Date: 03/11/18 04:57 am Title: 62.Resurfacing Problem
I once again loved this! Can’t wait to see what happens with the wicked witch ;p
Author's Response: ahahahaha let's see! the wicked witch ahahahaha!
Date: 03/10/18 05:56 pm Title: 62.Resurfacing Problem
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/10/18 05:02 pm Title: 62.Resurfacing Problem
Mátala!!! Mátala!! Don’t show her that she deserve better, you did what you could and thought was the best, she was a b*tch soooo, sin piedad, she didn’t earn your forgiveness, so don’t Bill, she doesn’t deserve it, and like we all know, es una maldita jija de la sh*t, but, once again, and like Tom said…you’re to good for this world, and she’s a piece of sh*t, and if you think that the twin will lose their mother…then you’ll be an awesome mother and Tom and awesome dad…dy 🙊
Come on!!! That would be great, Bill and Tom playing the parents roll?? I would love to see that 😬
Por una mamá gallina Bill y papí Tom 😏 oyemesi…
Author's Response: Hahahahaha I love your spaniiiish and I love how excited you get with this fic! Hahaha, would Billy make a good mom? I don't know ahahahah!
Date: 03/10/18 07:15 am Title: 62.Resurfacing Problem
Great chapter es always :)
Let's see what's with the baby(ies) and hellena.
I have a few theorys:
1 Hellena gets the child (I talk about one, because if she would've known they are twins, it would be kind of weird) and its not from the king. So she even cheated when she was with the king and so its easier for bill to get her executed.
2 The child is from alexander and Bill still gets her executed and will rise it with tom, so it gets the love of 'parents' (I would like that Idea the most :D)
3 the child is not from alexander and bill let someone bring her far far away, knowing, she will never come back, for her childs best.
4 the baby is deadborn and bill gets her executed - with a better feeling as before, because this way, she even can be with her child.
Let's see what will really happen :)
Author's Response: Well I hate to tell you, but none of the theories are entirely true, which makes me feel really good ahahahah... you're amazing, thanks for all the reviews and the love!
Date: 03/10/18 05:26 am Title: 62.Resurfacing Problem
Kill the whore I say. Nah let me not be that rude. After all It international women’s month, hooray! Lol. Okay, so let’s start with that steamy shower scene. Sis, a masterpiece. Don’t know why you call your sex scenes awkward because they are usually spot on to me. Two, I am just anxious to see these kids. Truth be told, I’m actually a bit frightened. What if it’s really not Alexander’s? Helena could’ve really lied. What would Bill do honestly?
Next chapter, feed me the next chapter, lol. Hope to read more soon 😊
Author's Response: ahahahaha you haven't been rude at all, don't worry :P But let's see if the next chapter will have you in mixed feelings about Helena! I'm happily going to leave my big review on Black Mask ^_^ You're lovely! Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 03/07/18 10:07 pm Title: 61.Remembering Love
Omg catching up on this story had my emotions all over the dang place!! I need a nap! Haha
Is he dead? No he isn’t, wait yes he is. Omg nooooooooo
Gosh poor Bill. If my emotions were a mess I’m sure he was 100000000x worse. Having his beloved forget him was probably worse than him being dead. At least him being gone means he left knowing how much he loved you. Having him be alive and not remember that he did must’ve hurt so bad. And then he remembered the one he loved before omg SALT THE WOUND WHAT DONT YOU 😭😭😭😭
Poor thing. I’m so happy that he remembered, little by little and maybe not the best parts first but he did!
And now he’s back and he can love Bill forever like they’re suppose tooooo!!!!
Author's Response: Welcome baaack, I've missed these long and excited reviews! I know, it was an emotional rollercoaster but yeah everything is okay now... or at least for now ahah. Thanks dear!
Date: 03/07/18 05:45 pm Title: 61.Remembering Love
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you < 3
Date: 03/07/18 03:33 pm Title: 61.Remembering Love
Yayayayayayayayaya my babies are my babies again, I’m blushing so hard right now. I want to give you a angel Billy now. However I think you’re going to be a bit peeved at the next chapter. Or maybe you’ll be pulled in like a fish on a bait hook lol. Well we’ll see. Tom was so ready and willing and just down right sexy when he just took control of Bill once he remembered him. It was literally what I was waiting for and you my dear delivered beautifully. Can’t wait for more 😊
Author's Response: Oh lord I wonder what you will do to torture me next... You're my source of courage when it comes to the sex scenes, it's an awkward part for me (thanks for not thinking so anyway). Take care!
Date: 03/07/18 10:47 am Title: 61.Remembering Love
No es justo, cais me pongo a chillar como niñita por tu culpa T^T
Dear Lord in such a sweet heaven in Toll!! this was the most sweet and chummy chapter ever!! I loved it, mentira…lo amo así super hard, I was like "yes Tomii…his your Billybebe, an d yeah Billybebe…it's your Tomi…now f*ck him so hard that he doesn't want you to leve that bed in at least a week…"so yeah…me deje llevar por la emoción. And I think you realize that I always write in spanish when I¡m like super exited…so yeah…sorry about my spanglish, but I can't avoid it, me aflora lo mexicana y así…
Of course I'll start sketching their ateliers!! and of course I'll be sending them to you…yeah, ya me vi…
And there is something to said, I LOVE THIS TOLL…
Author's Response: I love the spanglish parts, I really do; so no worries, keep getting excited ahaha! Had you missed Heleba? I'm sure you hadn't but she will be with us soon :o
Date: 03/07/18 12:26 am Title: 61.Remembering Love
In the first sentences you let bill undress tom. a bit later toms shirt is unbottoned. a little later bills nipple touch the shirt (even its unbuttoned and that means it should be open)a while later toms shirt is unbuttoned again. poor tom had to take off the shirt tree times, even if he was naked all the time hahaha :D Seems like your thoughts where somewhere else when it came to take off toms clothes :D
it was a nice chapter, I like that tom is remembering now :)
But also ... I remembered that hellena is still existing .... She probably should have given birth already, or at least soon :O
Author's Response: Ah, Helena... she will be with us soon, though I'm pretty sure no one missed her! About Tom's shirt, Tom is wearing it until Bill pulls it over his head :P I read it over again and yeah, one could easily get confused with the way I had written that, so I edited a little. Bill actually helps him into something more comfortable in the start because Tom is hurt, not out of sexual intention and later opens his top buttons to make him wake up...but how can the poor reader know if I don't make it clear? here's the question ahahaha... thanks girl < 3
Date: 03/07/18 12:00 am Title: 61.Remembering Love
I liked this! But I need to get ready now ;p
Author's Response: Ahahahah, good morniiiing!
Date: 03/05/18 05:04 pm Title: 31. Biding Time
I thought I missed a few chapters now U see I am 30 chapters behind LMAO!
Nothing like getting absorbed and binge reading;)
Author's Response: Hahaha, welcome back dear! I hope you have enjoyed your binge reading! Let me know what you thought of the recent events! Thanks!
Date: 03/05/18 09:52 am Title: 60.Starting New
OMGGGGG bye Ari.
Author's Response: byyyyyyyye penguin...going back to Antarctica, are we?
Date: 03/03/18 05:59 pm Title: 60.Starting New
Great chapter :D
Author's Response: Thank you dear!
Date: 03/03/18 01:03 am Title: 60.Starting New
Is tom remembering know, or did he just felt like it? hmm ... Good chapter as always :)
Author's Response: Everything will become clear soon ^_^ Thanks dear!
Date: 03/02/18 11:51 pm Title: 60.Starting New
I think I forgot to review on the last one... I often read this in the morning and after I always have to rush getting ready :p but I loved both chapters!!
Author's Response: Ahahaha I've been there, dear! Hope you enjoy the next part!
Date: 03/02/18 08:10 pm Title: 60.Starting New
I’m screaming! Oh my god! I want a love like there’s. You know minus the abuse in the beginning and such but yeah. They’re so happy and I just....oh my god....I think I’m actually crying lol. This chapter was just so good and I’m just so happy to see where this story has gone and I’m even more excited to see what happens next 😱
Author's Response: Well I think we can arrange something so that you can take Tomi and I get Angel Billy, what do you think? Aww, it's so moving that you were touched! Thanks so much!
Date: 03/02/18 07:06 pm Title: 60.Starting New
First of all…I didn't write a review in the last chap cause…I fell asleep, so yeah, sorry about that o_o buuuuut, I did loved it, I mean it, the end was the cherry on top…AHUEVO!! Tom is recovering his memories >:v Ale is happy…and bet a lot in too, Come on Tom, you're a natural when it comes ti speeches, pffft todo mundo lo sabe…And he wants to marry our little baby lion Billybebe XD (I almost scream like a girl, but I'm at the office…so a couldn't)
Yeeeeeiiiii! tendremos un boda!! super cool and awesome and yeah…yeeeeiii!!
I swear that every time that you dressed Bill with black clothes I really love it, and I don't know why a love when you dressed Tom with leaf green, it's weird, but qué le podemos hacer verdá
P.S. I really love this awesome history…punto.
Author's Response: I think the next chapter is going to make you veeeery happy... how about these wedding clothes? We might need them soon! The baby lion is very happy too ahahah! Thanks for all your support!
Date: 02/27/18 06:32 pm Title: 59.Recurring Wounds
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/27/18 12:48 pm Title: 59.Recurring Wounds
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww okay this chapter has saved you, for now. Lol, can’t wait to see what else Tommy remembers. And guess what, new chapter of royal secrets today even though you may kill me lol for it
Author's Response: Well for the time being you are safe -as you will also read on my review- but don't kill anyone when I turn my back :P Thanks, dear!