Date: 10/21/17 06:39 pm Title: 25. Facing Intrigue
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 10/21/17 01:46 pm Title: 25. Facing Intrigue
I would like it, if you would post more often and post something new when this story is finished. I have to admit that I have some problems with not losing the thread, because of the just weekly posting :O
Also you can begin with writing a new story in the background, when you feel like it, and when you actual post it, you maybe would have already a few chapters so you could post faster or dont have to rush when you dont feel like writing.
I liked the new chapter, also if its a little childish of Bill promptly to think that his father wants to replace him (also if he was a bit right)
Helena is a bad woman. She just got pregnant so she can become a queen and get the money and crown. She will kill the king at some point will kill bill or banish him, so her new son can become the king(how does she know its a boy, anyway? they are not living in a modern world ...)
- thats her plan.
She will tell someone how stupid the king is and what she wants to do, and someone will hear that and so they can fight against her plan.
Thats the way everybody will expect it and how it would go in a movie. I hope you will go for another way.
Ah, and let's see how the fight with the other kingdoms will go. I'm wondering what Bill wrote to his father when he was in the northern kingdom. It seems like he is sure the north and the south will become one when everything goes well, and the queen thought the same. But it seems like bills father doesnt know about it - but he has a word in it ...
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Maybe you can post it sooner :D
Author's Response: Well she doesn't really know it will be a boy, it's just that in a kingdom like the Southern Kingdom everyone would assume that the child born to a King would be a boy, because if it is born a girl it won't really matter for the succession since he already has a son and he will most likely try again for a boy. Not very nice times to be a woman in, unfortunately... but in the North it's different! Thanks for your review dear, sooner updates may come after next week!
Date: 10/19/17 11:42 pm Title: 24. Pleasing Kerenza
😒how dare he keep secrets like this from Bill. Especially when Bill is so in love and he is so against it . He should be more understanding. I don’t know how Bill will react, not well maybe. He loves his momma so much. Maybe that woman can help him see what he refuses to.
Aw they went to see snow awwww I love snow! I’d be Bill! Lol how sweet they are.
I’m afraid the sweetness is coming to a halt for a sec. crazy things are coming!!
Author's Response: Well Bill must have his reasons for reacting in a certain way! I love snow too! Oh yeah, the lovebirds won't have much time for sweetness now, but still they have each other's back!
Date: 10/19/17 11:34 pm Title: 23. Sealing Words
Aw
Tom’s story is both lovely and so sad :/
But I’m glad that he feels that way about war. It must be what happened that changed him no? I mean to kill whatever but then to have someone you love so dearly be killed in it. So sad.
🙄
“The hard way” is only hard because you’re making it that way you dooof.
At least he lets the plan go and doesn’t say no. At least he trusts Bill.
I wonder what he is going to say to Bill. Does he have a secret :O
Aw Georg and the queen eh. That’s cute lol
Author's Response: Tom's change is mostly due to the fact that he met Bill and he saw that a person can be strong and kind too, and most importantly that he can love again. Well, Alexander has his own matters to attend to now! Thanks for being here!
Date: 10/18/17 08:15 pm Title: 24. Pleasing Kerenza
I just have one thing to say…I’m very confundida, I was expecting something but you’ve got us something completely different o_o almost the same thing buuuuuut at the same time something quite different, I mean, I didn’t expected that, but it was very good, te la rifaste, and come on, with that Bill going to be very upset at the beginning, but when the time comes, he will love his little brother or sister, I see disaster coming, and, a very veeeeeery smutty and fluffy Toll >:)
Me diste más de lo que e pedí y como siempre, no mse fallaste, eres la-mejor
Author's Response: Oh my Mexican girl again! I think my Spanish has improved only by reading your reviews, and I love them so so much! I love seeing you so excited, you're one of the best readers I've had! Thanks for everything!
Date: 10/15/17 06:37 pm Title: 24. Pleasing Kerenza
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 10/15/17 03:44 pm Title: 24. Pleasing Kerenza
Aww, a chapter dedicated to me...How sweet & thoughtful, thank you!
I was so anxious as to who would see them or if something bad would happen when they left to see the snow! So happy all went fine.
Georg & the Queen? I think I like it!!
Author's Response: You're a lovely reviewer and you've certainly made me feel great with all your nice comments, so enjoy it, because you deserve it! Oh, I guess Georg likes it too!
Date: 10/15/17 12:04 pm Title: 24. Pleasing Kerenza
Oh my god!! Bill is gonna be a big brother !! I had a feeling about the dad being single for so long but I had no idea.. and he's scared of his own son.. Can't wait for the update !!
Such a nice move i didn't see it coming at all.. just waooh
Have a great day sweetheart
Author's Response: Hello darling and thanks for your review! Well the King hasn't been so careful with the choice of his new spouse and Bill isn't going to like this much! Stay tuned for more!
Date: 10/15/17 04:27 am Title: 24. Pleasing Kerenza
Oh, so Alexander has his own little secret. I'm curious how Bill will react. How to accept the fact that his father has a new love. And what about a future sibling? It is certain that the intrigue of his enemies will arise again, but it could also solve the problem with his love with Tom. There will be another heir to the throne and to the successor of the family.
And I'm so happy about Georg. But will his relationship with the queen be welcome? The intrigants who try their kingdoms disarray, will not enjoy it.
Thanks, I look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Well Georg is certainly happy as well! And Bill doesn't really seem very excited, but fortunately for him he has Tom and Georg to help him out! Thanks for your reviews!
Date: 10/09/17 04:20 pm Title: 23. Sealing Words
Son más lindos que nada estos hombreas caray…everytime I read this story I espect something and I get something even better o_o
They’re like the must precious thing in da world (pose de diva)
Ooooo I would love to see your sketches!! I imagine something and I started to take out the appear and the pencil, ready to draw them, but…well, yeh, la Vida…
I do also feel that King Alexander it’s hiding something, like a secret fiancé or some shit like that, and that’s mean and unfair T^T they deserve each other!! Así que No rey Alexander, no sea malo >_< let them be…
#levelanieve #Tollporsiempre
Author's Response: Oh welcome dearest girl! You always make me smile with your excitement and your Spanish! Well perhaps you're right about the King ;) Stay tuned for more!
Date: 10/08/17 06:29 am Title: 23. Sealing Words
It is very good that they keep secret most of their plan. There will be a lot of danger, but I hope everything will go well and the traitors will grab their own betrayal. But first, something must happen to be able to declare this fake war.
Thanks, I look forward to continuing.
Author's Response: Thank you for all your reviews! Well let's hope that their plan will work, or else everything is possible!
Date: 10/08/17 05:44 am Title: 22. Finding Answers
I think Queen Morgan is very clever, but there is also a need to convince King Alexander. And he can be hellishly stubborn.
But then ... Georg and the Queen? Well, he certainly likes her, right? That would be a really interesting thing if it is not just the product of my sick mind. : D
But there was no doubt that Bill would not just shut up now. Tom has to get used to commentary all the time. :)
Thanks for the chapter.
Author's Response: Well our dear King has a lot of matters to attend to now... and it looks like Bill won't be very happy to hear! Not a product of your mind, dear, not at all, haha!
Date: 10/08/17 05:18 am Title: 21. Drawing Blood
Bill is talking! Finally! Unfortunately, it was painfully obvious that this would only cause another traumatic experience. But now they got the killer of the queen. Let's see how it goes.
Hi, I'm still here. :D
Author's Response: I'm very glad you are < 3 Thanks for your lovely reviews! I'm glad you enjoyed Bill speaking!
Date: 10/07/17 11:24 pm Title: 23. Sealing Words
Hello sweety pie. Thank you for this gift of chapter. My heart was beating like crazy reading it.
I gotta say the idea of dancing and exchanging vital information for the plan was a brilliant one I could almost pictured the scene
Now impatiently waiting for King's Alexander future move. For now he seems to trust his son and almost resigned for his son is the ruler to be.
And that dynamic Georg/Morgan
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I really value your reviews! Well Georg is certainly a very happy man now haha! Thank you dear!
Date: 10/07/17 06:36 pm Title: 23. Sealing Words
Great chapter :) And I guess I would choose the second option :)
Author's Response: Thank you dear :)
Date: 10/07/17 11:59 am Title: 23. Sealing Words
I would like to see the clothes and I would appreciate the quicker updates. I really like your story!
Author's Response: The updates will definitely be quicker from now on, I haven't forgotten about the clothes, I will upload them soon! Thanks!
Date: 10/03/17 12:26 am Title: 22. Finding Answers
:O
I’m so scared over their plan! Bill is so smart, and so kind.
Aw I understand Tom . Your home is your home. Even though he loves Bill. He is from The north . Just like Bill loves his kingdom . But he shouldn’t think Tom loves or more than him. 💙
Haha Bill was so bashful when he couldn’t speak. Now he’s so open and he teases haha poor Tom doesn’t know what to do that he even he wants bill to be mute for a bit lol that’s so cute.
I’m anxiously awaiting what’s going to happen!!!!
Author's Response: Oh well, I wouldn't say Bill was bashful but he certainly is more expressive now and he feels so much better about himself. Let's hope that their plan works!
Date: 09/29/17 08:57 pm Title: 22. Finding Answers
That was lovely!
Nervously anticipating the drama to come. :o
Author's Response: Well drama is coming in big chunks, but for now the lovebirds deserved some intimate moments and intrigue is giving and taking! Stay tuned! Thank you so much!
Date: 09/27/17 09:08 pm Title: 22. Finding Answers
You were right…son unos hermosos y lindos y asdfghjkl me los quiero comer con miel y así!!
For gods sakes!! For a second I tough I was going optó Burt’s of cutnes and awses I was like “ya! Dale duro! Te ama! Hazlo gritar bien pinches fuerte! Dile todo lo que o podías!” And I could keep going on what I almost shout the entire time, but...I have to tecall and remark that, Tom, the one tough warrior, loves Bill over everything that exist in this earth, well, in their world, cause, yeah, he loves his country, yeah, he loves his dad and queen, but the LOVES the most...his pretty lindo guapo tierno y buenote Billybebe, soooooo
Son la cosa más linda, ¿ya lo había dicho?
Pleaseeeeee!! Not let King Alexander ruin their pretty love, it would be soooo unfair! And yeah, voy a empezar a remilgar como niña chiquita, I only hope he accepts his son and his beloved. Fin
Yeah, I’m loving it XD
Author's Response: You're always making me smile with your reviews! The lovebirds are happy for now. Soon we will have some very interesting news about King Alexander! Stay tuned!
Date: 09/27/17 06:30 pm Title: 22. Finding Answers
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)