Date: 05/13/17 11:06 am Title: 7. Coming Closer
Do you have any idea what you've just made me do? No? Well, I'm going to tell you - I read this, at work. That's right, at work. Now it might not sound like a big of a deal, but here's the thing:
1. if my boss finds out, I can take my stuff and leave. For real. But she wasn't there today so what the heck, I don't care. I mean, I saw the update when I woke up this morning but I was already running late (because I fucking hate mornings and I'm never up in time) and then work was so slow and I just wanted to get home and read this and the store was empty and the phone was so tempting... so I did. I read it. And I hate you. (I don't).
2. I don't get this hooked often. I'm actually super hard to please and normally, unless your writing is absolutely brilliant, I don't get hooked. Now your writing isn't in any way bad, don't get me wrong, but it's not as amazing as what I normally read, because yes, I'm picky as fuck and having me actually enjoy a story is hard, but somehow you've gotten me so interested in this story, that small things that would normally annoy me with someone's writing just doesn't bother me. And please don't take this the wrong way, your writing isn't bad! Not at all, I'm just picky and there is ALWAYS room for improvement. For everyone. Me as well. (Hell for me there's room for a lot of improvement lol)
But yes, I read it at work, and now I'm home and writing you this review and I barely even know what to say. I've fallen so hard for your prince and your Tom is really growing on me. I adore your characters and this universe, and I'm so happy I gave this story a chance!
Thank you so much, and please update soon!
Author's Response: Hahahah hello dear! I'm so so sorry for making you read this at work, but I have to admit I'm very proud of it too! Well I don't think much of my writing, so I love that you're reading this anyway < 3 Thanks for everything ^_^
Author's Response: Hahahah hello dear! I'm so so sorry for making you read this at work, but I have to admit I'm very proud of it too! Well I don't think much of my writing, so I love that you're reading this anyway < 3 Thanks for everything ^_^
Date: 05/13/17 09:01 am Title: 7. Coming Closer
Read it all this morning it has been a while since I read something on here, and damn I love the theme! And the idea of Bill being mute is fabulous. And for once he's not all weak!
I really enjoyed reading it, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Plus your style is very pleasant to read, keep going it is good 😊
Author's Response: Welcome to this story dear! I'm very glad that you like it! Thank you!
Date: 05/13/17 08:35 am Title: 7. Coming Closer
Love the chapters. Your story is so cute.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot dear!
Date: 05/12/17 11:58 am Title: 6. Starting Over
Tom is so trying. Although I understand that Georg does not believe him, Tom may convinced him in time.
Thanks, I look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Georg is such a protective friend, I think I love him < 3 And Tom has a long way to go, but he does care for Bill. Thank you, my dear!
Date: 05/11/17 04:35 pm Title: 6. Starting Over
Ohhhh fuck you. (You'll probably keep hearing this, but trust me, it's a sign of love when it comes from me.) I just can't with your prince. He's too damn adorable and sweet and ugh. I hate him (I don't)
As for your reply to my other review: I don't often write with people, but I wouldn't mind giving it a go :) if you want to talk more, about future project, writing in general or you know, anything at all, you can contact me via my profile. Or if you use twitter you can DM me there :) Getting to know writers is one of my favourite things!
Update soon!
Author's Response: Awwww, you're such a sweetheart! Yeah, Billy is such a sweet guy... I would like to be his servant too, if he would consider me... I'll make sure to get in touch, dear, I really want to meet you too!
Date: 05/11/17 03:16 pm Title: 6. Starting Over
I adored this chapter and.....I knew I smelled a conspiracy!!!!! I am so excited for the future now because I feel like Tom is going to be so much more useful now. This chapter was beautifully written and I loved how concerned Bill is with his servant but he's still not falling head over heels over him which (with this trope, anyway) is very common.
This chapter is #somethingnew. Lol. Can't wait for the next one.
PS: Danke for the review on Relearning To Live :). Made me smile today.
Author's Response: Aww loved the hashtag! Thank you so much, my dear! I'm glad you're already intrigued by the conspiracy.rnrnYour newest story has broken my heart, but you know how I love it... rnrnAlways smile < 3
Date: 05/10/17 05:41 pm Title: 6. Starting Over
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 05/09/17 07:13 pm Title: 5. Leaving Home
That note made me sit here and literally yell "Oh fuck you!!!" - which is my way of saying "oh my god this is too much I love it." Seriously, that note. I. Love. It. Love it. I don't even have any words to properly describe my feelings right now I just... love it.
Thank you!
Author's Response: Well I was on the verge of screaming something with the same meaning when I read this review, coming from yοu it's so fulfilling < 3 Thank you! By the way, I'd really love to write something with you.
Date: 05/09/17 01:33 am Title: 5. Leaving Home
Just started reading & I am so enjoying this story! Thank you.
Author's Response: I do hope to keep you interested! Thanks!
Date: 05/08/17 05:52 pm Title: 5. Leaving Home
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 05/08/17 05:32 pm Title: 5. Leaving Home
Bill is such a sweetheart, not that Tom deserves his kindness.
He will to try really hard for Bill to really forgive him.
Update soon.
Author's Response: Tom is definitely going to try hard, he has a lot to learn from Bill! Thanks dear!
Date: 05/08/17 12:48 pm Title: 5. Leaving Home
Bill is merciful, but the others around him can not forgive Tom so easily. They love their price, and Tom treats him terribly. I believe that Tom will try very hard, but it will be difficult, if Bill does not speak.
Thanks, I look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: I love how protective you all are of Bill... isn't he the sweetest thing ever as our little prince? Stay tuned!
Date: 05/08/17 02:44 am Title: 5. Leaving Home
Oh snap! Now I'm on the edge of my seat. Bill is being nice to Tom, so sweet. I'm honestly happy that Bill wanted to treat Tom as horribly as he was treated yet he decided not to. That seems like such a realistic response to his circumstance. Sure he could make his life hell but for what. What would he gain? Nothing besides Tom's discomfort and that's not a reward.
I'm excited for the next chapter. Can't wait to see what you think of next.
PS: thanks so much for your reviews. It really means a lot. :)
Author's Response: Billy is such an angel, I tried to write him so honorable and kind that people wouldn't understand him at times.rnYour stories are very beautiful,my dear, it is us who should be grateful!
Date: 05/06/17 07:08 am Title: 4. Breaking Morning
Love this! Please keep going!
Author's Response: Thank you dear! Stay tuned for more!
Date: 05/06/17 01:32 am Title: 4. Breaking Morning
I'm excited. This chapter was awesome and it's great to see a bit more of what Tom was like with Bill as his prisoner. Can't wait to see the tables turned and see how Tom's life is now that he's Bill's servant.
Author's Response: Hello dear! Life won't be easy for Tom...rn*spoiler alert* a conspiracy is rising in the Southern Kingdom as we speak.rnI really enjoyed your new chapter, by the way!
Date: 05/05/17 05:53 pm Title: 4. Breaking Morning
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you < 3
Date: 05/05/17 03:26 pm Title: 4. Breaking Morning
Well, it took a while for the queen to find out the truth. Luckily for Bill, it's over, and he'll be back home soon. A whole new life is beginning for Tom.
Thanks, I look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Yeah, Billy will be safe soon! It did take some time, I guess Morgan didn't feel very bright when Andreas told her :P Thank you dear!
Date: 05/05/17 06:17 am Title: 4. Breaking Morning
Poor Bill... Tom was so mean to him. Hopefully he will be nicer from now on. I'm excited what will happen when Bill gets back to his people.
I really like your story so far and I'm excited for the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Welcome on the site, if I'm not mistaken you're quite new! Stay tuned for more!
Date: 05/04/17 11:02 pm Title: 4. Breaking Morning
It's good that the Queen is so honorable. I like Gustav. Good lad.
Author's Response: I have enjoyed writing Gustav as the reasonable one, glad it's showing < 3
Date: 05/04/17 08:39 pm Title: 4. Breaking Morning
Oh wow.. This chapter was so heartbreaking, but I sort of like that stuff, so it was a nice read nevertheless. Curious what will happen next, thanks for the update!
Author's Response: I was so sad for poor Billy when I wrote it! I'm a sucker for heartbreaking stories too... Thank you love, you're amazing < 3