Date: 02/16/18 01:00 am Title: 56. Losing Memory
Oh oh ... I hope Tom gets his memories back soon :O
Sure it's hard for Bill now, but it has to be horror for Tom. Imagine waking up and to know nothing. Absolutly nothing ... everything blank ...
Author's Response: Well in fact he does know some things, but Bill might get a tad annoyed at the specific things he remembers... next chapter is up!
Date: 02/14/18 08:32 am Title: 55.Catching Fire
Whooop whooop whooop. Two kingdoms for the win. Ball was in their court and it was nothing but net. Lol. Awesome freaking chapter and Bill better get Tom back. I don’t want to have to fly to Athens.
Author's Response: Well a visit to Athens doesn't sound so horrible, now does it? ahaha... I'm goiiiing to Royal Secrets right now, I wish I had found the time earlier!
Date: 02/13/18 08:21 pm Title: 55.Catching Fire
I was like “run Jasmine!! Ruuuuun!! Like Forest Gump!!” And then I was like “that girl has eggs…pégale al p*to para que se le quite!!” And then I was like “p*nche Leon!! Ojalá y te de dearrea de la fea!! Deja a Tom, no es su culpa ser guapo y hermoso, aparte de buena onda e increíblemente wow y tu mujer cayera rendida a su ser pies…”
Yeah, it was pretty rollercoaster this chap, but! Come on Morgan!! Go get your General!! And Bill…go and kick Leon ugly and old ass, show him that no one treat your Tonii like that a57;🏻 And give him a b*tch slap in da face…and if you decided to punish him a little bit harder…I won’t mind, he deserves it’s de please…make Andreas little brother that young boy that adores Tom like a god…he was such a sweetie >_<
And of course I will design the 4 wedding garments c6;🏻😌👌🏻😎
Author's Response: I'll make a fashion designer out of you! hahah, I'm glad you're so passionate about the story, it makes me feel well!
Date: 02/13/18 07:02 pm Title: 55.Catching Fire
"He's sent by the Spirits, he's a god! We'll all be doomed if we hurt him!"
Yes you will.
And Ari YOU'LL BE DOOMED TOO IF SOMETHING BAD HAPPENS.
Author's Response: oh really? It's sad that I can't raise my eyebrow because I really want to :P Love you Jeeeess
Date: 02/13/18 05:35 pm Title: 55.Catching Fire
Great chapter :) And I surely would like another story from you then :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/13/18 04:42 pm Title: 55.Catching Fire
Ooh I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Also I would love another story from you!
Author's Response: Thank you dear! I hope to see you on my next story too!
Date: 02/13/18 01:39 pm Title: 55.Catching Fire
Princess made it complicated. While the war is almost over, it isn't over yet for Bill and Tom. They need one little miracle.
Thanks for the chapter, I look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Bill and Tom will still have trouble to face, I'm quite an evil author ahaha
Date: 02/13/18 11:09 am Title: 55.Catching Fire
Great chapter, and I'm happy that leons people are betraying him. The princess was stupid to be honest, she should have know that not just she gets bad out of it, but also tom gets shit from what she told leon. What ever, let's see if tom is still okay when Bill reaches them :)
Author's Response: I think she was desperate too, she was forced to be with a man she hated and Tom seemed to her like a totally different person, someone she would even like to be with. Next chapter is up ;)
Date: 02/12/18 01:14 am Title: Prologue: Making Amends
So much has happened and I’m so invested in knowing their future. I wanted to murder Leon for what he did to my Tommy but then again, this just proves how strong he is. They thought him to be a god. Goddamnit. I felt for Bill when he lost Tom. Seeing how much he loved him made me tear a little bit. Can’t wait for more. I wanna know how this all wraps up. I’m getting goosebumps.
Author's Response: Wooow, look who is here! welcome dear! Well a lot of people want to murder Leon lately, so let's see who will get to! Tomi is so amazing, I didn't even plan to make him so amazing, he became amazing himself! < 3
Date: 02/10/18 04:08 pm Title: 54.Hitting Targets
Great chapter es always. I'm looking forward to the next :)
Leon is too nice at the moment. Even when his soldiers dont do as they are told ... Sure the princess makes him happy.
What would happen when he get that she helped tom? He would probaby really jealous ...
To be honest I hope there will happen something dramatic befor it gets happy again. When tom was captured it was so dramatic and matched to the thing, but at the moment it's almost too friendly ...
Author's Response: Too nice Leon is unfortunately not the case for the next chapter... let's see what happens then! thanks dear!
Date: 02/10/18 11:37 am Title: 54.Hitting Targets
I didn't like this Jasmie girl, but, I most said that at least, she knows what it's the correcto thing to do…soo, good one girl.
Jajajajajajaja pobre y credulo Leon…you are so arrogant that you don't see a trap under your nose, but well, what can we expect from someone who just desire power against all human right…enséñale quien manda Bill, don't worry Tom Billy is on his way to rescue you, like a knight in his shinning armor…and with the white horse and all that jazz…just don't give up with the hope…
I'm loving it, cause they're awesome, you're awesome…lang liebe der Toll!!
Author's Response: Bill on a white horse, awww! wouldn't that be nice? Tomi agrees for sure! thanks for being here!
Date: 02/10/18 07:26 am Title: 54.Hitting Targets
Poor Tom, he does not know anything because he's isolated. But it is good that he did not discuss with King Leon about Bill. The King must be sure he has won.
Jasmin... I was right. : D
I look forward to the next event. Thanks for the chapter.
Author's Response: Well a big event is coming your way, so I hope you enjoy the next one too! Thanks!
Date: 02/09/18 11:46 pm Title: 54.Hitting Targets
I certainly like where this is going! ;)
Author's Response: Hmm, I'm glad you do, but there might still be some surprises!
Date: 02/09/18 06:03 pm Title: 54.Hitting Targets
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you < 3
Date: 02/08/18 02:29 pm Title: 53. Risking All
It seems that Tom received respect even from the enemy soldiers. That's a good thing, it could help in their case. Pricess Jasmine is... little strange. She obviously has her own plan.
I am glad that Bill is better. I wonder what's going on.
Thanks, I'm looking forward to continuing.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review dear! Jasmine has her own backstory which will be explained soon! Stay tuned for more!
Date: 02/07/18 06:34 pm Title: 53. Risking All
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/07/18 05:43 pm Title: 53. Risking All
Aaaaand Jasmine is here! Yupyup!
Author's Response: Ahahahaha by your joy one could say that you communicate with the author secretly... do you? :o
Date: 02/07/18 09:58 am Title: 53. Risking All
First of all…this chapter was like EPIC, second…quita tus sucias manos de nuestro hermoso Tom tu sucia lagartija…and of course, Billybebe when I grown up I want to be just like you…I fell for Morgan, she's like f*cking awesome and all, Geo, your a lucky b*stard, and I'm pretty sure that your children will going to be gorgeous, like angles and that stuff…
Leon, you'll see that you're future wife will going to destroy you in a very pretty way :D she'll be an ally from the two kingdoms ^_^ #sorrynotsorry…
I'm still in lovely…with you boooy…
Wait for Bill Tom!! he loves you more than anything!! just like you loves him!!
P.S. I'm very exciting with the turns of this story…just like Tom is a freaking god, with Bill by his side.
Author's Response: Ahahahah your hating on characters is amaziiing, I laugh so much! And yes you can start designing! Thank youu!
Date: 02/07/18 04:23 am Title: 53. Risking All
I'm sure we can trust Morgan to do the right things. If Leon really will do what he said? Touch tom? I dont hope it for tom, maybe it would break him ... I hope they can rescue him soon :)
Author's Response: I think your happy ending might be coming... but it might as well not ahahah... I think you will like the end though!
Date: 02/07/18 12:24 am Title: 53. Risking All
Ok I’m a bit more hopefull now :p nice chapter! Good luck with the rest of your exams!
Author's Response: ahaha I'm glad you are! Thanks dear!