Date: 03/22/18 12:28 pm Title: 65. Losing Friends
Good chapter. Poor hector. Is dead was a bit melodramatic (haha), but I can feel with morgan.
And yeah, still hoping for bill to be a good king and dont let hellena stay alive or in the near of them.
Author's Response: Ahaha, I knoow, but when the idea of killing Hector came, I couldn't resist some drama. Let's see what Bill will do! Thanks!
Date: 03/21/18 06:37 pm Title: 65. Losing Friends
Great chapter :) and it definitly was heartbreaking to read :(
Author's Response: I knooow, but I'm evil hahah! Thanks!
Date: 03/21/18 08:54 am Title: 65. Losing Friends
Kill kill kill 😂 nice chapter btw ;p
Author's Response: ahahahah thank you dear!
Date: 03/18/18 10:55 am Title: 64.Making Difference
It looks so great! I believe Queen Morgan will have some meaningful advice because the situation is really unpleasant. How to explain to children that you executed their mother, even though she was a traitor. On the other hand, if they let Helen alive, her own children may be denied her for the betrayal of their father and brother.
Thank you for the chapter, I look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Here's someone who doesn't ask to see Helena dead ahaha, and Bill seems very confused about this too. Thanks for the review dear!
Date: 03/17/18 12:05 pm Title: 64.Making Difference
Finally caught up!
I still think Helena should die. Standards to keep and all that lol. Wonder if Morgan's baby will have throwback silver strands? Maybe just a patch in the front.
Author's Response: Wooow, was that 30 chapters you just read? Well apparently you're not the only one who wants her dead... she was pure evil. Hmmm, why not?
Date: 03/17/18 09:18 am Title: 64.Making Difference
Ooh how cute :) But I do kinda hope that she dies still :p
Author's Response: Ahahahah you made your point clear, I think. Thanks dear!
Date: 03/16/18 06:52 pm Title: 64.Making Difference
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/16/18 05:48 pm Title: 64.Making Difference
Damn her! Now I feel like he should grant her request but still kill her. He could lose the support of his people but at the same time, killing her could effect how they see him as well. I’m just waiting to see if I get to jump for joy that she’s dead or be passively disappointed that she’s alive. Fifty/fifty flip of the coin. Little Myra would love a sleep baby like Thomas. She could do a lot of makeovers and he won’t move lol. Can’t wait for the next one sis 😊
Author's Response: Wooow looks like the iron lady of the reviews is a tad concerned about Helena too ahaha... well everyone wants me to kill her, let's see! Awww, Myra would be lovely for little Thomas, they could paint their happy suns together!
Date: 03/16/18 04:32 pm Title: 64.Making Difference
To be honest ... I didnt liked that chapter very much.
I didnt like helena, who is from one moment to the other, a nice person and caring mother. And I didnt like softy-bill who is anything but a responsibly king.
Hellena did kill bills father(and the father of the twins ...), tried to kill him, tried to break the good relationship with his father, tried to seduce tom and tried to make bill and tom break up and also she did play a game over months to mess around with everybody, even lied about her family etc etc, and now, Bill thinks about her being a nice person? what the fuck? so get a baby and you are off all the faults you have done? wow ... When he dont get her executed, keeps her in the prison or gets her banned, I would really be dissapointed in this story, because it would be anything but logical.
After everything what hellena had done ... and with the responsiblty, Bill should not fuck up or better give morgan his crown, because else you could see him as a risk for everybody. Please ... please dont let him see as a nice person and dont let him have mercy for her.
I like this story really much. So I hope you wont mess up the end. It would make me really sad :(
Author's Response: Well I don't know what you might think about the next chapter, it's quite heartbreaking... but I think no one of my readers likes Helena, which is nice ahahaha. Billy is a tad confused, but who knows what will happen next! Thanks!
Date: 03/15/18 04:43 am Title: 63.Giving Life
Awww how adorable they’re twins. Now we have 4 squishy babies to coo over lol. Still want Helena dead. I firmly believe in slippery slope so who’s to say she won’t attempt to take Bill’s life again? Love love love this chapter. And as for baby names....uh....Ryder and Ronin. I don’t know these just seem reasonable or like awesome kid names.
Lol awkward Tomi with the little prince so cute. I want him 😩
Author's Response: Helena haters unite in the chapters to come hahaha, Billy is facing a dilemma. You want the little prince or Tomi ahahaha? well you can try taking them from Bill, but I don't think this will end well! Thanks so much dear!
Date: 03/14/18 06:49 pm Title: 63.Giving Life
Great chapter :) I love babies, it's so cute :)
Author's Response: Aww, they are so lovely! Thank you!
Date: 03/14/18 12:36 pm Title: 63.Giving Life
I had already thought that these children could be the rightful descendants, and that would solve the problem of the marriage of two men. It is lucky that children already have their hair. Otherwise they would have to wait. :-D
There is a question of what they will do with Helena. She could have a bad influence on her offspring.
Thanks, I look forward to continuing.
Author's Response: I think you were the first one to guess this about the little ones! ahahah, well your review was what made me think that they could have been born without hair, me and my brother were both born with hair, so I didn't think that they could not still have them. Thank you dear!
Date: 03/14/18 11:19 am Title: 63.Giving Life
I swear I thought I was going to die because of Bill and his mother mode on…por dios!!! es tan lindo XD and I agree with Tom, he will be the most awesome big brother of all times, y NADIE lo puede negar…and come on!! Even Tom knows that they'll be like their parents/brothers/loquesea…and Helena, come on, I thought you were most intelligent than that, EVERYBODY in the kingdom knows that Bill will die before been mean with two innocents babies, eres medio cortita, but well, she isn't the brightest star, soon, you'll be a prisoner, cause Bill is way too good for his sake, or your own, and maybe he will let be like a servant just for you to be near your babies…
Now…the most happy time…Tom and Bill finally has their own family!! yeeeeiiiii! Ale is excited :B the twins has their…twins(¿?) interesting…well…the girl might been called mmmmmm Gabrielle (I personally love that name for a girl…or a boy) and the for the little man…Mikkel, or maybe Gian, I don't know… and yeah…like always I love your fix…so, that means, I love you to…
I want to read the next chapter…like ya, ósea que si…estoy emocionada ^_^ o_o
Author's Response: Tom has his own father mode too, isn't he adorable? I hope you liked their names! glad you're liking the story! Thanks for being here!
Date: 03/14/18 02:36 am Title: 63.Giving Life
Good chapter and glad the babys are well. And also glad they are not just boys, when they are twins. it would have kind of magic that she would have known everything ;)
I hope Bill will still get hellena killed or banned. Sure it's good to be a kind human being, but this woman killed his father and tried to get him killed. He is responsible for so many people. He knows she could not just get dangerous for him and tom, but also for his people. He should be king enough to not get his kindness, the saveness for him, his lovedones, and his people in the way. even it may be a little cruel, executing hellena would be for everybody the savest thing.
Looking forward to the next chapter. What would we do without you? there are so few storys at the moment :(
Author's Response: Well the experienced midwives of the times could tell if a pregnant woman would have twins, especially in the later months, but the gender was not as easy to assume. Helena haters will have a dilemma along with Billy in the next chapter... let's see! Thanks dear, it is indeed sad that there are so few of them!
Date: 03/14/18 02:02 am Title: 63.Giving Life
I liked Tom going in to save the baby ^^ I liked the entire chapter actually ;p
Author's Response: Awww isn't he sweet? Thank you dear!
Date: 03/13/18 08:26 pm Title: 63.Giving Life
TOM HOLDING A BABY I CAN'T
Author's Response: Another chance to yell is right here with you :P
Date: 03/12/18 06:14 pm Title: 62.Resurfacing Problem
Come to messenger NOW
Author's Response: Ahahahahaha... I did, I did... ready to yell?
Date: 03/11/18 08:20 am Title: 62.Resurfacing Problem
It was certain that their joy would be broken with something. Stupid Helena and her pregnancy. Now Bill must resolve what to do with her.
Thanks for the chapter, I look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews! The next chapter may make some of you have mixed feelings about Helena!
Date: 03/11/18 08:12 am Title: 61.Remembering Love
Hurrah! Tom remembers everything! I'm so happy for them.
Thanks for the chapter.
Author's Response: Ah, I loved writing that chapter too! It was so happy ^_^
Date: 03/11/18 08:07 am Title: 60.Starting New
Everything looks so good. I believe Tom will soon remember, at least that important. :-D
Thank you for the chapter.
Author's Response: Well everything can't be good for long, I'm a mean one ahahaha!