Date: 04/01/18 01:48 pm Title: 68. Repeating Habits
I AM SHOOK. SHOOK I TELL YOU.
I was starting to think Helena was sincere that being a mom had changed her but omg no. How does she keep finding these people to help her? I don’t get it. She’s insane.
She’s a vile human. First she kills a loving father, and now she wants to kill a baby, A BABY.
I bet Bill will feel so stupid because I do LMAO
He let his emotions get in the way of his ruling. Even though he knew she was a bad person, he let her manipulate him into even second guessing getting rid of her . Poor thing already feels like he’s not a very good king, and now, he’s gonna feel weak or something. He’s so kind hearted 😭That’s it. Can’t someone kill her and do the world a favor. Honestly.
Actually I’m curious as to how the kingdom works? When it comes to who becomes king?
And queen? Is it Bill’s blood line that gets to go first down the line? Then if there are none, the Queens? So technically it’d be Bill then his brother and then if his half brother has a son, he’d be it and so on?
Or is it Bill, then his half brother, then the Queens son?
Since they joined kingdoms? :D
Author's Response: Your reviews are always so amazing, thanks! Well the line of succession since Bill has no kids would be his brother, but now that the kingdoms are joined, it's a tad more complex.
Date: 03/31/18 06:23 pm Title: 68. Repeating Habits
Shit. Shit. Shit. I fucking called it. I hope she didn’t poison the queen because I want Morgan alive when they execute Helena. She is a horrible woman and nothing she does will ever redeem her. Now she’s sealed her fate.
Morgan is a strong woman and would be an amazing mother. Plus little Isabelle needs a mentor to train her. Ahhhh I just want Georg to have a happy ending.
Author's Response: I still have to write a review on RS but you have added quite a lot of parts and ugh, I have to catch up! Thanks a lot, this means a lot!
Date: 03/31/18 06:20 pm Title: 68. Repeating Habits
I guess Helena just can't change, kill that bitch! XD great chapter :)
Author's Response: Ahahahaha thank you
Date: 03/31/18 01:44 pm Title: 68. Repeating Habits
Happy that it went that way. Now bill dont has to be a pussy about the hellena thing, anymore :D
I hope Morgan will make it. She is a strong woman, so as the doctory said - if not her, who else?
So lets get hellena into hell already :D
Author's Response: Ahahahaha Bill is not feeling very well but he will be fine... hopefully. Thanks
Date: 03/31/18 10:51 am Title: 68. Repeating Habits
Yes, I hope they’ll finally kill her :p
Author's Response: Ahahahaha happy now?
Date: 03/31/18 10:34 am Title: 68. Repeating Habits
If the doctor sterilized the instruments, Morgana had a great chance of healing. And Georg will be a happy dad. Hopefully.
And of course ... Helena. Some would think her motherhood would be enlightened, but not. She orders to kill a newborn baby. She has a serious character defect. I would not have wondered if Bill would have strangled her this time with his own hands.
Thanks for the chapter, I look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Ah isn't Georg a lovely dad? Well, Bill certainly didn't hold himself back this time! Thank you!
Date: 03/29/18 05:12 pm Title: 67. Heartbreaking Decisions
DRAMAAAA.
Thank me for that.
DRAMaaaaa
Author's Response: Thaaaaaaank you Jessiieeeee
Date: 03/28/18 11:44 pm Title: 67. Heartbreaking Decisions
This was not nice indeed, not nice at all. Trying to kill all the wrong people, how dare you?
Thanks for the chapter anyway, I did still like it ;)
Author's Response:
Date: 03/28/18 10:49 pm Title: 67. Heartbreaking Decisions
I had almost forgotten there was still a wedding! I love their little happy moments. The moments we get to see of them being in love and happy. Even if it only lasts a little bit. They’ve been through so much in their young love, jesus.
I hope Helena takes her own life lmao just make it easy for every one. Do the world a favor you know. Bill is kind. Somehow I feel like this would be hard for him to live with.
Oh no! I hope the queen and her baby are alright. Gosh so many things happen in this kingdom! Now poor Georg! I hope the bay and her are alright. Can thins kingdom have one peaceful night lol
Author's Response: Well no, the answer is it can't ahahaha. Tom and Bill are so lovely, I'm almost jealous myself. Thanka dear!
Date: 03/28/18 06:00 pm Title: 67. Heartbreaking Decisions
Hopefully she and the baby will make it. Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/28/18 11:41 am Title: 67. Heartbreaking Decisions
Here I thought that everything would be good already. Now I want the miracle!
The war is over, but ordinary life also brings dramas.
Thanks for the chapter, I look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: These characters always need miracles, I'm evil ahahaha... thank you!
Date: 03/28/18 11:25 am Title: 66. Loving Moments
So, there's a definite decision about Helena's fate. Although Bill has Morgan's support, it will be hard for him as well. Maybe a miracle will happen so he does not have to deal with it.
Thanks for the chapter.
Author's Response: Sorry I hadn't replied to these ones, I just checked my unresponded and I had left these back. Thanks!
Date: 03/28/18 11:11 am Title: 65. Losing Friends
A little Etude about a best friend. The loss of Hector is sad.
Author's Response: Aye, I was sad about him too, but poor thing was old and tired
Date: 03/28/18 09:17 am Title: 67. Heartbreaking Decisions
Yes, if she really will die, it's good :)
Poor Morgan. Didnt expected complications. I hope she wont die and her baby will be healthy as well.
Author's Response: More Hellena hating to occur tonight ahahaha
Date: 03/28/18 08:32 am Title: 67. Heartbreaking Decisions
You aren’t doing this to me!!! Morgan cannot die, who’s gonna marry Georg! Who’s he gonna love?! Wtf?! Helena cannot survive her childbirth and not Morgan. Even though, after the horse thing, I’m not surprised. Damn her warrior spirit. Mother and child had better survive or so help me....that’s how you know it’s amazing writing, it’s getting me upset what happens to the characters lol until next time
Author's Response: Ahahahaha I'm dying... well prepare to hate on Helenaaa again. You pay attention, I like this ^_^ thaaanks
Date: 03/25/18 10:54 pm Title: 66. Loving Moments
no!
Don’t think any of your chapters are bad simply because there isn’t enough main character interaction!
There needs to be story with other characters too!
Helena has to pay for what she did. When I was reading your chapters I was thinking to myself exactly what the Queen told Bill. His siblings will be brought up to rule, therefore they will understand what Bill has to do and why. Bill is such a beautiful , kind soul. But, his duties as king can’t be put in the back burner just because she had a change of heart. His siblings will understand.
Bill and Tom will be amazing guardians for the babies. They have so much love for not just each other but the kingdoms and people they rule. Bill is so sweet, elegant! Yes! He is. I just picture him moving so graceful and effortless. Yet powerful. And Tom just seems strong.
I rely do Feel for Bill. He is just a kind soul. He grew up without a mother and he knows the pain of that, it really is a difficult situation. But does he really want her to live? Who knows if she really is sorry. What if she uses them against Bill and Tom one day. I don’t think she can be fully trusted. As sad as as that is.
I hope they can finally be happy.
Author's Response: Woow, welcome back my dear! Thanks for the really nice and long review! Tomi is a natural father, I think. Isn't Billy just the sweetest thing? Well, happiness might be coming from faaar away, but it is coming!
Date: 03/25/18 01:57 am Title: 66. Loving Moments
And now I’m doing my happy dance. I mean I shouldn’t celebrate anyone’s death but giving her the chance to at least nurse her children will make it not as bad. She got to be with her babies if only for a little while. Bill and Tom will take care of them. However I’m super excited for Georg’s baby. Like that’s going to be just the perfect icing to this cake. Lol, wink wink, might wanna check those recents btw
Author's Response: Ahahah well drama is coming, so no more happy dance for now. Yayyyy I'm going to read ^_^ Thanks for all the support dear!
Date: 03/24/18 06:54 pm Title: 66. Loving Moments
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thaaank you!
Date: 03/24/18 01:44 am Title: 66. Loving Moments
I liked this ^^ don’t have anything remotely creative to say today, sorry about that ;p
Author's Response: Ahahaha your creativity keeps us going, dear! Thanks!
Date: 03/24/18 01:40 am Title: 66. Loving Moments
I think I wasnt the only one who was dissapointed about Bill thinking if he should spare hellena :) I'm happy he now made the decision to get her executed. I hope he wont wait too long. Morgan is write, his siblings will know that he hadnt another choice. Not just for his peopple but also for the safty of everyone.
Author's Response: Certainly you weren't the only one ahahah, I hope you're happy with the Helena issue now. Thanks dear!