Date: 11/21/08 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked this tiny story very much.
It's small, it's simple, but it's beautiful. Really.(:
Even though I don't agree with everything, I think it's a good point of view.
And I love that last sentence, it's beautiful!
Date: 06/16/08 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful xxxx
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 03/25/08 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
that's so uplifting
at first, i felt completely heartbroken
but then, everything became light
its so sweet and touching(:
you're absolutely amazing
Author's Response: [shy mode: on] *blushes* Thank you :)
Date: 03/25/08 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
You made me cry Tink... This was beautiful, so sad and so full of emotions. I felt everything Bill felt, you really captured that sense of loss and longing. But the ending was what really got me, the sense of hope...
Immortality doesn't mean never dying. That whole paragraph really got to me. It was so beautiful and poetic. And so true.
I really am crying now Tink. And please don't put yourself down, this was not idiotic, it was not confusing and it was not bad. I think it was one of your best. Then again, I love everything you write honey!
xxx ♥♥♥ xxx
Author's Response: [shy mode: on] *blushes and hides behind hands* Thank you :) *blushes more*
Date: 03/25/08 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gosh...speechless! I loved it! I started on something like this...but failed misserably...you...you however really nailed it!
Author's Response: I tried. Thank you :D