Date: 07/23/19 04:38 pm Title: 3/4
Tom rubbed his arm and sighed. “Why is it always you who’s causing collisions?”
“I don’t know,” Bill said with a shrug. “Because I’m always moving faster than the world around me?” ---- i love this. and this detail of bill moving faster than the world is insightful and a very original detail that i really liked! and also! bill becoming an EMT is amazing! i think its perfect for him!
Author's Response: I kind of loved that line of dialogue as well, so I'm really happy you picked that one out :) also yes! the image of this Bill as an EMT is precious to me!
Date: 07/21/19 02:36 pm Title: 3/4
this was a good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thank you so much! the last part is now up! :)
Date: 07/21/19 01:42 pm Title: 3/4
I like this story - so good
Author's Response: thank you so much! the final part is here! :)
Date: 07/21/19 10:53 am Title: 3/4
Ooh, Bill as an EMT is actually hot. I mean, I like the scenary surrounding that vision.
Thanks for the update!!
Author's Response: doesn't it suit this Bill? I was very pleased with myself when I came up with that, haha. thank you! the final part is up now! :)
Date: 07/19/19 07:49 am Title: 2/4
I like how Bill has such a sweet side to him and Tom can't even be mad at him. Great chapter!
Author's Response: deep down, Bill is just a sweetheart, isn’t he :D thank you!! the next chapter is here!
Date: 07/18/19 05:14 am Title: 2/4
this was a really good good chapter!!
i can not wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: thank you so much! the next chapter is up! :)
Date: 07/18/19 02:06 am Title: 2/4
This is so cute!
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 07/17/19 04:30 pm Title: 2/4
Alright, je suis hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Thanks for posting!
Author's Response: thanks so much!! the next chapter is here! :D
Date: 07/17/19 08:19 am Title: 2/4
Mafaldaaaaaaaaa! I know I've already read it before but I'm rereading now and I'm crying. MY BABE. Bill is just. Everything. He's so precious and I love him and I want to keep him forever.
Author's Response: he really is the best, I’ve loved bringing him to life. all thanks to you!! so, you know. he’s yours <3
Date: 07/17/19 06:06 am Title: 2/4
Really enjoying this. Great writing. Looking forward to part 3 xx
Author's Response: thank you very much!! I had a lot of fun writing this story, so it’s the best compliment ever that you’re having fun reading :) hope to see you on the next chapter! <3
Date: 07/17/19 01:07 am Title: 2/4
I love this Bill - so mischievous
Author's Response: isn’t he? :D thank you so much!
Date: 07/16/19 07:32 pm Title: 2/4
God, I love this Bill so damn much! I fucking hate you, it's so damn good! this entire thing is, especially their interaction!
ALSO THE ENDING. I confess I lied to your grandmother - MY MOTHER TAUGHT ME TO PLAY BRIDGE! i love how bill lets them teach him when he knows it njadnksand
Fuck you so much. I love this. there is a spark between them and god. i want to stab myself when i read this. in a good way.
Author's Response: this Bill was honestly so much fun to write & I’m so happy that apparently I got him right!! thank you! <333
Date: 07/16/19 04:52 pm Title: 2/4
I like this very much!!!
Author's Response: thank you!! new chapter is up! <3
Date: 07/16/19 02:45 pm Title: 2/4
HI I LOVE THEM SO MUCH AND I AM SO GLAD SANDRA IS BULLYING YOU INTO WRITING
Author's Response: SAME & SAME THANK YOUUUU <3
Date: 07/13/19 11:04 pm Title: 1/4
This is really good so far. I like Bill's character in this story and it's interesting how he has such a careless attitude yet he seems to care about the cop getting hurt. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: thank you! I'm really happy with how Bill turned out in this, so thank you for saying that! the next chapter is up now!
Date: 07/13/19 11:01 pm Title: 1/4
This sounds like a good story!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thank you! the next chapter is up!
Date: 07/12/19 05:43 pm Title: 1/4
I've been trying the whole day to find the right words to express how much I love this, but I just can't. There's just. Too much. The way you write, what you did with the prompt, the confidence in Bill in the beginning, the way driving makes him feel, how he for a second finds it tempting to drive away but knows he can't, how he tries so hard to hide that he's actually worried, and how he stands up to his dad. I just. I can't. I love him so much IT HURTS. It hurts, Mafalda!
I love this, I love you, and thank you so much for writing me this. No one else could have written this prompt like you do < 3
Author's Response: it's all thanks to you! it means the world that you love it so much, because that was the whole point of this <3
Date: 07/12/19 05:46 am Title: 1/4
I love this Bill so much, I dunno what to do with myself. Like. for real. This Bill makes me wanna light myself on fire! Like.. fuck me. The way you describe Bill driving and UGH HIS SMIRK!! His smirk makes me wanna rip my face off and sell it to the highest bidder!
Author's Response: this Bill is honestly one of my favorite characters I've ever written, I'm so happy he comes across the way I wanted him to :D thank you!! <3
Date: 07/11/19 03:24 pm Title: 1/4
This was really good! I'm curious to the rest of it! xo
Author's Response: thanks so much! there's a new chapter up!
Date: 07/11/19 11:08 am Title: 1/4
Loved this!! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Author's Response: thank you!! next chapter is up!