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Reviewer: TomsCanadianGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/19 11:46 am Title: This And That

I’ve been away from THF for a while and finally got caught up on this last chapter. I really cannot wait to see what is going to happen next. I have ideas on what is happening to Ellie but I keep second guessing myself lol
Either way, I really enjoy this.

Reviewer: TomsCanadianGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/18 10:10 pm Title: Fast Forward

I do believe I’ve figured it out! It came to me when Tom asked why she keeps wearing the same clothes. Now I probably will get the explaining all wrong but I think Ellie is in a coma and is going back in time to help guide the twins, and look out for them. That’s how Bill and Tom both recognizes her in the present. Maybe I’m wrong but this is what I thought when reading this chapter.

I loved it and I am interested to see what happens next :)

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Indrazen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/18 04:45 pm Title: Trouble, As Usual

Looooove

Reviewer: Indrazen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/18 09:26 pm Title: I'm Not Even Here

I’m confused and intrigued :O

Reviewer: Indrazen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/18 08:58 pm Title: Keep Breathing

OMG! I’m liking this story :D

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!

Reviewer: TomsCanadianGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/18 07:18 pm Title: Trouble, As Usual

This is so interesting. I’m still not sure if I’ve figured it out yet but you’ve got me intrigued and I can’t stop reading :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy to hear that. Writing something compelling was the goal, after all. :)

Reviewer: TomsCanadianGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/18 12:09 pm Title: I'm Not Even Here

I’m really liking this story and after this chapter I wonder even more whole Ellie is to them. Guardian Angel perhaps? I guess I will find out in the next chapter?
I really wonder why this story doesn’t have any reviews. It is quite wonderful and I can’t wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story, hopefully the next chapters will meet your expectations as well. :)rnrnI figured a Tom/OFC pairing probably isn't anywhere near as popular as Tom/Bill, so I'm not surprised at the lack of reviews - although of course it's wonderful and encouraging to receive them, so I appreciate you taking the time to write one!

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