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Reviewer: Reginleif Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/17 08:10 am Title: When In War

Hiii! I adore this series so much! I loved the chapter! Tom is really starting to mature, I know Bill will be able to count on him. And Billy is always the sweetest King... I'm really expecting their first time and the baby! They will be so adorable parents!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Working on the next one. Should be up soon. Hopefully lol.

Reviewer: leidyaradia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/17 12:00 pm Title: When In War

I love this story. I am just waiting more love scenes between Bill and Tom, they getting married, having sex, having children conceived in a natural way... I am craving for that all, hahaha

Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about all the story and the slow plot development. I wanted to be sure that everything is covered so there isn't any plot holes. Don't worry you'll be getting something on your list very soon. ;)

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/17 02:29 pm Title: When In War

Yeah, I just mean the logic :) When you can choose between a healthy body or a body that has epileptic, then you would choose the healthy body. They didnt said why they choose tom to carry the babys. That you have other plans for Bill is something different ;) But they act as it would be so logic that Tom will carry the baby, even if it's not (in their world) It doesnt mean that Tom cant carry a baby, I know that people with epilepsie can carry babys, but you cant as I said, when you can choose ...

So dont missunderstand me :) It's just that I as a reader cant understand why the characters choose that way because they didnt said it. That I would have preferred if Bill would carry the baby is something different :)

Author's Response: Oh okay, I get it now. Sorry. I must of misread that. The issue with reading words, they can easily be misconstrued. So I apologize for my defensiveness. thanks so much for taking the time to clear that up. It really means a lot because I wouldn't want to be misunderstood either. I guess your right though, I have my logic but I didn't really give them any reason for doing it. I tried hinting that Tom's getting curious about his brother's actions. So trust me, all shall be explained.

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/17 01:14 pm Title: When In War

I always understood it that they want to do it the other way around. I mean, that Bill will carry the child (Yeah, till the last part from a few weeks ago)
To be honest, I would have prefered it, because ... I dunno, it would have make Tom a little less devot.
But okay. I ust dont understand why they want to do it this way. Tom has to worry because of his fits, and it sure isn't healthy for a baby to grow in a epileptic body. They have/had a choice, so why do they want to carry their babys in the sick body, instad of the healthy?

Hm, and now there will be a war ... not a good beginning to start a family. Didn't say Bill that Andreas would never start a war, because he dont wants to marry him? Sad that he wasn't right ...

We'll see what comes next ^^

Author's Response: I have so much planned for this story don't worry. It'll all come full circle. I did make it seem like Bill would carry the child but then I got a genius idea for Bill and him being pregnant wouldn't work lol. So yes Tommy is carrying the children. However, just wanted to point out while it is a risk, women with epilepsy (including my mother) have children all the time. It's all a matter of caring for the patient and making sure that the medication they take to prevent their seizures doesn't affect the development of the child. Pregnancy and epilepsy just means more doctor's visits and anal retentive attention to details. The neurologist must work hand in hand with the OB-GYN throughout the entire pregnancy and a healthy baby can be brought into this world. I don't consider epileptics to be sick. Knowing that seizures can occur despite medication, it's a matter of making sure that if they have a seizure, they're safe and seek medical attention.

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