Date: 05/30/17 02:10 pm Title: Long Day
After reading the last two chapters, I've come to the conclusion that Bill and Tom seriously need to just talk. Chat about what's going on between them. Tom's frustrations are completely warranted at some moments but I feel that Bill isn't giving him space. Granted, he's fragile and clingy but I don't think Bill in this story has ever given Tom the chance to be vulnerable.
Love the story so far and I honestly can't wait for the future chapters. Hopefully things get better between the twins. Emilia and Tom are a great couple. She's like his diary and for someone like him that works.
Ciao for now
PS: sorry to hear about the Manchester attack. I live in the US and it still shook a few people here.
Author's Response: I've always felt like Bill leans far too much on Tom than is healthy. I wanted to give Tom a voice since his often seems to get lost. You are right, they do need to talk. But we all know how stubborn the twins are.rnThank you. We in the UK feel it too when things like this happen over there in the US too. The response to the attack over here and across the world has very much restored my faith in people.
Date: 05/29/17 05:53 pm Title: Long Day
Way to go Tom.. D:
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: He's stupid right! Thank you :D
Date: 05/24/17 09:08 pm Title: Married
I really, really like this story, and this was another great chapter! :)
Date: 05/21/17 10:58 am Title: Perfect
First off, this story needs deserves more reviews. It is so good. I really love that it's so different from all the other fics on here and I think that's what caught my eye and made me keep reading. You're a wonderful writer.
I love the way you write the twins in this and I sort of think that they are a bit like this in real life (hate to say that but it's true lol). Being in the spotlight for so many years, I can imagine they, especially Bill, has come to this mindset that they must uphold a certain image and nobody is going to mess it up for them.
I really like Emilia and I love that Tom likes her. I'm glad that she was so understanding and didn't push Tom to talk or anything like that when he tried to leave. I feel like Tom needs to maybe open up to Emilia about Ria at some point and maybe that will help him? I could be wrong about that though. Maybe he needs to talk to Ria instead to have the closure that he needs.
I just love this story and the characters and I cannot wait to read more. :D
Author's Response: Oh I adore this review!rnI write the twins just how I imagine them so it's good to hear that others think the same.rnRia will absolutely play a part as the story continues, how much though remains to be seen ;).
Date: 05/21/17 12:38 am Title: Perfect
The natural tone of this story is what keeps this little reader coming back for more. It's so down to earth and realistic, especially in dialogue and actions. I hope Tom and Emilia work out despite Bill and his shallow tendencies. Also can't wait for future updates this story is truly phenomenal.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love your reviews and I can't tell you how happy it makes me to know that you think the dialogue is realistic - it's what concerns me the most when writing the boys :)
Date: 05/16/17 10:11 am Title: Moon
This was honestly beautiful. I love how Tom's just infatuated with someone who no one expects. She's not a Hollywood Barbie and it's cute. Like he's falling in love all over again. It so sweet I might get cavities. Lol, can't wait for the next chapter.
Ciao
Date: 05/08/17 02:53 am Title: I'm Sorry
Tom's got his eye on BBW, okay, I'm excited to see where you take this. The dialogue is phenomenal in this. It seems natural and I can imagine the twins having these conversations.
You have a knack for this and I'm intrigued.
Can't wait for more updates. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I try to make the dialogue as realistic as possible so I'm glad that's coming across :).
Date: 05/07/17 05:54 pm Title: I'm Sorry
Really liked this one :)
Date: 05/02/17 04:54 pm Title: Balcony
I really like this story, it's well written und funny. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 05/01/17 08:48 am Title: Balcony
It was great! Can't wait to read more :)
Date: 04/29/17 02:21 pm Title: Prada
I cannot wait to read more of this. This first chapter intrigued me and I really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope I don't disappoint :D
Date: 04/19/17 05:12 pm Title: Prada
I'm dying to read more! Really like it.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 04/18/17 10:50 pm Title: Prada
I'm intrigued!
Author's Response: Thank you! That's what I was aiming for :D