Date: 05/24/20 03:18 am Title: Five: Surely I'd Remember.
OMG BILL ACTUALLY OPENED UP A BIT. So he was there one minute and then he woke up there? ngnngn, what the fuck!!!!!! This is so brilliant I am going to smack you. Bill is a serious character. Jesus. And the way he pressed Tom up against the wall. Jesus. And I am so curious about him. Like why doesn't he remember? why is he so neurotic? AHH FUCK YOU. BUT LIKE. with a little love.
Author's Response: I love Bill. Like, he's one of my favourite Bill's I've written. Thank youuuuu <3
Date: 05/24/20 03:10 am Title: Four: It Was Going To Be A Long Sentence.
AGAIN I AM SO ANGRY AT YOUR BRILLIANCE. Jesus. Also. Like. what is up with Bill? I wanna know more about him. I am so curious. Aaaaand Tom just breaks my heart.
Author's Response: I want to give Tom hugs. Endless hugs.
Date: 05/24/20 03:04 am Title: Three: Someone Is Going To Pay.
Ah jesus this is so greatly written. FUCK YOU. I have no idea what to do to myself. I am so curious about Bill. I wanna know more about him, and the way you write it all, THE ENVIRONMENT AND EVERYTHING, it is so good. YOU REALLY KNOW WHAT YOU'RE DOING AND I HATE YOU FOR IT BUT I ALSO LOVE YOU. Seriously. Wtf. And fyi, I also wanna kill Tom's stepfather.
Author's Response: Fun fact, the way I wrote all of the setting is pretty much the description of where I worked.
Date: 05/24/20 02:58 am Title: Two: Why Shouldn't Tom Take His Life?
Omg Erin. Fuck YOU SO MUCH. Dude. How. I. AND THAT ENDING. I do not blame Tom, I would also want to murder that asshole. Seriously. What a poop! omg.
Author's Response: Eek, I'm gonna say thank you 😂
Date: 05/24/20 02:50 am Title: One: Serenity Grove Hospital for the Criminally Insane.
Omg this is such a great start!
Author's Response: Thank youuuuu <3
Date: 05/21/20 07:09 am Title: Seventeen: Are You Going To Hurt Him?
Poor Tom. I think everybody knows what feelings can sometimes do with us ... so i can feel with him.
Author's Response: Feelings sometimes suck, poor Tom. Thank you for reading and reviewing <3
Date: 05/21/20 06:37 am Title: Sixteen: I Can Protect You.
gordon is a sadist not a masochist :) if he would be a masochist, he would like to feel pain and all this.
but well, I hope too that gordon gets killed one day.
I'm wondering why he got is patient number inprinted ...
Author's Response: So that he can never ever forget Serenity. I hope that part will make a little more sense when the end comes. Thank you for your reviews <3
Date: 05/21/20 06:14 am Title: Fifteen: No One Will Ever Tame Him
Not sure if you talk like that to the person that raped the person you love? If you dont kill it instantly, you would probably have not one nice word for it or listen to it for a second. But I hope you make the best out of it and that andreas stays the ass he is, because nothing else would match. also its good to have an ass like him in a group like this.
Author's Response: I've spoken to people that have done ridiculously heinous things to people I love. It's hard, but you do it as a means to an end. It's hard, but it's possible. Everything will come back and bite Andreas in the end. Thank you though, I hope you're enjoying!
Date: 05/21/20 05:52 am Title: Fourteen: Are You Afraid, Bill?
Good Chapter. I'm a bit sad that he got to a bad person, because its what everybody would have expacted - a nice person would have be more interesting, but I liked the part with the other guys. they seemed to be nice and it showed a little bit, that noch just this one doctor is a bad one.
Author's Response: It kind of had to be the way it is for the story to develop the way I need it to. But I'm glad you're sticking with this and I very much appreciate your reviews <3 Thank youuuuu!
Date: 05/20/20 09:11 am Title: Seventeen: Are You Going To Hurt Him?
drama to the max!!!!
Author's Response: Drama is good, ja?
Date: 05/13/20 10:25 pm Title: One: Serenity Grove Hospital for the Criminally Insane.
👍🏼🤪
Author's Response: 💜
Date: 05/13/20 11:57 am Title: Sixteen: I Can Protect You.
Lord almighty, as they say here in the south. I like this dark stuff. Bill and Wren, Tom and Andreas? Absolutely amazingly twisted! 😈
Author's Response: Oh you're going to LOVE the next couple of chapters! Thank you so much for reading and for all of your wonderful reviews <3
Date: 05/09/20 03:36 pm Title: Two: Why Shouldn't Tom Take His Life?
Bloody hell! I fucking love how you write this. The smallest of details and phrasing when it comes to the hospital and surroundings makes it so believable and realistic. I adore how you're trying to portray that the guards, nurses, etc, don't see it as a prison like so many others would, especially the people who are confined to it, but as a hospital for those who aren't in sane state of mind when committing crimes. Those little details is what makes you a fantastic writer. I really am enjoying this so far! Especially how you've portrayed Tom, you've let us in on his character a little, but we're only just scratching the surface. And Bill, poor soul. He must've done something super bad to be sedated multiple times!
Author's Response: God, I love your reviews, thank you SO much! I love that you're noticing little things that I was so excited to write in there, and I hope that continues throughout the story. Bill is a complicated little bunny, I just want to hug him, poor thing. Thank you for another lovely review <3
Date: 05/09/20 03:18 pm Title: One: Serenity Grove Hospital for the Criminally Insane.
I'm playing catch up, so don't mind me and I'm also on my phone, so my apologies if this is short! Interesting set up so far, though. I'm definitely interested in the darker side of society and those within it, so this is right up my street. I'm super interested to see why Bill is in a psychiatric hospital for th criminally insane, what's he done, why's he in there and not an actual prison??? You know. Good job lovely < 3
Author's Response: Ahhh I'm so excited you're reading this! I so hope you enjoy it. I enjoyed writing it immensely, and I hope that comes through too. I hope that all of your questions will be answered in time! <3 thank you so much for reading and reviewing, and I can't wait to read what you think of the rest of the story so far!
Date: 05/09/20 10:17 am Title: Fifteen: No One Will Ever Tame Him
No escaping , please ? Unless it’s to save Bill. I want Tom to heal and be released. Haha! I’m glad he is in Bill‘s bed. !!!
Author's Response: 💜
Date: 05/09/20 10:17 am Title: Fifteen: No One Will Ever Tame Him
No escaping , please ? Unless it’s to save Bill. I want Tom to heal and be released. Haha! I’m glad he is in Bill‘s bed. !!!
Author's Response: 💜
Date: 05/09/20 10:17 am Title: Fifteen: No One Will Ever Tame Him
No escaping , please ? Unless it’s to save Bill. I want Tom to heal and be released. Haha! I’m glad he is in Bill‘s bed. !!!
Author's Response: Ahh, you'll have to wait and find out. No escaping as suuuuuch! Thank you for always reading and reviewing. I appreciate it more than you know! 💜
Date: 05/04/20 05:26 am Title: One: Serenity Grove Hospital for the Criminally Insane.
Will do, for sure!
Author's Response: 😁😁
Date: 05/01/20 04:12 pm Title: Two: Why Shouldn't Tom Take His Life?
So I'm on my phone and can't write you a real review but fuck you this is so good it hurts. Dammit Erin how are you this talented???
Author's Response: Stop it, you're making me want to cry. I'm so glad you're enjoying this so far! :D And I'm so grateful that you're reading. So thank youuuuu! 💜
Date: 05/01/20 12:43 am Title: Fourteen: Are You Afraid, Bill?
this was a good/sad chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. it's gonna take a while, but things will look up eventually! 💜💜