Date: 09/23/18 08:36 am Title: Needles and Nightmares
It's amazing work!!! I think it's the first fic ever where Bill is Tom's son and this parental love for Bill from both Bushido and Tom looks so more great and touching than any work with earthquaking love with hot sex etc and etc.
And it's one of rare works where I like Andreja. I hope that she won't die.
I love your works, you can show the real love without having to Bill and Tom do each other, I like this kind of works too, but sometime platonic relationships have more meaning and feelings.
Wait all your updates...
Author's Response: I am sorry it's taken me so long to respond. As always I appreciate your reviews so much! I love writing but unfortunately my laptop has crashed but I've been writing on an old computer that doesn't have internet just yet. I'm working on that. I work a lot but plan on updating just as soon as I get the chance. Thank you so much again. I love the dynamic between Bill and Tom here. I love writing Bushido as the good guy for once instead of a jerk. I will continue this, it's just going to take some time! Thanks again, hunny!
Date: 04/22/18 09:40 am Title: Needles and Nightmares
I want to know what happens next!!! Also, I want Anis to find a "mother" (a woman) to be a better female role model than Andreja and gets her pregnant. As the time passes, Tom is fighting for the custody of his son and Anis realizes he is in love with Bill. End of my story. What do you think? Maybe a really good idea for another story...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and I will be updating very soon. Normally I don't write love stories but I plan on updating Playhouse Palace eventually and I'm taking that story in a similar direction. Thanks again for this! I really appreciate the review and will update asap!!
Date: 04/08/18 06:37 am Title: Needles and Nightmares
Sorry for the delayed review. I love the way you've introduced the connection between Tom and Bill in this chapter. With Bill being so weak and vulnerable and his memories resurfacing he's feeling drawn to his biological dad. And love how Bushido is right on it, knows there's something funny about the way Bill reacts to Tom and how Tom is with Bill...his jealously is sad but funny, bristling male and fatherly protectiveness. Not sure I would have left my son alone with the two cops if I was suspicious like that, but I guess he knew who they were and where to find them. Oh, Andreja, listen to Bushido and Georg, you'very seen bad things happen on the street, don't think you know it all and nothing will happen to you. And this mysterious boyfriend we haven't met yet, the danger bell is ringing in my head. So, will Georg get to tell her Tom's secret or will they get interrupted. Next chapter, please, sweetie. Love you xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review, as always. I absolutely live for them. Idk exactly how the next chapter will go but I hope to update soon. Andreja certainly has a wild side to her and I am really excited to figure out if she'll find out straight away or if something will happen. It's so hard keeping up so much at once but I plan on getting some real alone time just to write soon. Idk whether id have left my kids alone with them either but Anis trusted them because they've been helping Bill. Trust me a lot of this goes downhill very soon just like with all my fiction. Thanks again as always and I will try to update again soon and give a better and faster review response. Love you to pieces. 💚💚💚
Date: 04/06/18 02:11 am Title: Needles and Nightmares
Wow. So dramatic. I Love it! Bill is suffering like i Love it. And is so good that anyone more than just Tom y Georg know about Tom being Bill‘s biológical father. Anis is jelous wich is awesome jajajajajaj. Love it!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for an awesome review! As always and I will update this asap!! Sorry for the slow updates. Work and life are hectic and I'm also working on my other stories! Will post asap!
Date: 04/04/18 02:57 am Title: Sleepless Results
Ok, first of all: my favorite writer is back and i couldn't be happier. Literally, i only log in to see if you're back. I'm so happy i finally got lucky.
Secondly: Tom ia Bill's father? Wut? I wasn't expecting that at all and i am kinda shocked. 😳 Poor Bill, i guess he's really traumatized by everything that happened but I absolutely love the way Bushido takes care of him. 💟
It's really late where i live and I'm sorry I'm not leaving a longer review but you know you're my favorite writer. CANT WAIT TO KEEP ON READING. and yes please, I'm also waiting the updates of the other histories 😍😭 I hope you don't disappear again and once again: Thank you. 💪🏽🙏🏽
Author's Response: awwww!!!! Babe, thanks. This brought tears to my eyes. My writing certainly isn't for everyone, but I enjoy it so much. It takes down a lot of stress in my life. It's okay about not leaving a longer review. I'm happy to have the loyalty and that you actually enjoy my writing. I'm almost done with chapter 4. I'd like to get back to the other stories, as well and I always have other ones going on in my head. I'm a bit older than most people on here and work a full time job where I manage a property and then have two children, a husband, etc...so sometimes, real life gets in the way and pulls me back some. But, thank you so much for the kind review and for being a huge supporter of my fiction. I'll update again soon. Promise!!!
Date: 04/03/18 07:36 am Title: Sleepless Results
Hi, sweetie. So,so happy you're still writing. Such a lot revealed in this chapter. Honestly I think Tom is probably completely in shock to discover his little boy is alive, and of course all grown up now. I don't know if he's being self-sacrificing and sensible by not rushing over to Bushido's or whether it's part terror at possibly being rejected. After all, he's right, his information would rock Bill/Patrick's world completely. But Georg is also right, Bill has a right to know and I can't see Tom living with the knowledge longterm and not doing something with it. I wonder if, deep in his subconscious, it was as much seeing Tom as being assaulted and traumatised that brought Bill's memories back. Maybe deep, deep down he recognised Tom too. Can't wait for more, I'm dying to find out what happens when Tom and Bill come face to face again, and how Bushido will take it, after all he sees Bill almost as his son. And Bu is so amazing at taking care of his 'kids'. Love, love it and so happy you're finding time to write in your busy day. Love you too xx
Author's Response: Oh, wow! I'm so excited to have a review from you!!! I actually write late into the night, push myself at work, then crash for about three or four hours at a time after I tend to the kids and things around the house. Besides work, I've actually withdrawn myself back into my writing because it's the only thing that makes sense anymore. And let's just face the fact that I'm never going to stop writing fanfiction and actually start writing my original characters lol!!! I've already brought a few things together with the next chapter and I'm not sure how Bill and Bushido will find out that Bill's his son yet. Everyone is oblivious except for Tom and Georg and it seemed that Georg knew instantly whereas Tom went with a hunch. I think it's both with Tom. I think he's trying to figure it all at in his head at this point, but he knows what a disruption it will cause if he just darts in and tries to play daddy after all these years. I don't know if I meant to reveal that much about Bill's past in this chapter, but I had to tie a few loose ends together in doing so, so that the next couple of chapters make sense. There's more to come. I'm working on the next one and hopefully I'll have it posted by the end of the day since it's my early day at work(been working 6 days a week and finally got my assistant trained enough for a tiny break)and I'm all caught up with other things I needed to take care of. Thank you so much for reviewing and I'll send you a message when I get this one finished. Oh, yeah and I'm also going to try to get my email fixed or another one set up that way I can write you when I get a chance. Love you to, sweetie. Have a wonderful week!!!!
Date: 04/02/18 08:56 am Title: Sleepless Results
I read since chapter one again and i m so happy that you come back. Your fics are all so good. Now how Tom is going to tell them that Bill is his son? Love it!!!
Author's Response: As always, it is my please, Ninel!!! Thank you for always faithfully reading and reviewing my stories. I love writing them. Stay tuned. The next chapter is in the works and I'm trying to get back to my other stories, as well.
Date: 09/23/17 01:37 pm Title: Doll Baby
I just read these 2 chapters and I'm fascinated!! You're my favorite writer here, please keep on going🙏 I can't wait to see the development of this story, I want to know what will happen to Bill and Andreja😳
Author's Response: Thank you so much and I will. Just haven't had a whole lot of time lately. I'm going to try to work on a little of it today. Thanks again, faithful reader! I'll update asap!
Date: 09/19/17 04:34 pm Title: Doll Baby
Andreja is wonderful, she's like a real big sister to Bill. It's a pity she doesn't listen to Bushido's advice, but I guess she thinks she's a all grown up and doesn't need 'daddy' running her life. Great to see Bushido in action in defence of his kid. Glad the pervy asshole got the worst of Bu's anger. I'm wondering why homicide detectives were assigned to a punch up in a club, but guess maybe because it's a place where young people hang out. There's certainly an instant connection felt between Bill and Tom, and Georg knows something is going on. I can imagine him calling Tom out on it when they're alone. So very creepy the stalker watching, sizing up his potential victims and anticipating what he'll do to them. Really gives me the shivers...so great writing. I know your circumstances aren't great right now but hope you're working on the next chapter. Can't wait to read more...also scared for Andreja and Bill. Love you, Helen xx
Author's Response: Thank you for taking time to review. Your words of encouragement really keep me going. I am replying to this one first to answer your question. Okay, I completely forgot to add it but I'll tie that loose end up in the next chapter or so. The club is new. They went to check out what happened because well, you're right, it's a place teenagers hang out, a dive that would attract people like Bill and Andreja, plus teenage boys were involved and they also wanted to check out the guy who nearly sexually assaulted Bill. Sorry I forgot to put that in there. I'm really bad with loose ends, but soon I'm taking some free writing classes to help me with that. I love Bushido in this, as well, and he has a past that will come to light soon. Why he so willingly opens his doors to young strangers and loves as freely as he does. Thank you again for taking time with this. You have no idea how much I appreciate your reviews. Hope you're having a great weekend. Love you!
Date: 09/19/17 02:52 pm Title: Blood in the Snow
Sorry I haven't reviewed before. This is a really great first chapter. I'm loving Georg looking out for Tom, and you've really turned Bushido into a good guy. Tom really comes across as a tortured soul using his own tragedy as the motivation to bring scumbags to justice. Bill is lucky to have Bushido caring for him, but he really needs therapy to deal with the memories of his past that plague him. Natalie makes a great reporter, she may have been grossed out by Tom's graphic description but she didn't let it put her off. Georg was there to help her and shame his superior into being less callous. And then there's the shadowy figure of the killer. The last few lines are really chilling, knowing that he's now targeting Bill. Great chapter and a really suspense filled ending. I'm off to read chapter 2 now. Love, Helen xx
Author's Response: Thank you, as always, my friend. I had a really hard time getting this one started, and now I'm having a hard time continuing it. I know you've been busy and I know your time is valuable. Thanks so much again and again for reviewing. I have half of this written in my head, but it's been so hard getting it down. Eventually, when I get better, I'd like to use it as inspiration for an actual book, with the characters' names changed and some of the plot reworked. I will also work to tie up any loose ends I'm leaving out and write from different perspectives as I usually only work from Tom or Bill's in most of my stories. Hope your day is going well and that you will also be writing again soon. Love you to pieces!
Date: 07/29/17 09:33 pm Title: Doll Baby
Another Amazing and exciting chapter. Blood is thicker than water and Tom yet has to confirm his suspicions.Bill is his own flesh and blood.
As for the stalker je was
Author's Response: Looks like u didn't finish the review but thank you so much for sticking with this. Don't worry. Everything will come full circle soon. Will try to update tonight hun.
Date: 07/29/17 03:27 am Title: Doll Baby
I loveeeeeee this can't wait for the update!!
Author's Response: And I loooooove that u reviewed. Thank you!
Date: 07/29/17 01:32 am Title: Doll Baby
Ive always loved tour works! I love the way you write! I'm glad you ar back!
Poor Bill he had a broke nose auch. He is a little angel ;). And Tom I have a guess ahhhhhh!!!! So sweet. And that maniac agh so interesting! Love it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie. I love love love your loyalty and dedication to my work. I'm actually turning this one into a novel I think with some changes to it down the road. Glad that you are glad I'm back lol!!! I'm happy to have the few reviewers that I do. Thank you so much for sticking with me on this. I'll post again soon.
Date: 07/27/17 07:33 am Title: Blood in the Snow
Great job doll
U've got one follower for sure
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It's not everyone's cup of tea but I appreciate what I get. I will post again asap!
Date: 07/26/17 11:38 am Title: Blood in the Snow
Love it!!!!
Author's Response: Ty as always sweetie!