Date: 07/12/20 06:30 pm Title: Twenty-One: I'll Tell Them Your Little Secret.
OMG THIS WAS SO INTENSE AND I NEED MORE LIKE RIGHT THIS SECOND TOM NEEDS TO COME BACK SO THEY CAN REUNITE AND THEY NEED TO KILL THAT DOCTOR AND WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME????
Author's Response: Ahh, I hope you like where this is going then! 😂 Thank you for reading and for reviewing and for being amazing <3
Date: 07/07/20 07:21 am Title: Twenty: I Just Killed Someone.
I hate you!
Author's Response: Thank you 😂😂
Date: 07/01/20 11:12 am Title: Twenty-One: I'll Tell Them Your Little Secret.
good to read. i hope Becker can get word to Tom if he can still function.
Author's Response: Thank you! They'll find their way to each other in time! <3
Date: 06/16/20 01:31 pm Title: Twenty: I Just Killed Someone.
Yay!!!! Excellent 😀 great job .
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D
Date: 06/11/20 05:12 am Title: Nineteen: Of Course It's A Dream, Silly.
Okay THE WAY YOU WROTE TOM''S DREAM WAS AMAZING. bill was all "its your dream, you tell me" NNNGNG HAHAHA I LOVED IT. Also I hate you. So damn much. Like. CAN SOMEONE GET BILL BACK FROM GORDON PLS??? EVERYONE APPARENTLY KNOWS ITS BAD BUT THEY DONT ANYTHING??? someone save him so Tom can tell him he loves him ffs!
Author's Response: Oh, it's coming, don't even worry. Another couple of chapters and you'll be happy! <3
Date: 06/05/20 07:12 am Title: Nineteen: Of Course It's A Dream, Silly.
this puts me on edge.
Author's Response: Yeah, the next chapter is a big one. On edge is probably a fair emotion. Thank you for reading and always reviewing. I appreciate it 💜
Date: 06/01/20 09:33 am Title: Eighteen: I'm Sorry I Couldn't Protect You.
GOD ERIN JESUS CHRIST WHY ARE YOU LIKE THIS??? you're brilliant but damn, you're making me CRY
Author's Response: Why am I like this? I have absolutely no clue. Hah
Date: 06/01/20 07:56 am Title: Eighteen: I'm Sorry I Couldn't Protect You.
OMG I loved little Wren 😥😥 but well done.
Author's Response: I must admit, I did cry a little when I killed Wren. Thank you so much for reading and your wonderful reviews <3
Date: 05/24/20 11:41 am Title: Seventeen: Are You Going To Hurt Him?
ERIN OMG YOU CANNOT LEAVE IT LIKE THAT. i need to know their plan, i need to know what's gonna happen, I NEED TO KNOW IF THEY'RE GOING TO BE OKAY ngngn
Author's Response: Okayyyyy, maybe I'll upload 2 chapters next time! 😜
Date: 05/24/20 11:36 am Title: Sixteen: I Can Protect You.
I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH MYSELF. THE PAIN. THE FUCKING PAIN. And I am still starving to know more about Bill!
Author's Response: Bill's a bit of a mystery. But you'll find out more... in about 7 chapters.
Date: 05/24/20 11:28 am Title: Fifteen: No One Will Ever Tame Him
BILLS TIN OF MEMORIES MAKES ME CRY. the way Tom sees Bill make me cry. THIS ALL MAKE me cry!!! And no. no. I CAnnot BELIEVE TOM ENDED UP HAVING TO BUNK WITH ANDREAS. NOPE. NOT ACCEPTING IT
Author's Response: Bill's tin of memories makes me cry too. This whole section made me cry hah
Date: 05/24/20 11:04 am Title: Fourteen: Are You Afraid, Bill?
I AM IN SO MUCH PAIN RN YOU HAVE NO IDEA. how did they allow this to happen??? what kind of fucked up place is that?? I NEED BILL TO GET BACK TO TOM PLS!
Author's Response: It's gonna get worse before it gets better, I promise. Hah.
Date: 05/24/20 10:52 am Title: Thirteen: I Will Remember You.
WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS ERIN??? WHY??
Author's Response: 🤷🏻r05;a92;a039;🤷🏻r05;a92;a039; Sorry! 😂
Date: 05/24/20 10:45 am Title: Twelve: Since When Do You Care What I Think?
I love how they have come to care for each other. And how Tom suggested THERE MIGHT BE A NEXT TIME. FUCK OFF. FUCK YOU. and no. dear god I hope he doesn't take that offer. He better not. I get that he wants to get out but that sounds ... awful.
Author's Response: Ah, of course he suggested there might be a next time! He waaaaants him bad!
Date: 05/24/20 10:33 am Title: Eleven: I Think I Like Him.
I HATE YOU. Okay, I don't. Not really. Maybe a little bit. THE ENDING OF THAT CHAPTER HAD ME PANTING LIKE A PIG. And. I am so curious about, Bill. Why doesn't he remember? it is so frustrating that they won't tell him. I know why but I STILL WANNA KNOW
Author's Response: Ahahaha, I loved writing the end of that chapter. I'm kind of proud of it, actually.
Date: 05/24/20 10:00 am Title: Ten: It Got You Back, Didn't It?
OKAY THE FACT THAT THIS IS FINISHED IS MAKING ME SCREAM. I NEED MORE. SO MUCH MORE. I hope Andi goes away, why did he do that????? And also. just. ugh. their connection is to die for and I am gonna kill myself
Author's Response: IT'S NOT FINISHED YOU'VE STILL GOT ANOTHER 7 CHAPTERS TO READ!
Date: 05/24/20 09:50 am Title: Nine: Maybe You Are Crazy, Trumper.
I wanna know more about Andreas. Why is he there? What is his thing? And what is his relationship to Bill? NGNNGNG ERIN
Author's Response: Oooooh, Andreas is a bit of a dick.
Date: 05/24/20 03:57 am Title: Eight: Just Like You're Scaring Bill.
Also David's story is so fucked up. I am hurting a bit for him. Even tho the situation is all fucked up. Also earlier, the little routine Tom and Bill have by keeping eachnother company but not talking? LIKE DUDE. anyway. Tom did the right thing and handled the situation WAY better than anyone??? AND THEY SEND HIM TO THE SOLITARY?? FOR A WEEK?? M U R D E R
Author's Response: This bit happens all too often. Like... SO often. People getting fucked over for trying to do the right thing. So infuriating!
Date: 05/24/20 03:45 am Title: Seven: A Gun and Blood.
OMG IS BILL STARTING TO REMEMBER??? I mean, I am not expecting him to remember right away, and at least not everything, but SOMETHING??? ngnng. Also earlier you wrote about tom being lonely and missing friends, that broke my heart. you're a dick. also, the way tom feels unsafe having Bill watch him is like. NGNNG. I hate you but I also love you.
Author's Response: I love it when you hate me on stories 😂
Date: 05/24/20 03:37 am Title: Six: Group Therapy.
Oh my god. Hello Geo and Gusgus. Telling Gustav what he has been through must have been such a huge step for Tom. Like. really huge. I sorta wanna cry thinking about it. And idk what to think about his mother??? Like did she really do this to her own son??? And like. I am so curious about Bill and Georg's status. UGH. this is so brilliant
Author's Response: I love Bill and Georg's relationship. I'm going to have to go in and add a little bit because I never really resolved that, I don't think... Thank you for bringing that to my attention! :D