Date: 07/25/24 12:00 pm Title: 4/4
This was a great story!
You should do a sequel to this
Date: 09/04/23 05:33 am Title: 4/4
This was such a good story!
Date: 11/25/20 10:34 pm Title: 4/4
Oh God, just loved it !! I’ve been looking for a good story to read for such a long time and I’ve finally been able to FEEL it ! And everything they tell to each other is perfectly said at the perfect time, sometimes I wanted to scream because I was so into it, feeling it. Thanks, seriously you made my day !
Author's Response: you just made MY day! thank you so much for this lovely review! this is still the story I'm probably most proud of, so I'm extremely happy you enjoyed it so much!
Date: 03/02/20 01:48 am Title: 4/4
Oh...
My...
Goodness...
So this is an old story but I had to leave a review. I freaking loved this... I love this Bill, and I love this Tom and I just love EVERYTHING about this... Like, everything. Why did I not read this before?! Love. So much love.
Author's Response: so much love back at you! I'm still really happy with how this story turned out, this may be my favorite Bill I've ever written, so it makes me super happy to hear that you enjoyed it so much! thank you!!
Date: 08/10/19 02:07 am Title: 4/4
Cool story! Thanks for sharing it!
Author's Response: thanks for leaving a review!! I'm happy you liked it!
Date: 08/03/19 09:18 pm Title: 4/4
This was really good!
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 08/03/19 04:23 pm Title: 4/4
"I already drive like a fucking maniac, so getting an ambulance through traffic will be a piece of cake" I will forever adore this line. F. O. R. E. V. E. R.
"Who would’ve thought Bill Kaulitz would sit down to help a lady with progressing dementia eat and drink enough?" that Bill is a babe. He just needed a little nudge in the right direction and look how he's doing now !
Also they are adorable AND YES PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE A SEQUEL (and I know you're not fast, so take your time, it doesn't matter when it happens as long as you love it as much as the first story < 3)
Author's Response: I also really love that line, I was so proud when I wrote it :') thank youuuu <3
Date: 08/03/19 04:15 pm Title: 4/4
[still chewing on a sock somewhere in the background]
Honestly, it gets kinda tasty when you get used to it.
Author's Response: Samantha 😂😂😂
Date: 08/03/19 01:30 pm Title: 4/4
YES! SEQUEL! GIVE ME!
Author's Response: 😬
Date: 08/03/19 08:49 am Title: 4/4
nawww a really good story and cute end. would have loved to read more of it.
thanks of sharing with us!
Author's Response: I might write a sequel! probably not soon though, I am not fast :') thank you!!
Date: 08/02/19 03:28 pm Title: 4/4
“That’s why I figured I’d tell you,” Bill said. “You’re in emergency services, you might be the only one who thinks I’m doing something worthwhile.”
His confidence seemed to be wavering again, his eyes focused on a point behind Tom instead of on Tom’s face. It was easy to reassure him, though, because he was right. Tom did think that. “It’s absolutely something worthwhile. We need EMTs badly, and if you want to do the job, that’s great.”
“I do want to do the job.” Bill sat up, the fire returning to his voice. “And I think I wouldn’t be so terrible at it either. That’s what I learned in community service—that I like looking out for people, and that I’m not as easily grossed out by puke and blood and shit as I thought I’d be.
Oh precious sweetheart. You're such a good person, if only your dickhead dad could see it, too.
And Tom being so damn wonderful supporting him. He's also so good. Good people. I approve.
Plus, I already drive like a fucking maniac, so getting an ambulance through traffic will be a piece of cake.”
Tom laughed out loud, and a satisfied smile spread on Bill’s face. He’d been trying to get that laugh out of Tom for a while; it seemed only right that he finally succeeded. In truth, Tom had been struggling to suppress his laughter for a while now. His dislike of Bill had faded much faster than he’d anticipated after waking up in hospital, and getting to see the younger man’s interactions with the retirees had built an unexpected respect.
I loooove this. That Tom laughed, Bill being a bit proud of it, Tom having to hold it back for a while but now letting it happen. Damn dude, how could you ever not want to laugh at everything he says? God I love him.
“Alright, alright.” Bill chuckled and abruptly stopped in his tracks. “Oh, I’ve got it! How about I kick your ass on the bumper cars?”.
Such a precious asshole.
He snickered at himself and put the handful of popcorn in his mouth, crunching with relish. Everything about him in that moment made Tom want to smile—the satisfaction on his face, the silly hat, the relaxed way he lounged against the tree, the rip in his shirt that showed a sliver of skin just above his jeans, and most of all the sparkle in his eyes that appeared when he’d spoken of his future. Right there, Tom saw nothing of the irresponsible rich kid anymore.
So when Bill turned to say something, Tom leaned in and kissed him.
DUDE! DUUUUUUUUUDE! Dude. *cries forever*
I want more Mafalda. Can I have sequel? Or ten of them? I never want to say goodbye to this Bill. EVER.
Thank you again for writing me this, I'm so happy, you did it absolutely perfectly and no one else could have written this prompt like you did. Thank you so so so so much < 3 I love you < 3
Author's Response: "precious asshole" is probably the best way to describe this Bill ever. & yes I have ideas for a sequel but you know me, not good at the speed thing. [insert Baymax saying "I am not fast"] thank you so much for the prompt & for pushing me & for loving this & I love you! <3
Date: 08/01/19 08:55 pm Title: 4/4
I wanted to continue reading this beautiful story 😁
I liked the end 💗, I am happy that this pair ended up paired👬.
Second part???😉 how Bill's father reacts, how many dogs Bill will have, will live together soon🙂
Author's Response: they really do work as a couple, don't they? :) I'm glad you liked it! there may be a sequel, I've got some ideas, I just don't write very fast, haha. thank you for your reviews!!
Date: 07/31/19 02:48 pm Title: 4/4
This is so sweet - I am glad that you finisted it.
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Date: 07/27/19 07:04 pm Title: 3/4
Estoy feliz por Bill 🙂 el realmente tomo conciencia del accidente y cambiará.
d84; Thank you 🙂
Author's Response: yes! he's changed for sure! thank you for reading, the last part is now up! :)
Date: 07/27/19 06:44 pm Title: 2/4
Una mentira piadosa a la abuela, nada de que alarmarse Tom 🤭🤗
Creo que Billy esta siendo sincero con Tom respecto a su disculpa.
Author's Response: yeah, he definitely wouldn't lie about important things, haha! thank you for reading! :)
Date: 07/27/19 04:31 pm Title: 3/4
“I’ve got time,” Tom said, surprising himself with the softness of his voice. It was true, though. He had nothing else planned for the day, and if Bill was struggling to find words, it had to be something big—something worth waiting for.
“Thanks,” Bill said again. “For listening. I did kind of wreck your life—”
“You wrecked my car,” Tom interrupted. “Or drove so dangerously that it caused me to wreck my car. My life is fine. Yeah, I was pissed at first, but things are okay now. And let’s not forget you did call an ambulance. That was pretty decent of you.”
You know, I absolutely love Tom in this story. Bill is my babe and I will protect him to death and he's mine forever, but I think Tom deserves some praise as well. (also fuck you for thinking he didn't have any personality, he's a goddamn babe) He's so... kind? He's sitting there with the guy who could have ended up ending his life by being a goddamn idiot, and yet he's just... so patient, listening to him and letting him take his time and just being a good person. I adore him, and he's just how a man of the law should be. He would get along well with my Cop Tom, I'm sure. Though my cop would probably drive him insane with all his jokes all the damn time lol!
I'm so proud of Bill, as well. He's such a good person and his dad is trash and he deserves THE WORLD. I love him.
Thank you so much for this story, really, I will never be able to thank you enough for writing it < 3
Author's Response: yeah Tom ended up developing quite a bit of personality after all. I'm so incredibly pleased & humbled that you love this so much, especially since I have enjoyed writing it so so much (& I think I might even revisit this universe at some point, just because it is so much fun to play around in). so thank you for that!! <3
Date: 07/27/19 01:40 pm Title: 1/4
Ya me enganché 👍😁😁😁😁
Author's Response: gracias!! :)
Date: 07/27/19 12:58 pm Title: 3/4
[pukes a socks somewhere behind one of Bill's dad's cars]
Author's Response: he deserves it honestly
Date: 07/27/19 12:58 pm Title: 3/4
When I think about it, between his absent father (& mother ?) and being the subject of everyone's gossip without actually getting real help, Bill could have gone like, super bad, and he's a strong af character. Even more on his kinda "redemption arc" you describe in this story. Baby.
Also the cop voice thing still cracks me up. Never stop writing, okay ? I don't give a fuck how long you take to write, as long as I still have these works-of-art jokes to read after.
(but write me some cat please)
Author's Response: god yeah I meant to write a little bit about his mother as well, but the dialogue just went a completely different direction & then I was like [shrug] rnalso I'm working on cat but they don't wanna cooperate with me at all, sorry :( but thank you for this!!
Date: 07/27/19 12:49 pm Title: 3/4
[chews on your socks]
Oh wait, wrong story.
[keeps on chewing]
Author's Response: hahahaha <3