Date: 10/12/20 07:34 pm Title: The music was loud and and the dance floor full....
Okay so I very rarely, almost never read Tom/gustav but what can I say... you are a fucking great writer!!! Like. God. You're so damn talented it makes me CRY. I cried. You described their feelings so wEll, tom'S MEMORIES, everything so well. It was a good ending but I still wish they could give it another go. Tom saying gustav upgraded had me sobbing dude
Author's Response: Aww man, I'm sorry it made you cry but I'm glad you liked it! <3
Date: 02/29/20 05:20 pm Title: The music was loud and and the dance floor full....
love the added paragraph! it smooths out the transition at the end & is just some really good writing as well. < 3
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you <3
Date: 02/26/20 12:38 pm Title: The music was loud and and the dance floor full....
__“You know what I mean. You’re a jealous jerk and I’m emotionally unavailable.”__
I really, really adore this line. I wish I'd written it.
also, as much as I can't picture Tom/Gustav (Tomstav? Gum? oh jesus now I'm cackling), I really like that you never go for the easy Toll pairing.
& this is a truly lovely piece. the description of their whirlwind affair/relationship/thing works super well, it's such a bittersweet memory. I do think Tom's mood changes a little fast at the end, from angry-sad to gonna-be-okay, I feel like it could've used maybe another paragraph for him to mull things over, but despite that I really really enjoyed this! thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you SO much for both reading and reviewing <3 I love the less common pairings. Not as many people read them but I love writing them so... it doesn't matter so much. Maybe someone will come on here like I did looking for the weird ones and find them someday haha! rnThank you for the suggestion too. I added a little something and I hope that makes it read a little bit better. rn