Date: 09/20/18 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 1: Another Sunday Night
I read this a few months ago, and when I realized that you didn't continue this for a long time, I thought you might not continue at all. BUT luckily you did. :D
I very much like the idea of this: the criminal-thing, growing love between those two, lies are revealed at some point, Bill comes more importat to Tom than robberies etc...
I look forward to the next chapter, thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Date: 09/20/18 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 8: Taking It A Step Further
Bill will be so pissed when he finds out ... and I'm sure he will find out. Tom is just a not-so-smart-criminal :D
Author's Response: Hehe I guess we’ll see!
Date: 05/01/18 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 7: Beautiful Stranger
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/22/18 10:05 am Title: Chapter 6: It Could Lead To Trouble
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 01/11/18 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 5: Charming & Cocky
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/13/17 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 4: Weird And Unexpected
This was cute :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/13/17 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 4: Weird And Unexpected
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/12/17 02:10 am Title: Chapter 3: Caught off guard
This looks like a nice story, I will stay tuned ;)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/09/17 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 3: Caught off guard
Looking forward to it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 12/04/17 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 3: Caught off guard
I hope it is Tom...
Author's Response: Me too!
Date: 12/03/17 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 3: Caught off guard
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 11/22/17 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 2: The First Step
I like these two chapters, but I wont continue with reading, till the story is finished, because all your storys are not finished (and some are obviously abandoned)
It always makes me sad when I like a story and the author is not finishing it. But it also is dumping time into trash when you read something that never gets an end.
I hope you will finish the story - then I will read it and write you more comments :)
The Idea and writingstyle I liked so far :)
Author's Response: Thank you for being honest. None of them are finished indeed. I have my personal reasons for that, but I promise you none of them are abandoned. All of them will get new chapters every week.
Date: 11/22/17 10:49 am Title: Chapter 2: The First Step
The second chapter is just as great as the first one. I can´t wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 11/21/17 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 2: The First Step
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 11/15/17 09:27 am Title: Chapter 1: Another Sunday Night
Hey, really great start, cant wait for more :))
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 11/14/17 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 1: Another Sunday Night
Great start!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 11/14/17 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 1: Another Sunday Night
I like this so far :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D