Date: 11/07/20 07:14 pm Title: Thirty-Five: Tech Support.
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD I AM SO GLAD THE NEXT CHAPTER IS ALREADY UP OTHERWISE I WOULD HAVE BEEN PESTERING YOU ON WHATSAPP BECAUSE HOW CAN SOMEONE BE SO CRUEL AS TO END A CHAPTER HERE
Author's Response: Haha, I enjoy torturing way too much. Especially in this fic. Thank youuuuu <3
Date: 11/07/20 07:11 pm Title: Thirty-Four: Heidi.
I do feel a little sorry for heidi, i have to agree with you. even though I am shipping tom and bill all the way and almost worried that this would fuck things up! and bill is just amazing, you're doing such a great job writing him!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. This Bill is one of my favourites. He's my babe.
Date: 11/07/20 07:06 pm Title: Thirty-Three: What Are You Planning?
i want to SET BOTH TOM'S STEPDAD AND MOTHER ON FIRE! seriously, why is she still with that guy? why is she not leaving him? AND TOM'S STEPFATHER LITEARLLY ADMITTED WHAT HE'D DONE AND YET TOM IS THE ONE TAKING THE FALL I SWEAR TO GOD I WILL FIND SOMEONE AND MURDER THEM
Author's Response: Oh dude, it's gonna work out, I promise, you gotta hold out for just a little longer!
Date: 11/06/20 08:09 am Title: Thirty-Five: Tech Support.
OMG! But how do they trust the Police not to destroy the flash drive??? My concentration is so bad due to the election results so I apologize. I wish this shit was over so I can write myself. You should start a Patreon!
Author's Response: please don't apologise! Please accept my services as an emotional support Australian. What a stressful time for you. I hope you're taking care of yourself <3
Date: 10/29/20 05:03 am Title: Thirty-Four: Heidi.
Hey, thanks for posting again :)
I have to be honest that I didn't like the meeting with Toms stepdad. It was so ... useless? There didnt got to a point and I mean, that guy hurt tom, misstreated tom and raped him and they just talked a little bit. wtf :'D And Toms Mum ... I felt like tom should have went after her, talk to her if she needs help or why she never helped him. maybe even ask her if she still loves him.
but okay, cant have anything we want, haha.
the new chapter was quiet well. poor heidi. lets see if bills plan will work out.
Author's Response: Sometimes things that seem pointless now aren’t pointless in the long run :) thank you for the feedback and I hope you’ll continue reading and find out how the talk isn’t as useless as you think 😉
Date: 10/28/20 08:36 am Title: Thirty-Four: Heidi.
Heidi was a surprise but a new twist to the story. How did she know Tom was there? The idea of Tom watching Bill in a play ground is brilliant ! Bill’s mind just bounces. I sure don’t want to see them back at Serenity, what a waste of two beautiful lives. However, happiness is a relative term. Keep going, girl, it’s fantastic 🤗
Author's Response: I don't think she knew he was there, she just happened to be walking past. This one was indeed a fun chapter to write, purely because of Bill and his happy, bubbly mood. So much fun. Thank you so much for continuing to read and review! Much love to youuu!
Date: 10/27/20 02:16 pm Title: Thirty-Three: What Are You Planning?
I read this whilst I was away, and I really enjoyed it! I really like Bill’s character and his sense of humour.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much. Bill was very enjoyable to write in this one. No limits on characterisation because he's a little bit broken and unpredictable, you know? Thanks for reading! <3
Date: 10/26/20 11:01 am Title: Thirty-Three: What Are You Planning?
Hey I can’t find your reply dated today (26 October) at 9:17 AM I hope it wasn’t important.
Author's Response: I'm sure I just said "thank you"... so... "Thank you!" <3
Date: 10/25/20 08:16 am Title: Thirty-Three: What Are You Planning?
What the heck is wrong with Tom’s mom? I just want to give her a smack. And a big EEEEW to the step - father! I love the “my Bill“. I can’t imagine where that wonderful mind of yours will be taking them but I can’t wait!!!
Author's Response: Aw dude, you're too kind! Thank you so much for reading, and I hope that what I have in store for them lives up to your expectations! :D I must admit, I like where it's headed 😍 Thanks again!
Date: 10/12/20 07:11 pm Title: Thirty-Two: Why Bother?
Are you an expert now? I love that hahha! EVEN THO THIS IS ENTIRELY TOO STRESSFULL LIKE WTF ERIN I DONT EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY I CAN BARELY BREATHE
Author's Response: Bahahaha, I'm sorry for stressing you out 😂rn
Date: 10/12/20 07:01 pm Title: Thirty-One: Let's Do This
Okay for starters I can't believe bill was being told to CALM DOWN. Like. He has been tortured and god. Ugh ALSO HOLY SHIT THIS WAS SO INTENSE HOW DO YOU EXPECT ME TO SURVIVE THIS INMEAN??? OMG?????????? also bill studying to be a nurse was a detail I really appreciated in the middle of my panic.
Author's Response: Dude, are you being sarcastic? Haha, I feel like without Bill's nursing and teaching him how to do the things, Tom would have crumbled. And plus, the nursing thing is going to be significant sometime in the near future so...
Date: 10/07/20 03:22 pm Title: Thirty-Two: Why Bother?
It sure would be good for tom but it would end good for him. the ass would hurt him, maybe even use the situation and would repeat what he already did. he also would probably turn tom in, so that he is a prisoner again. also he wouldnt understand what he did wrong, anyway. he is a sick person.
Author's Response: I think they're all a little bit sick. Thank you for reading and for reviewing and enjoying. I appreciate it so much, and I hope you'll continue reading because we're not too far away from the end! <3
Date: 10/07/20 08:24 am Title: Thirty-Two: Why Bother?
Well that was unexpected . What is Bill up to ? He may be right, though . It makes me scared. 😢
Author's Response: You probably have every reason to be scared, if I'm honest. Oops?
Date: 10/05/20 02:20 pm Title: Thirty-One: Let's Do This
Oh dear, they shouldnt have done that. bill had so good chances to be released, and maybe he could have helped tom to get out too. maybe he even could have asked them to release tom as a favor, and for this, he wouldnt tell anyone, that he got captivated for years, even though he was innocent. hope everything will become better for them, soon.
Author's Response: We'll see whether it gets better soon. I can promise you it will... eventually. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing <3
Date: 10/04/20 02:20 pm Title: Thirty-One: Let's Do This
Well shit! not what I expected. They just can't catch a break. I so want them to be happy but even the best wishes go awry. My mood has sucked for a few weeks. My family doesn't seem to notice so...
Author's Response: Eventually, things will happen that I think will make everything worth it. I'm sorry you're feeling sucky. If you need to chat, feel free to send me a message through THF and we can chat. d84;a039; I hope you're okay d84;a039;
Date: 09/22/20 05:43 pm Title: Thirty: Out Of Here.
i hope they will escape. i fucking hope so! god dammit, erin.
Author's Response: Mayyyyybe they will. Mayyyyyybe they won't!
Date: 09/22/20 04:54 pm Title: Twenty-Nine: I've Got You.
okay I am very happy now, the ending was great, their interaction great. now i hope you make it stay like this. but then again, i don't fully trust you yet!
Author's Response: Look, it's probably wise not to trust me.
Date: 09/22/20 04:23 pm Title: Twenty-Eight: I Can't Help You.
why can't they just be together??? erin why are you doing this to me
Author's Response: That'd be too easy 😏
Date: 09/16/20 05:17 pm Title: Thirty: Out Of Here.
i hope everyone just turns their heads and lets them walk out of the hotel after the trial. they find money and a letter from Beckner in Bill's bag telling them where they can go for help. or something to that affect.
Author's Response: Oh, I don't think it's gonna be quite that easy... BUT... you'll have to wait and see.
Date: 09/16/20 02:56 pm Title: Thirty: Out Of Here.
I dont know. I dont think its a good thing for them to escape now.
first their relationship is pretty fresh and unstable.
second, they make bill implausible, first helping them and telling them these storys and then escaping.
and third, theys always would have to escape.
I think it would be better if they would wait and try for something like a "controlled" life, where they can check in on them always or something like that.
I want to know what happens next, so keep posting chapters please :)
Author's Response: I think you're going to be right. They are very new and as much as they think they do, they don't know each other particularly well. We'll have to see though! New chapter very soon, promise! <3