date: 04/27/20 02:19 pm Title: Dance
I’ve started reading this story today and really like it so far. Cannot wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the update.
Date: 04/24/20 07:52 pm Title: Dance
So here goes part two^^
I knew it! I knew Bill wouldn't see any issue xD All in all the wedding seemed very well thougth out and written, so kudos to you! I liked you mentioning Georg trying to get this daughter drunk, bad idea..tse very bad idea. I'm like her, I can drink a lot and so far managed to drink a few guys under the table xD I'm concerned what a drunk mean prince could manage to do though.
Well, Toms mom was great and his dad even greater. The ebarrassing speech.....good on Tom for kinda running away^^ Completely understandable.
I sadly heard about the weirdos in the US not getting what's going on. Sadly it doesn't surprise due to the organge man in office. Lockdown in germany is over, so I have to go to work and even a job interview, with masks and quite some distance between me and the other people.... Crazy times for sure and even crazier people. Stay safe as well and keep your loved ones out of danger the best you can!
Author's Response:
I am so glad you enjoyed it. That was so much fun to write. The thing with Georg is definitely very interesting. I wanted to show that his dad was trying to be supportive but was just being embarassing.
rnThe whole thing in the US is insane. The beaches were open for a day and people violated the guidelines enough they were closed in an hour. The county is now under a mandatory mask guidleline so baby steps. Thanks for your well wishes and review. Enjoy the update.
Date: 04/24/20 07:34 pm Title: Wedding
Hi there, sorry for the late review, I'll write one fo each chapter, don't worry ;)
So, where do I begin? You manage to describe this world perfectly. It feels real and almost touchable^^
The music was a good idea as well,and hell I hated you for that cliffhanger. Although I didn't think Bill would scream and run away with his dad xD If I'd be talented regarding photoshop I'd try to do an artwork with the mark on Toms face or his mask, but Ijust don't have the skills....
Anyway, I really enjoyed reading as always. You never dissapoint ;)
Author's Response:
Don't worry about it. I am happy for every person that reviews even if only once so thanks. I am glad you think my world is real. I was afraid Mortia would be too far removed to be realistic. If you want to make his mask or face feel free. tomssweetheart did a beautiful banner and managed to block out Tom's face and I love it but I am always up for fan artwork. I liked the music. That was my girlfriend's idea and she picked the music. She helps me with alot of ideas. She came up with the name of the story actually. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the update.
Date: 04/24/20 02:31 am Title: Dance
this was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review. Enjoy the update.
Date: 04/23/20 11:42 pm Title: Dance
I hope both are well, the covid-19 is serious, and although the economy goes to the bottom, the lives of our loved ones are priceless. Hopefully the numbers of infected will decrease and they will soon find a therapy for recovery while a vaccine is on the way. It's time to live with this virus ... I'm happy for Tom, Bill wasn't scared of the scar and he's happy for his wedding. Thank you!!! and to continue resisting.
Author's Response:
I agree with all of that. I am really hoping this all blows over soon. I loved the scene with the mask and everything. I hope you will continue to enjoy the story. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the update.
Date: 04/21/20 08:42 am Title: Wedding
this was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 04/17/20 11:16 am Title: Wedding
Noooooooo ....... Why????? The mask was removed and ??? ....... One week???? the wait will be very long ...... Chapter is appreciated. PS: I heard both songs and they were perfect, I could like that music.
Author's Response:
I am glad to have caused you to want read the next chapter. I am glad you enjoyed the music. Enjoy the new chapter thanks for the review.
Date: 04/17/20 02:22 am Title: Marked
I love it. I love their vows. I can't wait. I want to know what will be Bill's reaction when he finally see Tom's face.
Author's Response:
I am so glad you liked it. Those vows took forever. Bill's reaction was fun to write. I hope you will enjoy reading it. Thanks for the review. enjoy the update.
Date: 04/16/20 10:50 pm Title: Wedding
This wedding ceremony had me so intrigued! I really love the entire concept of the story and I can't wait for you to write more. I'm so in love with Prince Tom, I'm not even one bit ashamed. It's soooo good! Now gimme that kiss and let's get those boys up to an empty bedroom! < 3
Author's Response:
I am so glad you liked the wedding. I had alot of fun writing that and pulled from alot of different sources. Tom was fun to write in this story. I wanted him to be a very deliberate character. Fun loving but also a little sad and repressed. Enjoy the update babe. Thanks for the beta.
Date: 04/15/20 08:42 pm Title: Nathalie
Hi!
haha I'm happy you neglected the dishes :P
despite normaly having a soft spot for the G's, I like the way you are taking them. Also the little hints that there's a reason for them to be how they are. Losing a parent is hard and violence often reflects. I also adore Nathalie and hope she gets the chance to maybe stick around more, especially after hearing that Bill won't stay.
I'm excited to see how the wedding plays out and hell...death. There's sth to him that I'm eager to get to know more about. And it seems I'm not alone xD I'm sure this fic will be one hell of a ride ^^
Tomssweetheart, I still envy you! You guys work well together. And happy birthday, even though I'm a little late. I hope you had a great day despite all the stuff going on currently.
Can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Neglecting the dishes is a big no no in my house but I did it anyway and got the dishes done after all. I thought about making the G's alll nice and such but there was a reason behind my decision to make them the bad guys for the time being. Losing a parent is very hard. I was lucky to have an amazing support system when I lost my mom. I loved writing Nathalie as absolutely devoted to her big brother. The wedding is written and soon to be posted. I wanted it to be less of a white wedding and more fitting for this story so i did about four hours of research to get the right aesthetic even included links to the music I used to get into the right mindset. Death will be a bit more mysterious for a while.I am so grateful for tomssweetheart and all the hard work she puts into my writing. I will pass on the birthday wishes. Enjoy the update.
Date: 04/10/20 02:52 pm Title: Nathalie
this was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the update.
Date: 04/09/20 09:31 pm Title: Nathalie
That death is chilling ... he was crossing his fingers to see if only for his wedding death took away his mark ..... but the situation was on the other hand, hee hee hee. Please update me, ask me how Bill will react that night when he finally sees that brand ... Thank you!!!
Author's Response:
Death is very chilling. I enjoy writing him and this story I try ro make him as close to death as I can manage which is hard because I've never had a conversation with death. You'll have to read and see what happens in the future. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the update
Date: 04/09/20 06:53 pm Title: Nathalie
Goddamnit, this story chills me to the bone, warms my entire core, freaks me the fuck out and makes me squeal in delight. I fucking love this so much. Also, thank you so much for giving me a shout out in both stories! < 3
Author's Response:
I am so glad this story manages all of those things. It is super fun to write and does the same thing to me. You are so welcome love and you deserve all the love and shouts. Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/03/20 03:58 pm Title: Family
Thank you for the update! I have to admit that This story quickly became my favorite at the current moment ^^
I don't think the turn of events is urealistic, uncommon for sure, but also understandable for both. Bill can escape his brothers, marry into a good status and gets a kind husband, while Tom gets a good looking, smart male companion. Win-Win I would say. Although after meeting Georg, I doubt things go smoothly when both become kings. I was excited to meet the G's and actually hadn't expected them to be like this. I'm curious to see how things go. I hope he doesn't pull a Joeffrey-stunt during the wedding. Good thing Tom and he have the same status though.
I also haven't expected spoilers and stay excited as to how things will go down.
I look forward to the next update and actually envy your beta a little, since she gets to read everything quicker xD
Don't let yourself be pulled down by the whole Corona crisis, it's truly hard. I'm home too and can't work and actually feel a little useless currently, but I always tell myself it will go down eventually. Stay healthy and safe!
Author's Response:
I am so happy to hear that. Makes me feel good about neglecting the dishes to update. I am glad their relationship reads as realistic. I had a long arguement with myself over the G's but this was the way the story was going to go. I expected flames and am really grateful. Everyone hates them and not me.
rnI am glad you are excited. I will be updating regulary. I have alot of fun with this story. tomssweetheart is awesome. I told her you envy her and she laughed and kinda giggled so you made her happy too.
rnThe Corona thing is awful for the same reason. I love my job and am sad that I'm not going in. I am going crazy in my house all. You would think it would be cleaner but I think it is worse. More than that I am buying groceries to cook with and then it comes time to cook and its like don't feel like it and I have crackers instead. You as well.
rnThank you for the review. Enjoy the update.
Date: 04/03/20 11:44 am Title: Family
Bill's brothers are bad especially Georg .... No wonder Bill's hand is hurt more than usual ... Tom was quite patient with his brother-in-law Georg, that offense he did was unforgivable, considering that he is in the kingdom of Mortia, but that nothing tarnishes his wedding. Or yes, to take great care to beat that virus ...
Author's Response:
Yeah they were interesting to write. I had spent alot of time thinking that over. Seemed like the best course of action. I wanted to show that Tom will make a good king because he doesn't lose his temper easily. He knows there are more important things then his pride. Take care. I am staying home even though it is driving me crazy. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the new update
Date: 04/03/20 05:53 am Title: Family
this was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
I do not like bills older brothers
Author's Response:
I am so glad you enjoyed it. I hated writing them but also enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the update.
Date: 04/02/20 10:22 pm Title: Family
Well, Georg is a royal asshole. I would like to use him as a punching bag for a good couple of hours. But holy hell, am I absolutely smitten by this story! I love it so much, it intrigues my like nothing has in a while and I think that beta reading this one is my absolute fave! Can't wait for the next one! < 3
Author's Response:
I am so glad you enjoy it. I debated long and hard about how to portray Georg and Gustav. This was the one that came most natural and I knew people were going to hate me or them. I am so glad to keep your hooked when you don't generally like period pieces. Makes me super happy. Thank you so much of betaing. It has been an enjoyable experience. Enjoy the update. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/31/20 09:46 pm Title: History
I am totally delighted with your story;) I liked the story of Mortia and how he was born ..... it seems that death is quite fair ..... I think sometime soon Bill will convince Tom to show him his brand. Could that narca be a kind of terrifying language ... and I think that those around him get used to it, like his parents ... and who knows how to put aside that mask? I love your story, I will look forward to it.
Author's Response:
I am so glad you are delighted that makes me happy. You'll have to wait and see what happens with the brand and everything. We will all have to find out together. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the update.
Date: 03/31/20 02:40 pm Title: Marked
Bill's gloves left me with doubts? The story is original, Tom's brand? I would love to see it, will it be as terrifying as they describe it? I go to the next chapter.