Date: 10/05/19 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 2: Bachelor Party
I'm so in love with people losing their minds over Bill and I'm one of them so that just makes it so much better lol!
Author's Response: Hahaha same here girl!
Date: 10/05/19 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 23: Best Ever
Super!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 10/05/19 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1: Three Months Before
I love Bill being a little minx and dressed in leather... or nothing :D
Author's Response: Hehehe don't we all :D
Date: 10/03/19 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 23: Best Ever
HE SAID IT. YES.
THAT'S EVEN BETTER THAN ALL THE SMUT OKAY? (And the smut was pretty damn good)
Author's Response: Hahaha thank you! :D
Date: 10/03/19 04:14 am Title: Chapter 23: Best Ever
Im screaming!! Awesome smut but whats best with this chapter is the end. Loooove. And you are a really good writer and you can write smut where the reader can feel all the emotions. Just amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Date: 10/02/19 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 23: Best Ever
You better be happy you're working koopavond tomorrow, bitch, cuz Imma smack yo ass when you get home. WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU DON'T CONSIDER YOURSELF DO BE A GOOD WRITER? YOU'RE AN AMAZING WRITER, YOU BUTTFACE!
Now, on to the story. Holy fuck. I mean... But like... Yeah. Fuck. Ok.
This was so fucking good and hot and sweet and asjkafldjksdf I need so much more, holy crap. AND THEY SAID I LOVE YOU IN THE END! SHIT MAN. I've been waiting for thiiiiiis, uhg! Now, let them get together and fuck each other senseless multiple times a day, ok? Ok. Tnx, ly, bye.
Author's Response: Hahaahha thank you bby xxx
Date: 10/01/19 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 22: Way More Intimate
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09/30/19 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 22: Way More Intimate
I want many more chapters, please, this story is very beautiful ..
A pretty hot and sexy chapter, I can't imagine how they will be next ...
Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! :D
Date: 09/30/19 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 22: Way More Intimate
Yaaass! Really looking forward to next chapter, they are so cute!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 09/30/19 05:18 am Title: Chapter 22: Way More Intimate
They keep going from horny teenagers to intimate lovers and I CAN'T. Same goes with Bill going in and out of character, trying somehow to rely on Lumia for being sexy while there's absolutely no need.
YOU GO TOM, TELLING HIM NO TO BEING TIED UP. We need to let Tom touch this time and hold him and and ugh.
I love them.
Author's Response: YES WE DO NEED TOM TOUCHING HIM EVERYWHERE DON’T WE hahaha
Date: 09/30/19 05:14 am Title: Chapter 21: Questions And Answers
Finally Bill opened up some more *cries* and look at Tom trying his best not to do so/say anything wrong, he's so fuclong sweet.
AND THAT MAKEOUT SESSION GIRL. BILL CLIMBING ON TOP OF HIM. BYE. That was hot
Author's Response: Hahaha so glad you liked it! Next chapter is gonna be even hotter hehe
Date: 09/30/19 01:08 am Title: Chapter 22: Way More Intimate
Already loving you for writing this gem!
Author's Response: Aww hahah loving you for reading! :D
Date: 09/29/19 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 22: Way More Intimate
okay listen. we gotta talk about something serious.
i love you forever already, you know that. and this chapter was really fucking hot and sweet to a different level.
BUT YOU NEED TO FUCKING POST THE PORN NOW, OR I WILL SUE.
istg this is so fucking overwhelming, i can almost feel Bill's emotions. give it to me. GIMME.
k tnx ly bye.
Author's Response: Hahaha SOON :D k ly2 bye xxx
Date: 09/26/19 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 21: Questions And Answers
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09/26/19 06:01 am Title: Chapter 21: Questions And Answers
Smut! Definitly smut! They can talk after they have a good time. Really good chapter btw and I cant wait to know more about Bill
Author's Response: Hahaha alright! And thank you so much :D
Date: 09/25/19 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 21: Questions And Answers
I think that talking would help them get to know each other a little more and maybe Bill can be more confident when he knows that Tom, despite his dark past, still loves him. On the other hand, if they end up being together that would help them strengthen their feelings.
Thank you!!
Author's Response: I think so too! Thanks for reading! :D
Date: 09/25/19 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 21: Questions And Answers
THEN SAY IT, YOU UNSEASONED CHICKENWING! HOLY MOTHER OF GOD, IT IS NOT THAT HARD, UNLIKE TOM'S FUCKING DICK THAT YOU WANT TO SIT ON ANYWAY.
God, this story is so frustrating but I love every word and every letter and ever comma and exclamation point that you put into it < 3 I need so much mooooore!
Now.
Ok?
Tnx ly doeggie!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA UNSEASONED CHICKENWING
Date: 09/25/19 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 21: Questions And Answers
this was a good chapter!
i can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09/24/19 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 20: As Sure As I'll Ever Be
WHY IS TOM SO PURE? I LOVE HIM.
Also Bill being fragile, we must protect him at all costs. I love that he can't even try to fool Tom, he wants to open up to someone and it's just so easy with Tom. Ouch, babies *cries*
Author's Response: Hahaha yes must protect Bill at all costs!
Date: 09/24/19 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 20: As Sure As I'll Ever Be
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
