Date: 04/17/17 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 04/17/17 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
YOU BETTER UPDATE THIS REAL SOON YOUNG LADY!! loved it!!!!
Author's Response: UPDATED DARLING DO NOT WORRY!
Date: 04/17/17 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's sad and depressing to see Bill in this state :( I just hope this isn't something White happened in their real life! Your stories are always amazing and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! Poor Bill indeed, he's a suffering boy but he has his Tom.
Date: 04/17/17 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
IN LOVE WITH THIS OHMYGOD
Author's Response: OHH THANK U!
Date: 04/17/17 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
JESUS CHRIST, I've just wrote a review for this chapter and had to delete it. I completely forgot that this site introduced bottom!Bill as a genre, so I saw "bottom!" and assumed it was bottom!Tom. Then, like the complete tit I am, I badgered on about bottom!Tom for something close to an entire paragraph. FML.
Let's start this again, shall we?
My God, you're breaking my heart with this.
I really hate the thought of Bill so lost and depressed like this. I naively always think Tom is there to ensure Bill doesn't get to that stage, but life has its own path and sadly, Tom can't always protect Bill from the inevitable. I feel for Tom mostly, though. You're portraying his worry and hopelessness amazingly well. I mean, if any of this did happen or was to happen in the future, Tom would be fucking beside himself and you've captured that perfectly within this first part. < / 3
WONDERFUL AS ALWAYS! You've got me right where you want me and I'm so fuckign pumped for this. xx
Author's Response: oHHHHH don't worry baby, I sometimes make the same mistake, it's a tricky new rule lol. Thank you so SO much for such a sweet and kind review, you always say such wonderful things that I fear I do not deserve. I am so grateful you took the time to read this :))))))
Date: 04/17/17 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
You're literally my favourite author on this site. I can already tell this fic will be incredible! Can't wait to read the next part
Author's Response: OHHH you still read, oh gosh that means the world to me! Thank you so much my darling :)
