Date: 07/11/17 05:55 pm Title: 16. Choosing Sides
Oh, boy, don't do it Andreas, or I'll punish you. Just kidding xD Even though Andreas and the others would deserve to be punished then xD great chapter :)
Author's Response: Hahah, and perhaps they will! You can punish Andreas all you like haha! Thank you!
Date: 07/11/17 04:53 pm Title: 16. Choosing Sides
Wow ... I didn't expected the King to be happy about his sons love, but that he wants Tom to get killed is really hard. And it really can just be the king who gave the order to poison tom, because just he and andy knows that tom and bill are together.
it will be like a fist in Bills face ... We can just hope that Tom will not get poisoned to death.
Still, they are a cute couple, I like them :)
But what will happen with Tom?
They will try to poison him ... I could imagine, that, if that doesnt works, they try another way to separate them. Somehow I have raping in my head. If Tom would get raped, he probably would feel good enough for bill, because he already has some selfworth-issues.
Also ... the king trys to 'tell' tom dead, and puts him in real slavery, or so.
We'll see what happens :O
Author's Response: Well Bill and Tom are quite the lovebirds, and even more so in the new chapter, haha! Alexander is quite mean with Tom, but perhaps he's not the one behind this plan! He has his own way of doing things, and soon he'll try to separate the boys again! Thanks for your review!
Date: 07/10/17 10:44 pm Title: 16. Choosing Sides
Ahhhhhh no Andreas! Don't you dare!
Author's Response: Haha, well, he's not at all satisfied that Bill chose Tom! We'll see!
Date: 07/10/17 09:23 pm Title: 16. Choosing Sides
No por favor noooo!!(whimper like a little girl) that's not fair, just because he's the king...agh! I know social status and sh*t, but...venga!! No se vale >_< mendigas clases sociales 😑
But wait and see, Tom will provide Bill with a beautiful heir of their own, and when it happens...T”MALA RAY ALEXANDER! In your face!! But well, Andreas, don't be silly, they're just using you, if you think that killing Tom would make Billybebe loves you, o cariño, estas mal, you will bring him pain and sadness, and don't forget about the brokenheart nop, he will be in deep, deep sadness and depression...and he'll be ignoring everyone, and maybe blame his father 🤔 Yeah...eso sería muy dramático...but meh :v
I'm just saying this "lo que mal empieza, mal acaba mi querido Andreas" and then, when Bill close himself to he world,I'm just gonna sit there and watch, and also saying "te lo dije, pero, ahí vas de wey"
Dear lord in heaven...this was a fluffy pinky glitter cap, like a little kitten been cute, just like that...I love it 😌
Author's Response: My dearest Spanish reviewer! Well Tom will certainly not give Bill an heir, but who knows, perhaps there is a way around it! Andreas is a little astray at the moment, but I hope he gets back on the right path... do you think he will? Thanks for being here! You make me smile always!
Date: 07/09/17 02:46 pm Title: 15. Dreaming awake
Finally, they made love to each other, it was beautiful. Georg was enjoying me, he's just great.
But there is Andreas in love and King Alexander, who will be angry. It will be hell.
Thanks, I look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Well yeah, hell is in the plans for them, but I hope it will be a very enjoyable hell for all of us. Thank you dear!
Date: 07/08/17 12:53 pm Title: 15. Dreaming awake
Poor Andreas, I mean, it pretty sucks when you're in love with somebody, but that somebody already have someone who's makes them happy and you're just watching them been happy…its pretty hear breaking, but well…así la vida.
Finally!! The loves takes the escenario!! And Bill was the man with the pants, or like we said in my little city/town es el que lleva las riendas del asunto caray, he has the huevos, I really love him T^T they like cinnamon rolls T^T it doesn't matter that both man are soldiers and tough warriors, they're always gonna be like cursis empedernidos, lovebirds and all that stuff XD
Aaaaamoooo este fic (I i, love with this fic)
I can't wait when they arrive the North Kingdom 😳 I think it will be like todo casi color de rosa, and yeah, like a lot of drama 😱🤔
Author's Response: Well, google translate is my friend when I try to read your reviews... but I certainly love the spanish parts! they're so cool and I love the idioms! I'm glad you like it, thanks for everything!
Date: 07/06/17 06:13 pm Title: 15. Dreaming awake
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you <3
Date: 07/06/17 01:33 pm Title: 15. Dreaming awake
I'm so happy right now! Thank you so much for sending me this chapter, this is the first time I ever get one, it means a lot to me!!! I'm glad about the boys too, finally they know each others feelings, hope evertyhing will be okay with them, and I am really curious about what the King wanted to talk with Prince Bill. Poor Andreas, but they won't feel the same, and I'm in Team Tom :P I love this story sooooo much, thank you again!!
Author's Response: You're most welcome my dear! I certainly love your emotional reviews! Well, something tells me you won't like Andreas as much after the new chapter!
Date: 07/03/17 01:52 pm Title: 14. Confessing Love
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Ermahgerd!!!!! I June wanna squeeze them into a little jar and keep 'em, so damn adorable!!!!! *squeals in spanish* okay, I've collected myself and now I can review properly.
I am so freaking excited for this story now. I want Alexander to accept them but I know it's going to be rough. Tommy survived, I am so happy he did otherwise I would've been devastated for Bill. Who would be his cuddly bear without Tommy there? Hehehe, I rhymed. Lol.
I love love love the writing and concept and just the story and gosh, I can't wait for more.
PS: thanks again for your amazing reviews :)
Author's Response: Awww glad to see you here again! Oh looks like I have more spanish speakers than I knew here. I love spanish. I think it's us who should thank you for your amazing stories and raising awareness for epilepsy! Hope you decide to write the superhero fanfic you wanted to as well, I would read anything from you! Well, Alexander is clearly not a really emotional guy :P
Date: 07/02/17 01:12 am Title: 14. Confessing Love
It's cute how Geo can see the signs of B & T's feelings for each other.
Really love the ending.
I'm ways looking for an update to this...Thank you for a great chapter!
Author's Response: Well Georg and Gustav were initially planned to be the logic in this fic, to balance Tom's and Bill's emotional characters, so I'm glad it shows... thank you for your reviews dear!
Date: 07/01/17 11:44 pm Title: 14. Confessing Love
Oh ffs now Bill's good friend is a servant. He is just so damn sweet. We have this saying in Spanish lmao that you call people who are just so sweet and good hearted, giving, kind etc- you say "es un pan De Dios" :D and Bill totally is 😭
Bill's father seems rather arrogant. He should be happy his son is so kind. He has proven to be a great soldier too. He should admire both qualities. It's hard to find someone who possesses both.
I too love that Tom called Bill beautiful. It's a much sweeter compliment. How sweet that Bill charmed Tom (who used to be such an arrogant ass) by simple being as sweet as he is. Aw
I love this part :
"Ouch..." he whined. Bill looked at him with a lifted eyebrow and Tom could see why. He had taken a stab wound without a sound and now he was acting like a child who had injured itself in the playground."
😆it's so true. Haha and I love how you describe Bill's emotions. I'm so impressed because he doesn't speak :D
Oh.. Bill kissing certain areas. Poor Tom. He doesn't even know what to do lol so cute
I hope Georg & Tom become good friends. They have a lot in common :)
BUT OMG THEY CONFESSED THEIR LOVE ANAJSHJS 😭😭😭omg
They both deserve to be so happy. It's so sweet how they love each other. Bill wanting to speak and say what he feels, meanwhile Tom does thinking Bill is sleeping and akjdmsjzkshd
Author's Response: Well the King was meant to be a good guy, but as time went by and the characters started turning out a little different, I liked the idea of him being arrogant af and actually against Bill's love with Tom. It has been amusing to write Tom as the man he was and now make him so sweet and lovely, but perhaps this is how he was all along and he had just lost his way, like Bill believed! Tom and Georg were originally meant to hate each other for more time, but they wanted to be friends and who am I to say no to my characters :P Thank you my dear < 3
Date: 07/01/17 12:36 pm Title: 14. Confessing Love
It is sometimes so hard to confess love. Fortunately, there are certain coincidences and circumstances that will speed it up. : D It's good that Bill heard it. But I'm afraid King Alexander will want to stop it. He believes that Tom is not a good partner for the prince. We will see.
Thanks, look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Well King Alexander will certainly be a major annoyance in the chapters to come, I'll make sure to get you guys to really hate him :P The lovebirds need someone to push them, so that's my job haha! Thank you for your reviews!
Date: 07/01/17 12:12 pm Title: 13. Being there
Tom woke up, that's a good sign. But it is not yet won. However, Bill already knows that he loves Tom. I believe Tom will heal.
Thanks for the chapter and dedication, I really appreciate it. :D
Author's Response: It's me who should thank you for being here from the start! I hope to see you on more stories that I will write in the future!
Date: 06/30/17 10:27 pm Title: 14. Confessing Love
Love the chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 06/30/17 05:19 pm Title: 5. Leaving Home
i really love bill! tom's right, he's got such a beautiful soul! and he's way too kind!
Author's Response: Well writing Bill has been quite hard, he's almost out of this world! I love him haha < 3 Thank you so much!
Date: 06/30/17 07:16 am Title: 4. Breaking Morning
awww!
Author's Response: hihihi ^_^ <3
Date: 06/30/17 06:27 am Title: 3. Learning the Ropes
Poor Bill! :(
Author's Response: Ah yeah, my poor little one! But as Sandra says, he's quite fun to torture :P
Date: 06/30/17 06:17 am Title: 2. Losing Heart
Okay I love Bill???? He's so kind and strong and ughhh why? it's almost unfair lol! And I sorta love Tom as well... idk why I mean right now he is being a bit unfair but like.. I have a thing for... Well.. Tom xD So I think I'm going to love him anyway! Even now when I don't know what to think of him!
Author's Response: Well I think a fan of Tom is something we had been missing on this story! And you're going to love him more in the future! Thank you!
Date: 06/30/17 06:06 am Title: 1.Fighting Memories
Well, this is so good so far! i am intrigued, both of the characters are interesting. Especially prince Bill who, btw, Zarlina won't shut up about. She even told me that I would have to sleep on the patio if didn't read this one! So I'm glad I did cause it seems very good so far and now I can sleep inside tonight! (it's going to rain!)
Author's Response: Hahah, I'm glad my fic offered you a night of comfortable sleep! Zarlina loves this fic and I'm fangirling over the fact that she does because I've been reading her fics forever... so now you're here, I'll have another reason to be more happy! I love your work!
Date: 06/30/17 06:01 am Title: 14. Confessing Love
Ohhhhh fuck you! This is too damn cute what are you doing to me?????
Author's Response: Well when I get you to say "fuck you" I know I have done a good job with the chapter! Prepare for some more cuteness coming up next ^_^ Thanks for everything dear! < 3