Date: 07/06/18 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh fuck! Fuck! Fuck! I'm nervous now. Like really nervous. Someone needs to save my Billa.
Date: 07/06/18 09:09 am Title: Chapter 17
Of course he did something wrong... in the dirty mind of Gordon, Bill pertenece only to Gordon. Great chapter. In dying for the next vaciase Gordon is gonna be evil again. ;)
Date: 07/06/18 02:13 am Title: Chapter 16
I’m glad Andi is coming over. Hopefully this party will give bill at least one night of peace. Even though he deserves more, he deserves for Gordon to be beaten and locked away but please let this be a good night for him!
Also glad he’ll get to spend time with Tom as well. He needs to be surrounded by love. Ugh I wish he didn’t feel so alone and so at fault! I know that’s his reality but I wish he knew that he had people would would fight for him!!!
Great chapter obviously! Just devastatingly intense and saddening but great nonetheless
Date: 07/04/18 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh fuck. Fuck. Fuck. Fuck. I'm scared for Bill. Someone please see something's up. Or hopefully Andi can pry it out of him. I don't know how much more of this Billy can take
Date: 07/04/18 03:29 am Title: Chapter 16
"I'll be good" omg! This is killing me...So heartbreaking.
Thank you for the update!
Date: 07/03/18 02:36 am Title: Chapter 16
This is all so heartbreakingly sad, keep up the good work ;p
Date: 07/01/18 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 15
My heart...my heart is broken for Bill. I'm praying someone discovers what Gordon is during and he gets what he deserves!
Date: 07/01/18 02:47 am Title: Chapter 15
Oh god! I just want to set Gordon on fire! The amount of pain I want to inflict on that man is unbelievable but god I just want him to die. And also his mother is really starting to piss me off. Like aside from the abuse I don’t think it’s fair to try and force Bill to be buddy buddy with him at all. Like it’d be different if Bill was a small child and she wanted them to bond and get along but with his age you cannot expect him to do that. And also with his preexisting eating disorder she should’ve known bringing a stranger into his environment was going to trigger that. And with the abuse it’s 100x worse. I wish he wasn’t alone! I wish Tom lived with him! And I know his mom is blinded by love and all that other stuff but damn I’m pissed at her!
Date: 06/29/18 12:36 am Title: Chapter 15
He is feel trapped ;( poor Bill. I’m really sorry for him. Great chapter
Date: 06/28/18 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 15
I love this story , I personally know an abuse victim and they act like bill , so scared and dirty they start thinking that maybe it’s their fault .
Keep going 🖤
Date: 06/17/18 08:58 am Title: Chapter 14
Well. The evil always get his way. Love it.
Date: 06/12/18 06:04 am Title: Chapter 13
I just want to lock Billa up in my house and burn Gordon alive! Like literally set him on fire in the middle of the street. God the torment and humiliation Bill is feeling right now. And to have someone so close to home like literally in your home doing this to you. There’s no escape!
Good chapter
Date: 06/10/18 01:40 am Title: Chapter 13
I think is the first time that i read a comportamiento so genuino like Gordon had. I mean totally creepy but so real. Excellent chapter!! Love it!!!
Date: 06/06/18 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 12
That was hard to read, like the previous chapter! It's so painful even to think about how a rape victim feels. By the way, I'm still interested in making your banner, I sent you an email through the contact form but perhaps it went to your spam inbox!
Date: 06/04/18 02:41 am Title: Chapter 11
I read your comments on the story and I agree that if someone especially a teenager is hiding something it would be hard to see the signs. Plus Bill is carrying the guilt of what happened to him and dealing with the emotional and physical aftermath without trying to let on to what happened. I'm glad he went to his dad's house and I do hope he can open up to someone and get Gordon out of their lives. Poor thing doesn't know which way is up right now as he trying to come to terms with what happened. At least Tom does know something is up. Hope they find out soon so they can get him some help.
Date: 06/04/18 02:20 am Title: Chapter 12
I hope Tom can help him :( at last
Date: 06/03/18 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 12
This was such a heartfelt chapter. I absolutely love how you write the twins here although I feel so sorry for Tom. I hate that Bill got into trouble by Jorg but I do understand the grounding was caused by Gordon trying to make everything seem normal. I can't stand that he has to go back. I wish he could tell Tom but I love how he's his safe place. Also, in real life a lot of people don't feel that men and boys get raped but it does happen more often than what people think. Though it may be more rare than with females it does take place and I feel so sorry for how helpless and alone Bill feels in all of this. And poor Tom must be so confused by the downward emotional slope his twin is experiencing. I loved this chapter and this story, although it moves me to tears. Thank you for the fast updates and I've read others you've written that I may leave some reviews for. Very good work!!!
Date: 06/03/18 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh if only they knew...
Date: 06/02/18 12:41 am Title: Chapter 11
I understand that family and friends dont saltan right away to the conclusión that a kid o teen or person un general is being sexually abused... there are not evident signs and it could be another thing. And the person is not gonna airearlo a los cuatro vientos like if it would something normal that happens to somebody. Unfortunaly and saxo y is something normal today is very usual but is hard to tell because many times they’ll dont believe us. Love this fic. ;)