Date: 01/04/18 10:10 pm Title: 2. connection
OMG
first of all i forgot to mention the painfully obvious but i love model bill being photographed in dresses for the cover of vogue. i want him to have this fictional career. also, i just love how much i can feel tom's love for him, i feel so jealous of their relationship even if its painful for tom right now. ALSO I CAN'T BELIEVE TOM SAID THAT ahhhhhhhh what will happennnnnn
Author's Response: wouldn't it be great if Bill actually had that career. and I'm happy you can feel Tom's love, he does have an abundance of it! THANK YOU <3
Date: 01/04/18 09:59 pm Title: 1. up in the air
HOW did i miss this gem. i totally love tom lusting hopelessly after bill and unable to talk about his feelings, and famous gorgeous model bill being wanted by the entire world but having found something special in tom. i can't wait to meet bill and i HAVE to know if he feels the same!!
Author's Response: do you know I still get giddy every time I see a review from you?? ahhh I'm so happy you like my writing <3
Date: 11/27/17 10:42 pm Title: 2. connection
Wow I’m really glad I decided to read this after catching up on a few other stories and finishing some others! Oh snap! I love you! In chapter 2??!? This is gonna be good isn’t it!?!? Excited for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Ahhh, I'm happy you're excited! The next (and last) chapter is now up, so I hope it resolves the story in a way that works for you! Thanks for leaving such a lovely review! <3
Date: 11/22/17 07:57 am Title: 2. connection
- Should Tom tell anyone, Bill would destroy his reputation and make him practically unemployable in the field of law.
If Tom remembered correctly (and he was pretty sure he did), Bill’s exact words had been turn me on, get me off, and I’ll show myself out. -
I don't know why, but I loved this part so much, especially since we know how well that went, hah!
Also - So maybe he encouraged Bill to stay, maybe he offered to make food and maybe he picked days that would allow them to sleep in together—but he only dared to because Bill had, in some small way, started it first. -
Dammit, Tom. You are so in love with the guy. Just... damn! Bill better not be stubborn about this (or well, not TOO stubborn) because oh my god, I will rip those pretty dreads off your head! AND IT WILL HURT!
Ugh I love this so much. Imagining Bill sitting there, with his gorgeous dreads, being the most stunning person on earth is just too damn much. And Tom. Tom Tom Tom, you are so in love. I love you, you dork.
Now go write me more. Or I will find ways to hurt you! (jk I love you)
Thank youuuuuuu < 3
Author's Response: You know, writing in every chapter about how pretty Bill is with dreads isn't actually making me like his dreads!look better, hahaha. Oh well? At least you've finally received your payment for not making me sleep on a park bench :D Thank you for all your encouragement and butt-kicking, this would never have gotten done without you <3
Date: 11/21/17 08:37 am Title: 2. connection
Love this!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 11/20/17 11:11 pm Title: 2. connection
Can NOT wait for you to update! This is by far the biggest cliffhanger I've ever seen and I'm not sure I can handle this..
Author's Response: I am so so sorry to have kept you waiting for so long, but the chapter is here now! Thank you for reading <3
Date: 11/20/17 01:58 pm Title: 1. up in the air
Oh god!!! Please Bill, don’t turn Tom down! You mean girl, leaving us hanging like that!
I capital-letters-love the way you write! It felt like I was right there, with Bill&Tom having breakfast, and, if chapter three is anything like we all are hoping for, I so want to be there as well...
Hope you post soon enough, 😘!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, it made me super happy! Chapter three is finally up! :)
Date: 11/20/17 12:42 pm Title: 2. connection
I've some things i would love to say, but I don't know how to write them…so I'm just gonna say: Tom you might listen to Georg, but, just when Bill let you know with signs that you must said them, cause if he doesn't, well…things won't be pretty.
And, I like the pic so far, so don't worry about everything, just enjoy your writing and let it be, trust me, its pretty great, like it…
Bill, please don't break Tomis heart T^T
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words! Chapter 3 has now been posted, so you can find out what happens to Tom's heart :)
Date: 11/20/17 08:26 am Title: 2. connection
Oh, such a cliffhanger!!!!! This shouldn't be allowed!!!! ;D
Author's Response: The cliffhanger is finally solved, chapter 3 is up! Thank you for reading!!!
Date: 08/11/17 09:18 am Title: 1. up in the air
Oooooohhhh, an emotional rollercoaster? This is so so good. I hope you can stop worrying and just enjoy the process, but I know that's hard. I'm currently in a pattern of starting strong and gen second guessing myself out of finishing anything. Anyway, BILL HAS TO LOVE TOM BACK. Anything else would be unacceptable. I love this.
Author's Response: Thank you! I know that pattern, that’s been mine too for the past couple of years. I hope you’re managing to break out of it, and I hope you’ll enjoy chapter two of this story :) Thanks for leaving love! <3
Date: 08/03/17 08:32 am Title: 1. up in the air
Oooh I definitely like this one so far! Can't wait for more, no matter how long it takes! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Second chapter is now up! :)
Date: 08/02/17 10:45 pm Title: 1. up in the air
I love this so freaking much. Your writing is amazing, I can't even begin to explain it. i can't wait for the next chapter. I mean you have told me what will happen but I am sure it's going to blow me away anyway. Reading your writing is always a joy!
Also the message from Bill.... well. I'm not even ashamed to admit that now I'm going to be thinking about them doing it there 8-)
You're so amazing *whispers*. You are amazing and I am forever grateful that Sandra put us in that groupchat together because you are a wonderful person and dammit, I MISS YOU! a lot. I can't wait to see you again in Berlin!
Author's Response: Reading your reviews is always a joy! And I can’t believe this review is from before Berlin... I am ashamed at my own (lack of) speed. You’re an amazing person too, thank you for always being such a positive person in my life!! <3
Date: 08/02/17 10:09 pm Title: 1. up in the air
For meeeeeeee! And you should be very happy you got that nice mattress to sleep on instead of the streets, just saying.
I love this. I love Bill already, because he's pretty, and of course Georg is right. They are so a couple, even if they are too stubborn to admit it. I hope Bill won't be too difficult. You love Tom you stupid gorgeous creature you. Ugh I hate him. Too perfect.
I'm so tired I'm not making sense but I love them and I love this and I love YOU and I think you should come back and sleep on my floor soon because I MISS YOU.
But we'll meet in BERLIN! YES! BERLIN!
Okay, I'm tired, I'm sorry. I love you, thank you for this you are the best < 3 now go write me more ok < 3
Author's Response: I can’t believe you wrote this review before Berlin. Like. I am not fast [insert Baymax gif]. Anyway, THANK YOU! For the mattress, and for generally being such an amazing & supportive friend. Chapter three is in the works! <3
Date: 08/02/17 05:29 am Title: 1. up in the air
Ooh yes I love this, and I think Tom is worrying for nothing, Bill is obviously head over heels for him because well, it's Tom :D
Author's Response: It is hard not to love Tom, isn’t it? Thank you so much for always reviewing, I’m so happy you enjoy my stories <3 Chapter two is up now!
Date: 08/01/17 06:23 pm Title: 1. up in the air
*kicks Annie*
This is awesome, I love it ! I really like your writing a lot < 3
The tension you settle between Bill and Tom (though we only see Tom's point of view - I can't wait to see what Bill thinks of it) is really catching, we can really feel it - and I love that, I love how real it feels.
I'm really sad for Tom though, for how he's convinced it's not possible/gonna happen, though he yearns like hell for it...
Also, I love how you described Bill's career, it feels so real, I could see it in front of me ! I'm sad it didn't happen in real life haha.
I LOVE YOU THIS WAS AWESOME YOU ADORABLE HUMAN BEING
Author's Response: Thank youuuu! And I can’t stop laughing at you & Annie kicking each other, you guys are the best xD Chapter two is up now (as you know, haha) and I’m working on chapter three today, promise. Love you too! <3