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Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/18 09:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Hi :)
I have to say I did like this. It was very sweet, seeing Gustav's thoughts like this ^^

Since this shows how he feels like with Linda and their baby, I would say you should mark it as het and not general, and also add their pairing as a main one :) other than that, good job!

Author's Response: Well, the way I see it is this story isn’t about love, but about Gus being the father and that may (or may not?) be a reason not to put it into het category, as it’s not about his relationship with his wife. For instance, when you’ve got the story about Tom and Bill being together, you don’t put het category just because Gus and Linda appeared in one episode. I know it’s kinda different in here, but I wouldn’t like to confuse people at the beginning, suggesting this is going to be a love story. And also that’s the reason I didn’t choose to set Gus/OFC as the main pairing (still not sure if it should appear as a side one). And my perplexion continues with the characters. The story by itself takes place in doc’s office, so nobody besides him and doc don’t actually appear and these are only two characters I marked in here (Gus+OFC=doc, not OFC=Linda). I know it may be slightly confusing and considering you here as a mod I can, of course, change it if you say so, but I’m really not sure about putting it into het category.
And of course, thank you for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: Reginleif Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/18 07:37 am Title: Chapter 1

My dear, I can reassure you that I can never determine which warnings to pick, it's not as easy as it seems, feel free to text me for any questions!

I loved the story from my first time betaing, it sucks how people don't review on anything if it's not Bill/Tom (well with me they don't even review Bill/Tom ahaha). Soo thanks for this story, and happy birthday to Gus!!

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