Date: 11/24/17 12:23 pm Title: 32. Breaking Spirit
Yo, fuck her. I want Dorian dead and I want Helena dead. Baby or no baby. Eff that bish. *spoiler alert to review readers* Alexander's dead! Why?! He was there for Billy and now he's gone. It makes or worse because I knew shawty was gonna do something to betray the kingdom. I wasn't expecting this though. That's wild. Yo, RIP King Alexander and death to Helena.
Author's Response: Hahaha now you sound just like Tom the savage! But yeah she's a bitch, she's worth dying. And right now she's in jail and we're all satisfied for a while... but poor Bill :/ Thanks dear < 3
Date: 11/24/17 11:37 am Title: 32. Breaking Spirit
Thank you for the review :) It made me happy and thanks for offering your help as beta reader :) Maybe one day I'll need it :D But at the moment, as I said, I have much work to get done - and in my free time I enjoy more reading as writing at the moment :)
The chapter was pretty long what is a good thing :D
It's sad what happened to the king. I kind of knew it (in an old review from me) but I hope I'm note right with the end. I mean at the end, Bill is the ruler now, and people like him more as hel(l)ena, she will not be able to banish him. And as georg said, she is imprisoned now. Fucking whoe, same as the counsellor.
I hope it wont escalate now. And I hope Bill will get well soon ...
Author's Response: Of course dear, ask me anytime < 3 Haha I'm glad you liked it being long. Poor King Alexander :( But Bill will definitely not spare the ones responsible. And Tomi is next to him < 3 Thank youu!
Date: 11/22/17 03:41 am Title: 31. Biding Time
Eesh even kids! Bill is so sweet. Even though the kids are there voluntarily, he won’t allow them to fight.
I’m extremely curious as to why Helena is interested in tom. What good is it to piss off bill? He already doesn’t like her. She’s just so disgusting. I hate her lol
I hadn’t even thought about that! Oh my god I’d be so angry but not at all surprised if her son wasn’t even Alexander’s!
Awww! They’ll get engaged on Bill’s big night. Yes take away all attention from Helena, she sucks anyway lol
Omg is the queen pregnant :O
I’m so excited I caught up! Been super busy! But I didn’t want you to think I was no longer enjoying your story!
Author's Response: Well Bill has a heart of gold, he wouldn't take kids to battle. Well I think they managed to steal the show at the wedding! Thanks for all your reviews, reading through them has been a joy!
Date: 11/22/17 03:29 am Title: 30. Making Preparations
God that woman is disgusting.
“And you don't like me, your Majesty, but you know you can trust me.“
This line is freaking amazing.! Amazing I tell you!!! How is this man so blind!
What the hell does she want anyway 🙄
I don’t know what she is planning and I’m stressed lol!!
The little prince seems so sweet. I kind of want bill to train him haha
Author's Response: She seems like quite an evil person really. Haha, I think Tom is learning something from Bill, he's developing into a real Prince but still very eager to pick up fights. Thank you for being here!
Date: 11/22/17 03:17 am Title: 29. Taking Measures
What a vile woman . I almost feel sorry for Andreas. Almost. I mean he did try to kill tom. But I feel sorry for him :/
That woman is horrible, and it must hurt to now be her secant instead of sweet Bill.
I love your quote with tom, about how he knows what it’s like to regret something.
Omg I love Bill so much. He speaks so eloquently. Even when telling his father about his new wife lol I’d be like- wait, was that an insult haha he is going to be an amazing king. He’s already acting like it. While the actual king is getting played by that woman 🙄
Author's Response: Well Andreas is trying very hard to earn Bill's trust again after what he did. And Tom understands him more than anyone. Billy is a very smart person and he knows how to kill with kindness, I love him haha
Date: 11/22/17 03:05 am Title: 28. Setting the Scene
It’s so interesting to me, Tom.
When we first met him he was, I mean, a savage lol.
Kidnapping and treating Bill so poorly. Being fueled by his arrogance and pride. And now, he’s so sweet and understanding. He has a kind heart. Not sure if he was like that before, but was hidden because his ego was hurt, or if being around Bill and falling in love with him has made him this way. Either way I like it :)
I’m kind of scared for Georg 😭😭I hope he is alright.
And Andreas. I have a feeling he might not make it out of this war. He’s kind of lost or something.
I love the way Bill and Tom talk to each other. So romantic and sweet. And engagement! Yay! At least some happy news amongst all the anxiety everyone must be feeling
Author's Response: Well the idea was that Tom always had good in him but his relationship with Bill helped him discover the good in himself, but it's nice seeing people interpret it in their own way! Thanks ^_^
Date: 11/22/17 02:54 am Title: 27. Adopting Innovation
It’s so sweet how the queen is smitten by Georg. They have so much to lose in this 😬😬
Aw Prince Thomas. How cute.
I so want all of this to go well for them 😭😭
Author's Response: Well Tom and Bill couldn't have all the attention to themselves, we have more lovebirds now hah! Welcome back dear!
Date: 11/22/17 02:36 am Title: 31. Biding Time
She’s PREEEEGNAAAANT. 😹😁😸
Author's Response: Hahah... she might ^_^ Thanks for the review and nice to meet a new reader! Hope to hear from you again!
Date: 11/21/17 05:51 pm Title: 31. Biding Time
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks dear ^_^
Date: 11/21/17 10:56 am Title: 31. Biding Time
I think i know what's wrong with Morgan. Teehee. The closer we get to the war, the more anxious i get to see how this will end. Also Helena i want to kill her. If that baby isn't the king's well at least she'll be gone. Tuh over here trying to seduce Tomi like he wants that hussy.
Author's Response: Well I think all my readers will want to kill Helena after the new chapter, if they didn't want to already. I'm glad you're into the story! Thanks dear!
Date: 11/21/17 02:02 am Title: 31. Biding Time
Hm ... I hope Morgan isn't sick, but pregnant? Some take it more easy - maybe she is a woman that isnt taking the pregnancy so easy at the beginning.
I hope for her its what she has.
Bill and Tom are always so cute. Cant wait to 'see' toms face when Bill will ask him if he wants to marry him.
And I'm pretty sure that Hel(l)enas Baby is not from the king. Let's see what she will do when they find out that she is a bitch.
Love the early updates :)
Author's Response: Hel(l)ena is my new favourite nickname for her, it's even better than witch, because witches are kinda cool too... I've left a review on your story, check it out < 3 Thank you ^_^
Date: 11/20/17 11:43 pm Title: 31. Biding Time
Ash, O wanted to see Elena in an ugly dress >_< buuuut what can Ia say, Bill has a great taste with fashion, well, sometimes he’s got it wired, but it suit him...así bien raro 🤔
Uuuuuu I want to know how does Bill will propose to Tom XD yeeeeeiiiii I now ignore will be epic, like, I don’t know, something freaking awesome. Yeah, and that will be better than the wedding cause everyone loves the Toll, and when Elen gives birth, well know the she was a lair, like everyone here’s know it, but, eso es harina de otro costal,.
Ha! I knew it!! Morgan está embarazada!! Donde Georg pone el ojo, pone la bala 😎🙊🙈. Yeeeeei little Georg or little Merida!! (Baile de la felicidad) we will have the heir of the new United Kingdom!! Oooooo puede que Bill (si, claro, aja) got pregnant 😱 well, no, but it would be pretty but let’s been serious...habrá un pequeño Georg XD
La boda será más dramática, emocionante, divertida y cool que una novela mexicana o_o I can’t wait for it >_
Author's Response: Well a Mexican novel indeed... if you already hate Helena now, you will hate her even more soon. A little Georg huh? We'll see ^_^ Thank youu < 3
Date: 11/19/17 03:00 pm Title: 30. Making Preparations
What a bitch !! She is up to no good. great female character though she is evil
Author's Response: Hahahah she's evil really, glad you all hate her so, this can only mean I did a good job. Thanks for your review, a new chapter is here!
Date: 11/18/17 11:24 pm Title: 30. Making Preparations
I pass from “f*cking b*tch” to “they're so freaking cute...dale Tom dale!!” In a blink of an eye 😱😱
But of course my gorgeous Tom! You’ll be the “con mi pequeño ojo espías yo veo...una zorra resbaladiza” so, for the sake of your man, you shall ruin the selection from that wh*re wedding dress 🙊 chose an ugly color and an awful silhouette for her, and then return to your awesome and fashionable Bill.
I think King Alexander it’s an hypocrite, cause he wanted to Bill acceptance about his decision to marry Elena, it he doesn’t accept Bills relationship with Tom, and that’s so unfair, “trata como quieres ser tratado” as simple as that, but nooooooo, he just like to do what he think it’s the best for him, from his point of view, but he doesn’t see the happiness of Bill. And what he think it’s the best for him, so, don’t ask the approval for something that in his case you just approve, so, let them be, see the reality of the Elena them and just let Bill be.
That Morgan is a pillina 😏😏 ellos no pierden el tiempo 🙈 that’s right Georg made time for her, that means he really care about her, soooooo we will seea Little Georg ir a little Merida running through the new United Kingdom and that son of Elena...weeeeell, will see, cause I think the wedding will be interrupted by the real father of her son (that’s my theories and I hope I don’t offend you or something like that o_o)
Sorry, I used to imagine some escenarios and well, yeah o_o
P.S. I looooove them, this Toll is like just way to perfect >_<
Author's Response: I'm glad you love our couple, they're adorable, no? Thank you so much! Hahaha a little Merida? I bet the Queen would look a bit like Merida in her youth too haha...I like reading your scenarios!
Date: 11/18/17 05:46 pm Title: 30. Making Preparations
Great chapter :) And yes, I've been to the one in Tilburg :)
Author's Response: That's very good, I hope you had a nice time! Thanks dear!
Date: 11/18/17 02:16 pm Title: 30. Making Preparations
Hel(l)ena is a stupid bitch. She is so cheap. Dont get why the king fell for her. shouldnt he, as a king, have a better feeling for people like her?
I hope tom knows what he is doing ... and I hope Bill will have a good eyes on her. maybe he will follow them to the appointment?
It also seems to me that she doesnt know that tom and bill are a couple.
lets see how it will continue :)
Author's Response: I guess Alexander was just lonely... poor guy. Hahaha of course Bibi wouldn't leave Tom in Helena's hands ... This and much more in the new chapter I just uploaded. Thanks for your review!
Date: 11/15/17 06:59 pm Title: 29. Taking Measures
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you < 3
Date: 11/15/17 02:01 am Title: 29. Taking Measures
I was happy to see an early chapter :)
And the chapter was good! I hate helena, but sure, it's her role. She shouldn't be liked. What does she want from tom?
I think there are two options.
1. she is attracted to him and wants to get in bed with him.
2. she knows he is smart and wants him out of her way.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: See? I posted this early one just for you haha! But I may go back to updating twice a week, it all depends on whether I have enough time and inspiration! Thanks for your reviews!
Date: 11/14/17 09:42 pm Title: 29. Taking Measures
Asdfghjkl iiiiiiiiiiih!! Juro que estos dos me sacan más caries que los dulces…dear lord!! They’re so freaking cuuuuuteeeeeee!! Me los como, that’s it, I can’t, you leave me speechless with this two, they’re awesome, thyre cute, they’re lovely, they’re los p*tos amos, los mejores guerreros…and I can go on and on with the list, cause…COME ON!! Tom, if you need more proofs that Bill loves you more than his entire life, you are a burro cabezón, he loves you!! And it doesn’t matter if your father or any intento pichurriento de “Reina” will going to let you apart…so don’t you think less of him, pleeeease, trust his words just as much as you trust him your heart and love T^T sweet lord, we’ve got a cinnamon roll and a cutie pie, ¿qué más puedo pedir?
The wedding!!! A very beautiful wedding XD when I saw that you upload a new chapter I was like “si de por sí, el día era medio bueno…ahora se la rifo”
Dankeschön!! Muchas gracias!! Thank you very much!!
Saludos!!
Author's Response: Tom is a quite shy cinnamon roll and crazy in love. But I don't blame him, he has the best lover! Hahahaha we have a looong time to plan Bill and Tom's wedding.. if there will be one! Thank you!!
Date: 11/13/17 01:51 pm Title: 28. Setting the Scene
I love this story! I’ve been reading this for a while but I’m not a big big commenter in general (I never have anything usefull to say) but now I’m coming out of the woodwork to plead with you: please don’t kil them!
Author's Response: I have to say that your review has been one of the most charming I've ever received. It's an honour that your first review was written to plead for the lives of Bibi and Tomi ^_^