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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/21 05:04 pm Title: An Even Trade ~*~ Across The Nile

please please update this story soon!!

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Date: 05/06/19 08:10 pm Title: Pain ~*~ A Million Miles Away

pleas update soon!!

Reviewer: Reginleif Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/19 08:52 pm Title: Pain ~*~ A Million Miles Away

Aw aw aw, I'm just the beta sweetie, the work is all yours! And I love that chapter, I so love it!

Thoth will have a hard time now Velly is going away but maybe he'll understand how much he loves him and be a better man... ah and Velly will be treated like he deserves in Crete. That was such a nice chapter. Thank you!

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/19 06:37 pm Title: Pain ~*~ A Million Miles Away

Great chapter :)

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/19 06:36 am Title: Pain ~*~ A Million Miles Away

Hm, I dont like that Velvel is supposed to go with that woman, now ... And I think it doesnt really fit in that time in that the story plays. I mean, the princess is a guest and she just wants to take something with her, that happens to be something that the pharao owns? Even if she can think about it, I dont think it fits, that she really does. And its makes it worse, that toth as a king and a man, just let her - just a princess, a guest and a woman. He could just tell her know and she, in her possition would have to accept that - and she would accept it.
To be honest I hope one of them will realise that, and that Vel will stay. It just ... naa, it really would fit to the story and the characters (mostly Toth), when the princess would just take Vel with her ...

Beside that situation now, I love the story and your writingstyle. Great Idea and work, please keep posting :)

Reviewer: Reginleif Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/19 06:48 pm Title: Alliances ~*~ There’s Always Something Hidden in the Eyes

Aweeeeee I'm so happy... travelling to Egypt, walking around with bare breasts, what else does the world have in store for Alcestis ^_^ I enjoyed the creative process with you. And I want Velly to feed me grapes too. Thoth is a lucky but stupid man. Yay for our own Jafar. Can't wait to read more. Love you.

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/19 05:53 pm Title: Alliances ~*~ There’s Always Something Hidden in the Eyes

great chapter :)

Reviewer: disavowed_27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/19 11:52 pm Title: Sovereign Sleep ~*~ Betrayal is Only Possible by Those You Trust

Please update soon!!! This is getting so good and interesting! Thanks for the update and sorry this review is late!

Author's Response: There’s no such thing as a late review. All the support is greatly appreciated. Thanks so much :)

Reviewer: Reginleif Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/19/19 03:24 pm Title: Sovereign Sleep ~*~ Betrayal is Only Possible by Those You Trust

I'm so so jealous of that fic baaabe, I wish I'd thought of that first. But I'm also extremely happy it's getting attention because you truly deserve it. You're a great writer.

I want to take Velly home too. I think I want to take all your little Billy variations home. And what a nice life we'll have together...

Author's Response: Lmao. They’re all broken and in need of some love lol. Go on but be careful with those fragile hearts ;)

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/15/19 06:16 pm Title: Sovereign Sleep ~*~ Betrayal is Only Possible by Those You Trust

Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much :)

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/19 03:13 pm Title: Sovereign Sleep ~*~ Betrayal is Only Possible by Those You Trust

this was a good chapter!
i can not wait for the next chapter!!
an i hope Velvel an Thoth will be ok an not get killed

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch :)rnGlad I’ve got yah hooked ;)rnAnd let’s find out what happens next ;)

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/19 01:55 pm Title: Sovereign Sleep ~*~ Betrayal is Only Possible by Those You Trust

I like this story very much. Its something new and fresh. please keep writing and posting :)

Author's Response: Thanks deary. I am glad you’re enjoying this story :)

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/19 05:46 pm Title: Beauty ~*~ When Desire Drives The Hand

Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you. Next one is up now. Don’t forget to check it out

Reviewer: Emorykaulitz00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/19 04:52 pm Title: Beauty ~*~ When Desire Drives The Hand

I love this story!

Author's Response: Thank you. Hope you love the next one too :)

Reviewer: Reginleif Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/19 01:50 am Title: Infatuation ~*~ Sometimes You Just Don't Understand

Awwww honeyy you're amazing, you're most welcome ^_^ Betaing this story has been lovely for me, I've told you before, it's the one story I wish I had written myself, but I know I'll guest write on it sometime hehehehe. Keep writing, I'm loving it ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks love. That dream may come sooner than you think ;)

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/19 12:00 pm Title: Infatuation ~*~ Sometimes You Just Don't Understand

this was a good chapter!!
i can not wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for this review. You're amazing and I hope to see you on future chapters :)

Reviewer: MonsoonTwc Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/19 10:10 pm Title: Infatuation ~*~ Sometimes You Just Don't Understand

I love how Thoth is an asshole and doesn’t really care for Velly , I hate when they suddenly change all for one glance and now they are sweet and caring , I love that he’s mean

Author's Response: Thanks so much. It takes a lot more to make a person change than a look. We'll see where this goes. Hope to see you on future chapters. Thanks again for this lovely review.

Reviewer: Emorykaulitz00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/19 02:50 pm Title: Infatuation ~*~ Sometimes You Just Don't Understand

Thoth is such an asshole o m g. Love the story though!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. He is isn’t he lol. Thanks for your review and hope to see you on future chapter

Reviewer: disavowed_27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/19 10:25 am Title: An Even Trade ~*~ Across The Nile

Please more. This is very interesting! Loved the 1st chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and check the recent page. I think you'll be happy with what's there.

Reviewer: Emorykaulitz00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/19 06:08 pm Title: An Even Trade ~*~ Across The Nile

I love it! Can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Next update currently in the works. Stay tuned.

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