Date: 12/29/17 04:19 am Title: 42. Coming War
Tom tiene mi más profundo respeto, that’s I call a real man, he just did what a truly man could do, stay firm and let him niños that he will be there, for everything, he won’t go anywhere, but that doesn’t meansthatbhe forgives him, but still, he gives him the chance of redime so, if Bill play well the cards, will see a pretty and long Toll for the rest of the eternity ooooooor, one of them will die during war (como dijo el adivino/oráculo/sabio) and if that happens I will be very very sad 😟
And Morgan’s child will rule the new Kingdom, T^T por qué la vida es tan difícil y las almas gemelas no pueden vivir felices por siempre??
I just hope any of them die during war >_<
Happy new year!! Hope you enjoy your family and your beloveds ones :)
Besos y abrazos!! Feliz Año Nuevo!!!🎊🎆🎈
Author's Response: Ah Tomi is wonderful and so sweet... I love him! I can't guarantee everyone will be safe, you'll just have to wait and see! Happy new year!
Date: 12/29/17 03:55 am Title: 42. Coming War
Didn’t get round to reviewing in the last one as I’m supposed to be busy with uni right now :p Sorry!
I don’t have anything exciting to say, just that I liked the 2 last chapters :)
Happy newyear!
Author's Response: Well I'm supposed to be studying too, but writing is so addictive :P Thanks dear, happy new year to you too!
Date: 12/27/17 12:23 am Title: 41. Finding Truth
I just laughed my soul when you said “our cinnamon roll is drunk and sad” 🙊 (me voy a ir al infierno) buuuuut…come on!! It was hilarious 😂 I just imagine him like a little kid saying “no, it’s not fair…but I still want him” and pouting and all that Jaz, so yeah, I was giggling extra hard, and I’m not a big fan of saying “told you so” but…te lo dije Bill, pero namas no me haces caso 😔
But now you see that maybe everything’s needed to be like that just to be better in the near future, cause now Bill knows that Helena anda de perrita, and he’ll be fooled by no one, so this is what’s going to happen:
1.- Helena will be cleaning the stables with her bare hands and her bastard child will be inducted to the world of being a servant
2.- Georg and Morgan tendrán un hijo bien chulo y guapo
3.- Bill and Tom will marry and, espontáneamente Bill tendrá un hijo de Tom, o al revés (me and my silly dreams)
4.- Reconciliación hard!!
So yeah, I’m very sure about 2 points in my list…
Merry (late) Christmas!!
#Tollporsiempre #porunTollduradero #pateenaHelena
Author's Response: Hahaha I'm glad I made you laugh! Yeah, Tom wants him again, but who can blame him? Hmm, an interesting list! We'll see! Thanks for being here!
Date: 12/26/17 06:25 pm Title: 41. Finding Truth
Great chapter :) I'm so curious for what's going to happen next :)
Author's Response: Thanks dear! Stay tuned!
Date: 12/26/17 02:40 pm Title: 41. Finding Truth
Good chapter, I'm glad Tom is not falling back into Bills arms a second after. But I'm still sorry because of what the priest (or what he was :'D) said.
But first, lets get hellena!
Author's Response: Hahaha well the next chapter may satisfy your wish to see Tomi play hard to get... and you'll certainly enjoy the Hellena part!
Date: 12/24/17 10:10 pm Title: 17. Falling Hard
They are so cheesy lol, but at least they feel safe and loved with each other, that's all that matters.
Author's Response: Wooow now that's a gift for xmas! Glad to see you here and remember some old chapters... I know right they're cheesy as fuck, beginner mistakes :P Merry Christmas dear, text me sometime < 3
Date: 12/24/17 08:15 pm Title: 16. Choosing Sides
Oh Andreas... Your heart is broken and you're not thinking clearly, but this is not the way to go. Poor soul, I feel so bad for him.
Author's Response: Ah me too... thanks ^_^
Date: 12/23/17 05:01 am Title: 40. Creating Doubt
If there’s something that I’ve learn during these years, it’s that once that your heart fills with doubt, there’s nothing that keep them away until the truth comes out, but, well, if the signs are clear, and the actions prove them, that’s wont be room to more doubts, I know how those Bill should feel, and it’s not a valid excuse the he thinks, cause Tom already show him that he first die before doing something that hurts him, but well, no hay peor ciego que aquel que no quiere ver la verdad, si Bill, if it takes a few lies from her to doubt the only one that’s stay true to you, then you don’t deserve him, no esperes confianza cuando tú la das, it’s up to you, you better trust, cause he will never cheat on you, choose wise, cause if what the seer said it’s true, you’ll regret every single word even more than you already do. And come on, don’t be such an ass an just be the beautiful Toll that we all know you are, you’re the cutie pie and the fluffy cinnamon roll!! Don’t let us down.
Pinche p*ta Helena…that’s what I’ve got to say about her, please, tell me that when they discover that her son isn’t the Kings child you’ll send her to do the laundry and take care of the farm animals…pleeeeaaaaaseeeeee make her suffer!!
No lo he echen a perder muchachos!! Manténganse firmes en su amor y sean felices por siempre y para siempre!!
Author's Response: We can all punish Bill ahahaha, but Tomi might! The cinnamon roll is sad and drunk at the moment, but I'll see what I can do. Thanks for being here < 3
Date: 12/23/17 12:22 am Title: 40. Creating Doubt
The stress is really getting Bill...just hope he doesn't lose Tom along the way. The words of the seer has me concerned. As always I'm anxious for more!
Author's Response: Ah poor Tom is going through hard times but perhaps Bill will learn his lesson this time. Thanks for your review!
Date: 12/22/17 11:02 pm Title: 40. Creating Doubt
Oh I do love sole drama too from time to time ;) I can’t wait to see what’s next, I do hope Tom doesn’t die...
And thanks for being to nice to me! I’ll be allright soon I hope.
Happy holidays!
Author's Response: Happy holidays to you too. I hope everything works out for you. Ah I can't promise anything ;)
Date: 12/22/17 06:35 pm Title: 40. Creating Doubt
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 12/22/17 12:29 pm Title: 40. Creating Doubt
I knew helena would play a bad gamw. Bill is so stupid sometimes. He really is too kind, also if it makes him an asshole when he doubts his loved ones for those, he knows are bad people.
Well, lets see what happens next ... Since on sunday it will be christmas here in germany, I think you should gift us a bonuschapter :P
Author's Response: Ah I really wanted to write an extra one, but Christmas and family dinners got somewhat in the way. But it's here now anyway! And let's punish Billy haha! Thanks!
Date: 12/22/17 09:04 am Title: 40. Creating Doubt
Helena is such a good actress! Even though Bill knows, he needs certainty. But Tom hurts, of course. I believe Bill will quickly overcome doubts. Helena is so confident that she will soon make a mistake.
Thanks, I look forward to continuing.
Author's Response: Ah Helena is most likely getting the most hated character award by the end of the story. Thanks for your review!
Date: 12/19/17 05:54 pm Title: 39. Hatching Plans
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 12/19/17 02:12 pm Title: 39. Hatching Plans
I don’t think it’s boring at all, I still like it very much :)
Author's Response: Well I hope you'll like the added drama too! Thanks dear! I hope life is being better for you!
Date: 12/19/17 01:36 pm Title: 39. Hatching Plans
Bill started an interesting game, I hope it will be good. They should be careful because the traitors surely have their people among the servants.
Thanks for the chapter, I look forward to continuing.
Author's Response: Billy is messing up a little at the moment, but hopefully he'll get his story straight soon. Thanks for your review!
Date: 12/19/17 11:36 am Title: 39. Hatching Plans
Not sure if it was the right decision to set hellena free.
I still think she will bring bad things between Bill and Tom.
Let's see what the future brings next :O
Author's Response: Helena will be Helena. And Billy will be the kind Billy. Not a good combination, is it? Thanks dear!
Date: 12/19/17 09:19 am Title: 39. Hatching Plans
Boring??? Was?? Nein, of course not!! In fact I really do like the way you put the strategy in this, I mean, it’s like Sherlock Holmes during the mediaval age, it’s pretty cool, and he fact that Bill doesn’t take this so easy going it very cool, cause just as they say “todo mundo es inocente hasta que se demuestre lo contrario” and we all know that Helenabitch it’s the master mind on the murder of King Alexander, there’s no doubt, but yeah, I like the Bills way’ in this complot!! Go for them Bill!! And then Tom will reward you very, very well for being such a good king 😏😏🙊🙈
A por ellos rey Bill!! Muerte a los malos Tom!! Viva el Toll!!
Author's Response: Well I expect you to scream at me in the next review, a load of drama is coming your way, but what can we do, hahah! Thanks for your reviews dear, you're great < 3
Date: 12/17/17 02:28 pm Title: 38. Cooking Trouble
In the Middle Ages, executions were made for mere suspicion, even less. I know that Bill is trying to be fair, but the interrogations of those wicked traitors have not brought anything yet. I hope it will change soon.
Thanks for the chapter, I look forward to continuing.
Author's Response: Well that would be quite true for a peasant or someone unimportant, but when dealing with powerful and influential people, even a King had to be quite careful, because especially in the Middle Ages a King would have a large number of direct and indirect vassals and executing someone important without an obvious reason would make him seem a tyrant and perhaps cause revolts. I'm very glad you brought this up, because it did feel quite unexplained in the story, so I tried to make it clear! So double thanks for this review!! < 3
Date: 12/17/17 02:19 pm Title: 37. Coming Home
Clothes description is fine, especially with Bill. :-D
Georg will be daddy! Yay!
Author's Response: Haha everyone loves Bill's clothes... and I want his walk in closet, but ah, life is unfair! Thanks!