Date: 04/22/18 11:32 pm Title: Washing away the old
please update this story soon!
Date: 06/13/17 02:29 pm Title: Washing away the old
Loved it! Just read 1-9 in one sitting. Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Date: 06/12/17 08:40 am Title: Washing away the old
“I want you to be mine.” almost sound like a proposal or something. Very ambiguous and I like it. I wonder if Bill had something else in his mind when he said it.
The shower part was exciting and soft at the same time. That was so good to read and I was waiting the moment attraction between them will arrive. Even if I'm sure Bill is attracted to Tom since a long time. Ah, alcohol is sometimes good.
Date: 06/05/17 03:43 pm Title: Washing away the old
Thank you for this one! I just can't get over Toms cuteness, and Bill *-* But I am a little bit worried about him, Ricardo has to disappear.. Hope the next one comes soon! :-)
Date: 06/04/17 11:13 am Title: Washing away the old
Ups, a little while in the washroom, and Tom's eyes opened. :-D And we must not forget the bit of that alcohol. Just as Bill asked Tom to be his man, it was a bit ambiguous. It is clear that he needs men on his side because he feels there will be a group of people against him. They'll want to get rid of the ship and command. But he could think of something else too. Oh, how fantasy works. ;-)
I'm curious as to how the story will go on.
Thanks for the chapter and look forward to the next one.
Date: 06/04/17 09:29 am Title: No more prisoners
I understand Tom's disillusionment, but on the other hand they could just kill him and throw his body into the sea. Because he's an unwanted witness and Kaulitz in addition.
Thank you for the chapter.
Date: 06/04/17 08:18 am Title: Inspected
I feel that the whole world has turned out. I have an unpleasant feeling from that inspector. What will he want to do with Tom? When Gustav spoke of the mysterious place of the pirates, I was wondering why they were taking Tom there. There will be only problems.
Thanks for the chapter.
Date: 06/03/17 11:34 am Title: Washing away the old
Yes, I loved it! Especially the showering ;)
Date: 06/03/17 10:44 am Title: Washing away the old
oooh Pirate Tom... I sure like the sound of that lol I guess we will see if Tom grows to like it or if he will always consider himself a free man.
I was wondering when one of them would start to have feelings for the other. Although, I do feel like Bill has had his eye on Tom for a while, but he's just letting Tom adjust to the idea lol
I have a feeling I know what the paper is that Ricardo had Tom sign. I feel like it has something to do with Ricardo possibly taking over things from Bill, and when and if he does, he will have that paper to use against him, to show that Tom is not in fact on Bill's side like he claims. I don't know, just a thought lol I will see, though.
Great chapter! I'm really enjoying this!
Date: 05/31/17 03:17 pm Title: No more prisoners
This is my second one, but literally I can't wait for the next chapter for real. If the new chapter comes before Sunday, I will be the happiest girl in the world!!! ^^
Author's Response: aww I tell you, I am just as excited to release it so your wish shall be granted~
Date: 05/31/17 03:10 pm Title: No more prisoners
Poor Tom, he must be terrified, but he will actually be a real pirate, it soooo interesting, and finally Bill showed him some feeling. Okay, Bill is still distant, cause he is the captain, but maybe he is not so tough with Tom :P I am waiting for the next one, it is so exciting. Thank you so much :-) CUTE PIRATE TOM *-*
Author's Response: Oh yes now the interesting stuff begins! Bill is a more distant character but it doesn't mean there's nothing there ;) Hehe your review made me smile, thank YOU!
Date: 05/31/17 02:40 pm Title: No more prisoners
Yes, finally, Tom is a pirate!!! Somehow I believe he will love it!
But I worry about that paper Ricardo made Tom to sign...what that was about???
I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: finally~~ I think we were all waiting for it. Hehe that's a secret I'm gonna keep for a little longer ;) thanks again!
Date: 05/31/17 08:31 am Title: No more prisoners
Tom is a pirate now ! I knew something like that was coming, that he have to become a pirate or he'll be killed. I'm glad he's still alive. I don't know why but I think Tom will enjoy being a pirate, not the fight or killing people -if they have to do so-, but the adventure and discovering new things and new horizon (and Bill, of course!).
Now I wonder what Ricardo made him sign ? Maybe Tom's gonna be in trouble...
I also wonder if Georg try to find Tom or not. If he's on the sea for his brother.
I can't wait for more !! :)
Author's Response: Yup it's the obvious answer to this situation. It's the way we humans are, we become similar with those who we spend time with. That should somehow answer some of your guesses also ;) To be honest even I don't have all the answers because plans change (to better) in the writing process. So we'll see how things are gonna go in the end. See you again soooon, I like seeing you often!
Date: 05/31/17 07:51 am Title: No more prisoners
Hello again!
Oh my, Tom the pirate! I knew things were going to develope like this!
And argh, you're such a teaser! What do you mean "chapter 9 is something you'll love"?! I need answers NOW!
But yeah, I guess I have to wait... See you soon!
Author's Response: Hey there! Haha I guess it was an easy guess but of course we want Tom to become a pirate since this is not a master/slave story XD HAHA sorry for teasing you!! I just couldn't hold in my own excitement :D I really hope you'll like it :)
Date: 05/31/17 06:45 am Title: No more prisoners
By now Geo must be raiding every boat until he finds Tom.
Author's Response: Most likely! Imagine the disgrace of having one of the Trümpers on a pirate ship?! :O
Date: 05/29/17 04:35 pm Title: Inspected
An angry Tom who still feels bad for lonely Bill is the cutest thing :P I hope Bill can talk Tom out from this situation in the end of the chapter, I am worried :( Thank you so much, can't wait for the next one :)
Author's Response: Hahaha he was cute? :D I think Tom is actually rather cute in this story. Will be. I'm very interested to see what you will think about chapter 8 and what happens with Tom! Million thanks for taking this journey with me :)
Date: 05/29/17 07:28 am Title: Inspected
I hope Tom will be less scared in the future. I'm sure it looks scary as hell, because he's afraid for his life and he's with pirates but he could be a little more confident in himself.
I still love your story and I can't wait to see what will happen !
Author's Response: Tom just needs some time since he was brought up in a very secure environment :) Maybe Bill could help him with that? Aww thank you so much, I'm glad that I'm not disappointing you even though not much of romance is happening right at the moment. See you soon :)
Date: 05/29/17 03:09 am Title: Inspected
Oh oh, troubles are coming, right? Poor Tom, I thought Bill had a soft spot for him but he doesn't seem to care about him so much, well, at least not now... But I think that's gonna change in the future ;) And now we know a little bit of Bill's story... Interesting!
And oh yes! Did you watch the F1 race yesterday?! I'm italian so I'm really happy for the Ferrari double win :D
See you soon!
Author's Response: I can't wait to release the next chapter because changes are coming! And who knows what Bill truly feels behind that distant facade he puts up... ;) YES omg I'm finnish so naturally I love Ferrari and Kimi and I was soooo nervous because Kimi had such a good chance to win but then... yeah I was kinda angry. But, I like Vettel also and I'm really happy for the double win! Thanks so much for coming to talk to me again, it's well appreciated!! See you soon
Date: 05/28/17 07:54 pm Title: Inspected
But didn't he sign something??! Poor Tom lol always getting into something :/
Author's Response: yes, don't worry, we'll find out about that later! Thanks for reading :)
Date: 05/27/17 04:09 am Title: Overboard
I am really terrified of what Tom has signed. When it comes from Ricardo, it will not do any good. And Bill does not care too much about Tom. Yet. *sigh*
Thank you for the chapter and look forward to the next.
Author's Response: Yeah, Ricardo is definitely bad news! And don't worry, Bill cares more about Tom than what he dares to show... ;) thanks again and see you soon!