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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/18 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

please add a new chapter!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/18 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 14

please update soon!!
i love this story!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/18 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 14

please please add the new chapter soon

Reviewer: Emorykaulitz00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/18 04:24 am Title: Chapter 14

When is the new chapter coming?

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/18 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 14

Hopefully next chapter will be up soon :)

Reviewer: Reneekcole Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/18 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

When’s the next update??

Reviewer: tomssweetheart Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/08/18 09:29 am Title: Chapter 14

OH! I soooo need more of this d84;

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/18 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 14

please up date soon!!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/18 08:22 am Title: Chapter 14

this was a good chapter!
i can not wait for the next chapter!
an i am happy that bill an rose are now friends! an tom was dumb to leave his cell phone at his house

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/18 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 14

Love it!

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/18 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter :)

Reviewer: Laysidel_Dekie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/18 09:11 am Title: Chapter 13

Omg I’m dying!!

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/18 03:41 am Title: Chapter 13

I like it, although it seems to be a little rushed, mainly by Tom, he doesn't worry about his job at all?
And I must say it reminds me a lot the story Painting Blind by Ghostie, it is very similiar - one of my favorite stories...

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/18 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 13

Love it!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/18 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 13

this was a really good chapter!
i can not wait for the next chapter!!
i fill bad for rose but i hope that she dose not tell on them

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/18 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 12

Oh no, it's Rose isn't it? Hopefully she doesn't do anything stupid. Great chapter :)

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/18 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 12

this was a good chapter!!
i can not wait for the next chapter!
i hope that they dont get cought

Reviewer: ScimitarMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/18 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 12

OMG Bill is so obvious. That can cause Tom losing more than his fiancee

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/18 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 12

Uh oh! Love it!

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/18 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 11

Love it :)

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