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Reviewer: cigimuz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/19 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 2: Bachelor Party

I'm so in love with people losing their minds over Bill and I'm one of them so that just makes it so much better lol!

Author's Response: Hahaha same here girl!

Reviewer: ingold Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/19 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 23: Best Ever

Super!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: cigimuz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/19 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1: Three Months Before

I love Bill being a little minx and dressed in leather... or nothing :D

Author's Response: Hehehe don't we all :D

Reviewer: SarahNOBODY Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/19 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 23: Best Ever

HE SAID IT. YES.
THAT'S EVEN BETTER THAN ALL THE SMUT OKAY? (And the smut was pretty damn good)

Author's Response: Hahaha thank you! :D

Reviewer: Bbbiitch Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/19 04:14 am Title: Chapter 23: Best Ever

Im screaming!! Awesome smut but whats best with this chapter is the end. Loooove. And you are a really good writer and you can write smut where the reader can feel all the emotions. Just amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: tomssweetheart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/02/19 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 23: Best Ever

You better be happy you're working koopavond tomorrow, bitch, cuz Imma smack yo ass when you get home. WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU DON'T CONSIDER YOURSELF DO BE A GOOD WRITER? YOU'RE AN AMAZING WRITER, YOU BUTTFACE!

Now, on to the story. Holy fuck. I mean... But like... Yeah. Fuck. Ok.

This was so fucking good and hot and sweet and asjkafldjksdf I need so much more, holy crap. AND THEY SAID I LOVE YOU IN THE END! SHIT MAN. I've been waiting for thiiiiiis, uhg! Now, let them get together and fuck each other senseless multiple times a day, ok? Ok. Tnx, ly, bye.

Author's Response: Hahaahha thank you bby xxx

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/19 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 22: Way More Intimate

Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: isab2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/19 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 22: Way More Intimate

I want many more chapters, please, this story is very beautiful ..
A pretty hot and sexy chapter, I can't imagine how they will be next ...
Thanks for updating!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! :D

Reviewer: Bbbiitch Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/19 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 22: Way More Intimate

Yaaass! Really looking forward to next chapter, they are so cute!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: SarahNOBODY Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/19 05:18 am Title: Chapter 22: Way More Intimate

They keep going from horny teenagers to intimate lovers and I CAN'T. Same goes with Bill going in and out of character, trying somehow to rely on Lumia for being sexy while there's absolutely no need.
YOU GO TOM, TELLING HIM NO TO BEING TIED UP. We need to let Tom touch this time and hold him and and ugh.
I love them.

Author's Response: YES WE DO NEED TOM TOUCHING HIM EVERYWHERE DON’T WE hahaha

Reviewer: SarahNOBODY Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/19 05:14 am Title: Chapter 21: Questions And Answers

Finally Bill opened up some more *cries* and look at Tom trying his best not to do so/say anything wrong, he's so fuclong sweet.
AND THAT MAKEOUT SESSION GIRL. BILL CLIMBING ON TOP OF HIM. BYE. That was hot

Author's Response: Hahaha so glad you liked it! Next chapter is gonna be even hotter hehe

Reviewer: Emorykaulitz00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/19 01:08 am Title: Chapter 22: Way More Intimate

Already loving you for writing this gem!

Author's Response: Aww hahah loving you for reading! :D

Reviewer: tomssweetheart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/29/19 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 22: Way More Intimate

okay listen. we gotta talk about something serious.

i love you forever already, you know that. and this chapter was really fucking hot and sweet to a different level.

BUT YOU NEED TO FUCKING POST THE PORN NOW, OR I WILL SUE.

istg this is so fucking overwhelming, i can almost feel Bill's emotions. give it to me. GIMME.

k tnx ly bye.

Author's Response: Hahaha SOON :D k ly2 bye xxx

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/19 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 21: Questions And Answers

Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Bbbiitch Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/19 06:01 am Title: Chapter 21: Questions And Answers

Smut! Definitly smut! They can talk after they have a good time. Really good chapter btw and I cant wait to know more about Bill

Author's Response: Hahaha alright! And thank you so much :D

Reviewer: isab2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/19 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 21: Questions And Answers

I think that talking would help them get to know each other a little more and maybe Bill can be more confident when he knows that Tom, despite his dark past, still loves him. On the other hand, if they end up being together that would help them strengthen their feelings.
Thank you!!

Author's Response: I think so too! Thanks for reading! :D

Reviewer: tomssweetheart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/25/19 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 21: Questions And Answers

THEN SAY IT, YOU UNSEASONED CHICKENWING! HOLY MOTHER OF GOD, IT IS NOT THAT HARD, UNLIKE TOM'S FUCKING DICK THAT YOU WANT TO SIT ON ANYWAY.

God, this story is so frustrating but I love every word and every letter and ever comma and exclamation point that you put into it < 3 I need so much mooooore!

Now.

Ok?

Tnx ly doeggie!

Author's Response: HAHAHAHA UNSEASONED CHICKENWING

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/19 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 21: Questions And Answers

this was a good chapter!
i can not wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: SarahNOBODY Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/19 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 20: As Sure As I'll Ever Be

WHY IS TOM SO PURE? I LOVE HIM.
Also Bill being fragile, we must protect him at all costs. I love that he can't even try to fool Tom, he wants to open up to someone and it's just so easy with Tom. Ouch, babies *cries*

Author's Response: Hahaha yes must protect Bill at all costs!

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/19 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 20: As Sure As I'll Ever Be

Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

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