Date: 07/13/18 11:32 pm Title: Manhunt
Poor Sahar .... poor family. Seems like they are not allowed to get happy. Tom is so overwhelmed at the moment. I hope Bill is fit enough to be active again.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for this review. Hopefully you enjoy the next chapter
Date: 07/02/18 02:08 pm Title: Führer
KARI WHY ARE YOU TORTURING INNOCENT CHARACTERS AGAIN??
Soo I got featured and something tells me you have something to do with that, soooo thanks a lot! *sends virtual hugs*
NOW BACK TO OUR TOPIC. I want Billy to remember the old times and kill Geo with his own hands for what he did to Myra. Or Rei could, she's such a strong warrior, I'm proud of her, I've known her since she was a little girl *cries*.
Or preferably make an Ari / Reginleif character to kill Geo ahahahaha... I could even borrow Tomohiro's katana... my poor samurai, I make him suffer all the time :' (
I kinda feel sorry for Bill. He's coming to terms with what he did and he knows he's no longer the person he was. That must hurt like a bitch : ( But I hope he gets his shit together and protects his children once again now that they need it so much.
I'm already shipping Rei and Myra; make it happen, Kariii! I'll be the maid of honour ahaha!
Go on writing, dear, you are amazing! Check out WCBG for more drama : D
Date: 07/02/18 07:40 am Title: Führer
I was so happy about bill being nice an not high. Now that ... I'm sorry for myra.
Date: 06/29/18 07:05 pm Title: My Immortal
It's so nice to see you so creative, my dear! I love seeing the updates for this one so soon! I love your writing! And I'm very grateful for your support on my work too!
I love what you're doing with this story, I'll be tuning in next week too with much joy! Thank you for recommending my fics, this was so sweet of you!
I can't help but mention again how I love your Tom! His development is phenomenal and now he's taken the lead and he's ready to protect his family and his kingdom. Isn't he the most lovely prince?
I really admire his patience, I wouldn't be able to tolerate being in a relationship with someone like Bill has turned out. But Prince Tomas is such a sweet and loving thing, and so kind!
I'm loving this so much more than I can describe! Tune in for the next chapter of WCBG, with just the right dose of cliffhangers!
Date: 06/29/18 07:02 pm Title: Hail The King
I wanted to join the live chat so much but it is my exam period and I'm covered under a pile of books. I hope you'll do it again some day!
Meanwhile I'm leaving a review on this chapter too, because you totally deserve it and I want to make you smile!
I love Tom's development! When we first met him he was shy and insecure, and now look at him being the strong one in their relationship! I really love how he has changed over the years!
Going to the next chapter to leave a review there as well. Hell, I even feel tempted to leave multiple reviews. I so much want this to be featured, I knew it would be amazing ever since the first part!
Take care!
Ari
Date: 06/28/18 01:23 am Title: My Immortal
I'm happy you are updating so often at the moment :) Sad chapter, but we hope they will get better soon, right? :)
Date: 06/24/18 05:58 am Title: Hail The King
So happy for this early update. Can you keep doing that? :D
I liked that chapter, also if there was much drama (as always :D But I like it!)
Hope the best for them .. lets see what they do now :O
Date: 06/22/18 08:14 am Title: Welcome Back
Of course we want you around, Kariii! Even if you're torturing innocent characters, that is! You're such a lovely writer and I would like to see you featured again. I think I'll never make it myself, so I wish it with all my heart for you!
Bill seems to be a lot like his parents in some aspects. Well, I don't blame him, it's hard to be completely free from the influence of one's parents. But I think Tomi has to take the lead now. He has always been a more responsible parent and perhaps even a better ruler than Bill.
Perhaps now that Tom will know about what Reira is thinking it will help him stand up for himself and his daughter too. I think that in Tom's place I wouldn't accept Bill anywhere near me unless he went to rehab or tried to accept his children. I think only Tom can help him change.
KARI I DO WARN YOU, GIVE THEM A HAPPY ENDING. I know Japanese warriors now. They have a katana too. Just letting you know ^_^
Meanwhile, tune in for the next chapter of WCBG!
Date: 06/20/18 07:25 am Title: Welcome Back
Finally. I was so happy when I could see, that you updated this story :)
Well, Bill is really a weak and egoistic one. I hope there will be a time, when he finally grows up and be a person, who honestly loves and accepts his own family ... A 11 year timegape is really big ... Let's see what time brought them. Seems like nothing good :(
Hope for a new chapter soon :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Sorry for the time gap but don't worry. The gap will make sense.
Date: 04/24/18 05:57 pm Title: Rebirth
Awww they got married... Tomi is so sweet and he is strong too because he gave Bill another chance and now he knows that it's only him who can help his husband. Bill seems much more eager to come to grips with reality.
Such a shame for Myra, but at least she will grow up with loving parents who will not make her feel useless like Simone made Tom feel. And we still want her to be a bride for Prince Tommy!
Now my King William and Thomas are happily shipped off to a happy end, so we'll have your royal couple now! I hipw you like the epilogue and enjoy your reader award!
Author's Response: That epilogue made me really happy and I'm so thrilled to log on and see that story has been featured. It really does deserve it and it's a really good story. My royal couple is in a royal mess at the moment. However I think you'll like the next chapter
Date: 04/21/18 07:32 am Title: Rebirth
Great chapter :)
For me, to be honest, the training of the girls doesnt really matter, so it doenst matter to me, which one comes first :)
And I'm sure in for the birth :D
Author's Response: Thanks for your review
Date: 04/12/18 08:18 am Title: Heavy
I just was thinkin about this chapter and thought: I hope she will not do a chapter for in 6 months or so (in the story) but a chapter that happens directly after this chapter.
So I wanted to tell that I hope that you will write a second part of this chapter :)
And i wanted to ask if ypu could write on the beginning of the chapters, how much time passed since the happenings of the last chapter ( Like just *3 Months later* or so)
Sometimes I have trouble to get to know how much time passed, and thats kind of confusing :)
Author's Response: Don't worry. Time jumps will just be either a couple hours or a week. These next couple chapters will be different.
Date: 04/11/18 06:52 am Title: Heavy
Oh these boys are just so... boys. Billy is a warrior King and he can't grab the bull by the horns and get a grip, and Tom is very weak. One would expect that after all he has been through, he would be able to fight, if not for himself, then for Bill and their children. I hope that the condition of little Myra will bring Bill and Tom on the same side again.
Perhaps they need a surprise visit from King William and his Prince Thomas now that my dear couple is travelling. And make sure little Myra makes it, because she has to come paint happy suns with my little Thomas.
Keep writing, dear! You're absolutely amazing!
Author's Response: Billy is getting a grip don't worry. Then again I'm sure you saw that coming, or did you *looks suspiciously at reader*
Date: 04/11/18 01:26 am Title: Heavy
This really was a heavy one. I liked and hated this chapter at the same time. It's so emotional.
Bill should really work on himself. He has some problems and should see them. But also Tom. He is a really labile person, who should get stronger. Probably now is not the right moment ... hope the next chapter comes pretty soon :D
Author's Response: Love and hate.... It's funny because I both love and hate this chapter too. And Tommy has gotten so much better don't you think.
Date: 04/01/18 01:50 am Title: Bad Influence
I could feel with Bill. Reira wasnt just 'doing as she feels' she also was misbehaving. Bill was right in not letting everything slipp past his hands. As a perent he had to tell his daughter, when she did something wrong. Alone that a five yearold tells her father what he has to call her, is borderline.
What happened now is pretty sad. I hope that myra isnt having the fits from Tom. I hope its just that ... dont know ... it was too much for her? Or maybe someone did poison her food?
And I hope Tom will be okay. Somehow I have the feeling that he will loose his son, but I hope I'm wrong, because I think it would break him ...
Author's Response: Oh how far we've gone since this review. Wish I responded then but now I look back and just think, you are super awesome for writing this and there's definitely moments in which the young girl was being defiant. However check out the recent update I think you'll be pleased.
Date: 03/16/18 03:54 pm Title: Happy Suns
I'm finally heeeere, though I know I am terribly late ahahah! But better late than never! *sleeves up*
SO, I hate that you're doing this to Billy and Tomi but I hope something good is coming after all this unhappiness!
Bill with the babies, I'm dyiiiing, he's just so sweet with his daughters... such a silly dad, as we say here ahahah, but the princesses are lovely. We might get one of them married to King William's little brother, what do you think?
Once again you're torturing the amazingly sweet Prince Tomas, but I am warning you, give them a happy ending or I'm taking my gun and coming over.
By the way, I hope you don't want Angel Billy back... he's doing fine here!
Thanks for going on with this fic, it has to be one of my all time favourites! Take care! Aaaand enjoy my next chapter too!
Author's Response: Don’t worry happy days are upon them. Thanks so much for following this insanity and I have a feeling you’ll enjoy my next chapter as well. See you on the next RS
Date: 03/02/18 06:24 pm Title: Terrible Twos
Were you expecting me? Oh of course you were, because I'm not the #1 reviewer of this series for nothing! The dedication really made me smile, it is so kind of you!
I love the baby girls, I looooove them, to the point where I may secretly plan for my King William and Prince Thomas to kidnap them and adopt them... but noo, I wouldn't do that to poor Wilhelm and his Tomi...
YOU made my Bill depressed and I am not forgetting, BUT you can be redeemed if I can have Angel Billy from Black Mask in a gift box like I have always wanted ^_^
Your writing is so amazing and when I'm browsing I keep finding stories by you, and most of them are so good and so underreviewed, it's unfaiiiir! We might have to protest about how lovely Royal Secrets is and how everyone should read it.
That's all for now, a new juicy part is waiting for you on my fic and I hope to see more updates soon!
xxx
Ari
Author's Response: #1 reviewer and currently author of my fave story on this site right now lol. You didn’t think I’d cut off the king’s leg and give him a break, did you? Sweet, sweet Ari, if my characters don’t experience hell then I’m not into what I’m writing. I’m about to fly over to AOV right now. Here’s to one of our stories having a happy moment.
Date: 02/28/18 02:00 am Title: Terrible Twos
Great chapter! So dramatic and emotional and yet at the end there is the hope for getting better.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. Hope you enjoy the next one.
Date: 02/16/18 12:15 am Title: From Dusk Till Dawn
Sooooooo we have quite a lot to talk about here.
1) The princesses are sooooooo cute I kinda want to take them home... but they have an awesome Tomi and an awesome Bill so I doubt they would want to anyway
2) I will only accept what you have done to my poor soldier King if you keep both my lovebirds alive, or else the protest outside your house will happen for sure.
3) This is so underreviewed that it makes me feel bad, this is sort of unfair!
4) I'm very happy I was the reason this became a long story!
Take care of my lovebirds and don't fly to Athens with a rifle when you read my next chapter ahaha... take care!
Author's Response: I might be flying to Athens with a rifle. Amnesia?! You gave my baby amnesia.
Date: 01/19/18 05:17 pm Title: Prince Tomas
Aww I'm so happy you kept my banner! I hadn't lost any chapters, so I happily read my favourites once more. I'm expecting the next part, and don't kill anyone, or I'm booking my flight to NYC and you won't like it :P
Author's Response: Of course. This story wouldn’t exist without that first review from you asking for a sequel. Your continued support is really encouraging.