Date: 04/24/17 01:08 am Title: Chapter 3
Absolutely perfect!
"Tom couldn’t look away from his beautiful twin, ethereal in the evening dimness and gleaming with sweat and sex"
“I can feel your heart ......Our heartbeats are the same”
"I can feel it”
I had tears, so fucking beautiful, thank you!
Date: 04/23/17 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
Omg this was actually such an emotional chapter to read. The others were too but this one was unreal. I actually have tears rolling down my cheeks right now. Just knowing that the twins have such a special bond already made this so heartbreaking to read (in a positive way of course!).
You're so incredible. You will never stop hearing that from me haha. Hopefully you won't get sick and tired from me saying that all the time.
You're so great I just wanna squeezeee you xD You'll have to let me know when you post your next story because I wanna be the first to read it ;)
Date: 04/23/17 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
EM THIS WAS SO PERFECT! Such a little jewel of a story!! I'll end up thinking about it everytime I listen to CCS now - absolutely not complaining here! This is going straight to my faves, thanks for sharing! Love you!
Date: 04/21/17 05:44 am Title: Chapter 2
I was so happy until the end!!! Why?? If my heart broke that quickly and completely than I don't even wanna think about poor Tom's.
Author's Response: SORRY!!! Thank you for reading all the same! Poor Tom indeed... :(
Date: 04/21/17 04:01 am Title: Chapter 2
I LOVE YOU TOO OMG SO MUCH. I FUCKING LOVE THIS SO MUCH YOU DONT EVEN KNOW. Or maybe you do. EITHER WAY ITS AMAZING
Author's Response: OMG THIS MADE MY DAY THANK YOU HAYLEY ZEEEEEEEE! You're the best
Date: 04/21/17 03:36 am Title: Chapter 2
Poor Tom. To fall asleep thinking he has all he's ever wanted is lying in his arms and then to wake up abandoned. I'm sure Bill woke completely spooked by what they'd done, but to just run away and tell Tom not to contact him...Can't wait for the next chapter xx
Author's Response: poor Tom, yes :( thank you for reading and taking the time to review, it's so kind of you!
Date: 04/21/17 12:14 am Title: Chapter 2
Holy shit! O.O
Author's Response: ... :o final part now up........
Date: 04/20/17 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
what the hell ? ¿ :) i liked the chapter so much but what the hell :)
Author's Response: haha sorry!! Thank you for reading :)
Date: 04/20/17 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
aaaaahhh Em!!! so i decided to read this and it was so beautifully written. Tomi is the cutest isn't he? hope bill stops being an ass :( .... can't wait to read the rest!!
Date: 04/20/17 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
You have no idea how happy I was when I saw you had posted the second chapter! I may have freaked out a teeny tiny bit hahaha. Even after years of reading your fics, I am still amazed at how much talent you have and how creative you are. You never ever disappoint.
I'll keep this review short because if I don't, it'll just end up being a giant comment of me saying how amazing you are and I'd just ramble about that over and over again.
I will be impatiently waiting for the next chapter
Author's Response: Ohhh gosh this is the sweetest review, thank you SO MUCH, Anouk!! I'm honestly so happy you still read my stories! Thank you!
Date: 04/20/17 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
I LAY IN AWE!! loved this so much and i cant wait to see how it's going to work out!!
Author's Response: Aw thank you sweet girl!!!
Date: 04/20/17 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Nooo! These last two sentences totally killed the mood from the whole chapter!!! :D
Author's Response: SORRY!! Thanks for reading all the same lol
Date: 04/19/17 03:21 am Title: Chapter 1
It's hard to review this one chapter without wanting to review the whole thing but I shally try! I mean you already know I love it, I have been singing your praises to anyone who will listen lol. I told you I think this is the best thing you've ever written, I can't wait for people to read the whole thing, because it moved me to TEARS. It breaks my heart to think of Tom being this worried and upset over Bill, which I bet he is. He just loves him so much, I just can't take it, it's so sweet. And I hate thinking of Bill ever hurting so much because we know he did. Thank god, just like in your story, that he has Tom. 💗 It's just so well written and I so easily feel everything from Tom's worry to Bill's sadness and Tom's disappointment and anger at Bill going out without him to get laid. You're writing my favourite kind of twins, you see them like I do and I love iiiiiiiiiiiiiit.
Author's Response: You are just far too wonderful for me. I am so so SO glad you like it, it really does mean a lot to me. This review is just WAYYYYY too nice and sweet and thoughtful and GOD I AM JUST SO HAPPY U LIKE IT THAT MUCH. Thank you hayley zeeeeeee!!! Part 2 now up in case you would like a re-read ;)
Date: 04/19/17 12:59 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW...just wow! Engrossing and suspenseful. Can t wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 04/18/17 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, this first part is awesome ! Bill's pain is heartwrenching, and Tom's loneliness too.
Your writing is really interesting, I can't wait to read what's next ! Thanks you for it :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind review :) next part is now up!
Date: 04/18/17 07:55 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't wanna say I'll be waiting impatiently because I don't wanna rush you but I love this story soooo much!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! The wait is over, part 2 is now up :)
Date: 04/18/17 05:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my...that's exactly the type of fic that is painful but that I love to read. Realistic, recent, heartbreaking...we all know Bill probably went through something pretty similar and must have been wild for a time, and I'm so interested in how Tom could deal with all this, cause they always talk about how, since they're one person, if one is depressed, the other is too...
Can't wait for the update, you're spoiling us so much and ILY
Author's Response: Thank you thank you lovely darling! Part 2 is now up, I hope it does not disappoint!
Date: 04/18/17 03:12 am Title: Chapter 1
So, so good. Can't wait for part 2 xx
Author's Response: Thank you! Part 2 now available :)
Date: 04/17/17 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor Tom! he is so in love
love this history! waiting for the second part!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, part 2 is now up :)
Date: 04/17/17 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it! Can't wait for you to update!
Author's Response: Thank you! Updated just now :)