Date: 10/10/17 02:24 am Title: Coming Home
I really loved it, a broken Tom just melt my heart 💜💜
Author's Response: Thank you d84;a039; Me too but he gets better!
Date: 10/09/17 03:34 pm Title: Try
It's a really nice story! I really liked the way you described Tom's feelings and Bill's attempts to help him. It broke my heart seeing Tom like this c.c I hope you'll do a kind of sequel to this!
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, there is currently one in the works. It will be called On Days and it will be posted Tuesday and Wednesday so keep an eye out. :)
Date: 10/09/17 03:10 pm Title: Coming Home
Amazing chapter. It's very well written and portayed very realistically. I'm just wondering Is there going to be a flashback to the incident? That would make it easier to comprehend Tom's feelings. Other than that I like it very much. :)
Author's Response: As a two shot, I was going to leave it as is. However, I've gotten a lot of feedback in regards to this story and it seems like people would enjoy another piece or another add on so I have decided to make another two shot as a sequel to this. It will be called On Days and it will be posted over the course of Tuesday and Wednesday. So I hope that it will answer the questions people have. :) thank you for the review and I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 10/09/17 02:30 pm Title: Try
this was a good story!
you should do a sequel to this!
Author's Response: Thanks! It's in the works!
Date: 10/09/17 12:44 pm Title: Try
Really good two-shot.
I liked the situation, the thoughts, the actions, etc.
I just would like if there will be more of that univers. I would like to get better to know what happened to tom, like in a flashback or so. And how they will do in the future. Also the sex - Bill could show tom slowly, that it isnt bad, and let him be the top(dont know who was top and bottom) Also it would be good to see what happened with the rapist. Was he arrested or did he ran away?
There are so many things that you could write about :)
Author's Response: Thank you. It was supposed to be written as-is and stand alone, but I've gotten enough interested in a sequel that I have started to work on one. It's called On Days and will be posted Tuesday and Wednesday. I've listened to your suggestions and several others so I hope that once you read the sequel, your questions will be answered. :)
Date: 10/09/17 10:38 am Title: Try
Well, I think I figured out what was amiss since my last review... I think it's how in your stories they call each other "baby" and are so couple-y. There's something OOC about it in my opinion. Also, this fic is really missing that third part, don't you think? Haha. Especially with the cliffhanger at the end. ;) Good fic though. Tough subject. Well done.
Author's Response: Honestly, I was going to leave it as a two shot, but you and a couple of other people have been saying that a third part or sequel would be nice so I'm currently working on it and I hope it clarifies things and really delivers! It's called On Days and will be posted over the course of Tuesday and Wednesday so give it a chance and let me know what you think and if I provided a satisfactory conclusion. I'm glad you enjoyed Off Days though and thanks for the reviews. d84;a039;
Date: 10/08/17 10:44 pm Title: Try
How awful for Tom. Bills such a great, caring & compassionate lil brother to care for Tom like that. Really enjoyed reading.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 10/08/17 03:17 pm Title: Coming Home
I don't read twincest. I never read twincest. I don't know why, but somehow I just can't make myself read about them being related, even though I know some of the best stories on the page are, after all, twincest.
But, for some reason, I opened this. I don't know why, but I did, and I started reading, and I got stuck. Even more surprising, I liked it. A lot. This is really, really nicely written and the way you describe what Tom's going through... damn. I don't even have words.
I never thought I would say this, but I'm really looking forward to the next part!
Author's Response: Wow! That truly means a lot. Thank you so much for the thoughtful words and kind review! I hope you enjoy the second installment. It will be posted today!
Date: 10/08/17 03:07 pm Title: Coming Home
I really like it, I think you have assessed the psychological state of a rape victim in a very realistic way. And Bill is such a great caregiver. That kiss meant a lot to him! I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you're enjoying it. I hope you like the second part! It will be uploaded today.
Date: 10/08/17 12:02 pm Title: Coming Home
I really like what I'm reading! Great job, can't wait to read the rest! :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 10/08/17 05:01 am Title: Coming Home
Poor Tom :'(
Author's Response: I know :(