Date: 07/23/19 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 7: Fuck Me
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/22/19 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 7: Fuck Me
oh god. I love. love love
Author's Response: Thank you!! :D
Date: 07/22/19 11:39 am Title: Chapter 7: Fuck Me
Oh oh oh Tomi, being all intimate and also kinda thoughtful. I guess Bill will fall for him easily, since most men don't treat him that well. Let's see. It's a lovely story.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 07/22/19 02:17 am Title: Chapter 7: Fuck Me
Awesomeness!!!
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Date: 07/21/19 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 7: Fuck Me
Tom perdió la cabeza y adiós fidelidad de novio... 😁😁😁 por lo menos Lumia obtendrá más de lo que cobrará y lo mismo para Tom 😉
Ya quiero ver la cara de sus amigos cuando Tom salga de su sexy y ardiente encuentro con Lumia, morirán de envidia 🤗
Author's Response: Hahaha yes they just might!
Date: 07/21/19 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 5: I Want You
😗😗😗😗😗😗😗Tom cayó redondito a los encantos de Lumia 😘
Author's Response: Yes he did!
Date: 07/21/19 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 7: Fuck Me
this was a really good chapter!!
i can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/21/19 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 7: Fuck Me
I can't believe you did this again. Again with this bullshit. With this fucking nonsense. FINISH THE PORN GODDAMNIT.
Other than that, I LOVED IT! I love how you describe Bill and Tom's reactions to him. GIMME MORE PRETTY PLEASE. ok thanks bye. xoxo
Author's Response: hahaha the next chapter will be better I promise xxx
Date: 07/20/19 08:33 am Title: Chapter 6: His First
Oh wow last time I checked this only had 3 chapters. There shall be no wedding, I called it. Tomi seems to be having a very very good time indeed. Who wouldn't though, your Bill is hot. Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Hahaha he is pretty hot, isn’t he? We’ll see about that wedding ;-)
Date: 07/18/19 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 6: His First
Chapter 11? I didn't know this story would be that long and that makes me very happy! I love how this is Tom's first time with a guy, and him being tied up was a rare and nice surprise that should happen more often in fics :D Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Yeah, I wasn't planning on actually letting it go on for that long, but I can't seem to stop writing?? So I guess we'll see for how long it will go on hahaha thanks for reading! :D
Date: 07/18/19 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 6: His First
Awesome
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Date: 07/18/19 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 6: His First
THIS IS TOO SHORT. I REFUSE TO PUT UP WITH THIS SHIT. I'M DEAD SERIOUS, YOUNG LADY, THIS IS NOT HOW WE HANDLE THINGS HERE ON THF. ONCE YOU START PORN, YOU HAVE TO FINISH IT. YOU BETTER COME OUT OF THAT FUCKING BATHROOM RIGHT NOW AND GIMME MORE. TAKING OFF YOUR MAKE UP CAN WAIT, I CAN'T. LOVE YOU BYE.
Author's Response: Hahahah next chapter will be up Sunday :D
Date: 07/18/19 06:23 am Title: Chapter 6: His First
Ugh I love this story so much already, I really do. I love the way you're writing down their weird connection, like they're both instantly into each other for reasons they don't know. And Tom asking hundreds of questions is actually so cute haha
Author's Response: Ahh thank you so much! I’m really glad you like it!! :D
Date: 07/17/19 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 6: His First
Love your characterisation of both Bill and Tom in this. Very intrigued to see where this goes :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 07/16/19 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 1: Three Months Before
Just started reading this story and I’m ready for more! It made me laugh and kept a smile on my face while reading!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/15/19 09:17 am Title: Chapter 5: I Want You
Your smut writing is always so intense and I love it, haha. I really like Bill as this Lumia character! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 07/15/19 09:01 am Title: Chapter 5: I Want You
Amazing!
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Date: 07/15/19 03:45 am Title: Chapter 5: I Want You
This was a really good chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/14/19 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 5: I Want You
Absolutely LOVE this story!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Date: 07/14/19 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 5: I Want You
Y E S. I love their chemistry and connection, everything was described so well, really! It was such a great chapter.
Can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thank you so much!