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Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/18 01:20 am Title: Chapter 10

That monstruo did it :( Love it!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, more soon!

Reviewer: disavowed_27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/18 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 10

That was...harsh. Very descriptive. Can't wait to see what happens next and when/if he tells Tom! I feel so sorry for him. Gordon didn't waste any time, did he? Bastard. Update soon if you can!

Author's Response: More coming soon. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/18 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 10

I would scream, I know it, I would't be quiet, I couldn't be.... It is so frustrating to read this, when I am so angry the whole time, about Gordon, about Simone, but mostly about Bill. I understand this is a thing that happens many times to many people, sometimes for a long time, and they are scared, but Bill is a normal guy-teenager who was fine even a few days/weeks ago, I just can't believe he wouldn't just send Gordon to hell or laughed him in the face....
I'm sorry I still have some issues with your story... :D

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/18 01:05 am Title: Chapter 9

O__0
Oh God...Bills in for it!

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/18 12:51 am Title: Chapter 9

That creepy. Love it!

Reviewer: disavowed_27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/18 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 9

Gah!!! So intense! Was reading through some of your other stories and you're such an awesome writer! So hard to find good angst stories but you are one of the best at it that I've found so far. Can't wait until the next chapter. Poor Bill! I feel so sorry for him.

Reviewer: Grisia San Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/18 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 9

I hope that Tom will find out as soon as possible about all of that. Thanks for the chapter

Reviewer: disavowed_27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/18 12:27 am Title: Chapter 8

So excited for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/18 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 8

Oh God I have a feeling this will turn out bad for Bill *insert crying emoji*

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/18 12:34 am Title: Chapter 8

This is escalando to very dangerous!! Love it!

Reviewer: Grisia San Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/18 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 7

I hate Gordon sooo much!!! Poor Bill why he can't tell Tom or Simone? Yeah I understand that his shyness and not wanting disturb them explains it, but isn't it obvious that it will hurt all of them more later?
Thank you for chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: disavowed_27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/18 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 7

I can't wait for the next chapter! You must post it now lol! It made me sad that Bill can't tell Tom what's going on and I hope he opens up to him eventually. Gordon has him terrified. Poor baby. I can't wait. Please post soon if you can. Loved this!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate your feedback! More coming very soon!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/18 03:06 am Title: Chapter 6

I need more! Just stared reading & I love it.

Author's Response: I'll update frequently! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/18 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 6

Simone is blind because she want to be a blind Great chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! It isn't always easy to see these kinds of things, even when they happen right under your nose.

Reviewer: disavowed_27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/18 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 6

Good chapter. Can't wait to read more! Looking forward to seeing if he tells Tom or if he'll drag it out.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update frequently :)

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/18 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 6

I donīt know, I think, like a mother, I would notice something is off.... I know itīs just a story, but I have a trouble with stories where people behave different than they would in a real life... Iīm sorry, it is just like I feel it....

Author's Response: That's okay, I'm glad there are different opinions on this! I kinda want people to see that these things do happen sometimes and sometimes it can be really difficult to notice when someone's being abused, even if they do show signs.

Reviewer: elixirsix Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/18 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 6

Yep, hooked!

Author's Response: More coming soon!

Reviewer: Reginleif Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/18 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 5

I can't wait to see where this is going. Meanwhile, I could make you a banner for the story if you want ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! Seeing as I'm a little late with responding to reviews, I understand if you're no longer interested, but if you feel up for it, I would love a banner! :)

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/18 01:32 am Title: Chapter 5

And Simone dont realize that something is happening in her house and with her son? :( poor Bill.

Author's Response: I think it can be hard for some to see these kinds of things, even if it is happening to her own son and in her own house. Sad, but it does happen. Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/18 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 5

Ugh, Gordon is so creepy. I feel so sorry for your poor Bill.

Author's Response: Yep! I tend to torture my Bill characters a lot, woops. Thank you for reading and leaving a review!

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