Date: 10/24/17 11:19 pm Title: I
aww i really really liked this story! please write a sequel or maybe a couple of one shots ? < 3
thanks for writing it and sharing it with us :)
Author's Response: Thank you 😊 and I might!
Date: 10/21/17 02:01 pm Title: IV
Super little story!!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 10/20/17 05:38 am Title: IV
I'm sad this is over, I would have wished to see more ! Happy of how it turned out though :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sad too. There might just be a one shot in the future for Father Kaulitz. I guess we'll have to wait and see. ;)
Date: 10/19/17 04:53 pm Title: IV
I have enjoyed this fic, but perhaps a sort of more plot was quite necessary. I felt that you wanted to give some images from an unlikely relationship and leave other facts up to the reader, but it does feel a little incomplete. I would like to read a sequel, perhaps about Bill getting his life together, maybe having his face restored, and about how Tom will resist -or not resist- falling in love ^_^
I liked it very much overall, good work dear ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you! I agree with your feedback. A sequel may or may not happen. I'll know by this weekend what I decide to do. :)
Date: 10/19/17 04:30 pm Title: IV
I liked the idea and I liked your writingstyle as always. I also liked these 4 chapters.
Yet, I couldn't find a hold on the story. There are so many thngs I'm missing. Like ...
What happened the next morning and day, when Tom took Bill to his home the first time?
What happened the last months?
Why is Tom in love with Bill?
Did they had sex? Do they have an inoffical relationship?
What happens in the future? Is bill going to get away from the drugs?
Are they becoming one thing if they arent yet? Are Tom telling Bill he loves him?
If I would think a few minutes about it, there would be more questions for sure :D
Long text, short thing:
I liked the story, but I think if it would have been muuuuch longer it would be far more better.
Still thank you for sharing it with us!
Author's Response: Thank you. I agree with your points, however, a lot of those questions are up to the reader to decide. It would have been a good idea for a much longer story, but I felt like there was only so many places I could take it. The idea came to me on a whim and I felt like if I would have dragged it out, it would have made for a very anti-climatic story. Frankly, I believe that if I was to make it longer, it would have been downright boring! That's why I took it in the direction I did. I appreciate the constructive criticism. I have been toying around with the idea of a one-shot that takes place in the future, but I'm not 100% on that yet. If it does happen, I hope you'll offer your feed back as well. Thank you. :)
Date: 10/19/17 04:16 pm Title: IV
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 10/19/17 03:57 pm Title: IV
Beautiful an amazing! I would love to read a sequel!!!
Author's Response: I'm debating a sequel or one-shot that's set in the future. Maybe where Bill is clean? :)
Date: 10/19/17 06:26 am Title: III
Seems like we'll get more, I'm happy of this !
It's a complicated situation they're getting into... I can't wait to see what's next !
Author's Response: Very complicated! That's why Tom has had his guard up. But all will be revealed soon. :)
Date: 10/19/17 01:38 am Title: III
Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! The ending is complete and will be posted tomorrow. :)
Date: 10/18/17 10:18 pm Title: III
I really like this story hope it gets long
Author's Response: Thank you! Unfortunately there is only one chapter left. :( it will be posted tomorrow and that concludes Father Kaulitz and addict Bill. :(
Date: 10/18/17 01:55 pm Title: II
This is really interesting. I can understand Tom's worry, but... Bill breaks my heart, to be honest.
I can't wait to see the ending !
Author's Response: Bill's character is pretty heartbreaking. I agree. It was definitely a challenge to write him in this way. The ending will be posted today so stick around. :)
Date: 10/18/17 08:57 am Title: II
I liked this second chapter as well!
Now we know how they met the first time. Bill seem to had a rough life and Tom is very kind. Maybe too kind ? Ahah, I don't know if I would say "come to my place" to a stranger.
I guess Bill was still there after Tom's wake up the next day ? ;) aha.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it so far. Tom has too much of a big heart but he's slowly starting to realize that and pull back from Bill, even though it's difficult. I wouldn't invite a stranger over, either, but Tom feels the need to help Bill. ;)
Date: 10/18/17 08:54 am Title: I
I like this first chapter !
Even if it's hard to picture Bill without teeth! And "Father Kaulitz" is very interesting !
Author's Response: It's VERY hard to picture such a beautiful man without teeth, but unfortunately, it suits him in this story! I'd like to think that some day my little addict Bill gets teeth again. <3
Date: 10/17/17 09:34 pm Title: I
Loving it!
Author's Response: Thank you! The second part is up now.
Date: 10/17/17 07:01 pm Title: I
I'm in love *-*
Author's Response: Aw thank you! I'll update soon.