Date: 11/25/23 06:54 am Title: Chapter 3
This was a really good story!
You should do a sequel to this!
Date: 04/18/23 01:23 am Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 07/23/18 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awww, this was a nice story! :D It was very well crafted and I really felt sad for Bill and Tom too. Very good story indeed! The only teeny tiny flaw is that the sex scene, in my opinion, was a bit anticlimactic ironically, perhaps because of the length of it. It felt kind of forced to me, but perhaps it's just me. But I looooved how you included the song lyrics in the story in a way that it didn't seem too cliche! :D And I really enjoyed reading this! :D Good work! I'm happy they finally decided to give their own relationship a go!
Date: 04/30/18 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is exactly what I wanted to read! Love your stories, they never dussapoints, are always so sweet and beautiful!
Date: 11/08/17 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
That was truly gorgeous! Going on a little reading spree tonight and this touched on everything I love in a twin fic. Angst, sexual tension, heart breaking realism and an amazing ending. Really loved it. Thanks for writing!
Date: 09/25/17 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
I LIKED IT SO MUCH? THANKS
Date: 06/14/17 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
okay of all the shorter stories for th that ive read, this is one of my favs. the connection was perfect, the personalities fit, and i can honestly say that the party scene was the best description of the speaker being "high" or "drugged up" in any story that I've ever read. it was so real, the depiction was amazingly visual to the point where you can't help but picture the scene vividly. i made this account like 6 years ago, and i'm so glad to come back to authors like you putting out shit this good.
Date: 05/14/17 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
They finally end up together. It's great. I really enjoyed this story. Thanks :)
Date: 05/14/17 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
It's so sad ! Does Bill regret what they did ? Tom must be so hurt.
Date: 05/14/17 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's so sad for the two of them. Tom all for his twin and Bill down and not seeing love where it truly is.
I really love this first part.
Date: 05/10/17 05:29 am Title: Chapter 3
Ugh. OMG, the feels in this story are super intense. I was on the verge of tears; and I felt this story everywhere. So so so good. This was crazy powerful in my opinion. I have no words. Just, intense feels. Wow. Loved this!!!!
Date: 05/04/17 10:55 am Title: Chapter 3
They just need each other to be happy, CCS really show us their undying love for each other (romantic or not, it doesn't matter).
Date: 05/03/17 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
Holy shit. I totally forgot to review. Bad me. *slaps self* I totally read this in one sitting and I love it so much! I loved the ending, how they got there and just... I can't really describe it. It was amazing, just like I expected. It always is when you write it!
Congratulation on the feature (even though it's late) and wonderful story! I love these twins and I'm sure I'll read it again!
Date: 04/26/17 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a really beautifully written story. In my eyes on the one hand it’s all very obviously even if it was not so really described. But I have suffered directly with Tom and I thought directly from the beginning that his feelings were 'more' than about fraternal feelings and fraternal care.
The story sounded realistic but not kitschy and it was really emotional and I could feel totally in this situation and suffered with Tom and was happy with him and Bill in the end when everything was good and they decided to give love a chance no matter what the rest of the world would think of it if they knew.
A big praise and giant thanks to you for this great story. Thank you very much!!!!! (and a big sorry for my bad English!)
Angeleyes
Date: 04/25/17 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excellent! Love it! I've been trying to read this since you started posting. One down, two to go!
Date: 04/25/17 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
This was such a beautiful, beautiful story. Everything was subtle but at the same time obvious - Tom's pain, Bill's hesitation and fear...It was realistic, but at the same time deep and poetic. Really really well done. I'm so glad it got a happy ending, cause these two really deserve it and the story ends up on a such a high, positive note. Thank you so much, truly amazing !
Date: 04/25/17 09:11 am Title: Chapter 3
How could anyone want an ending different form this?!?! If you need agony and angst, it was there earlier in the story. And now the twins have each other and everything is as it should be!!!!! I really loved that you showed how wrecked Tom got without Bill. I feel like Bill kinda needed to see a physical example of how he was affecting Tom. Not that I wanted Bill to be hurt more, it's just I love them both equally and I didn't want Tom to be hurting more. The ending was absolutely perfect!!!! They ended up happy ...and doing it. Both of which are wonderful things in and of themselves but when combined by a masterful author are the perfect manifestation of everything divine. Trust me, I could gush for ages about this but I realize I have to stop sometime. Just, thank you for this story!!!
Date: 04/24/17 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
Plunging into another chapter so cheerfully! I am so looking forward to the final one of this story! I am quite fond of Tom's affection and emotions toward Bill that my heart starts to ache in the best of possible ways! Thank you for bringing TOLL
Date: 04/24/17 06:56 am Title: Chapter 3
Even reading it a second time I was moved to tears! Tom's pain when Bill leaves him breaks my heart, like he NEEDS Bill right then after what happened but he has to face it alone, and we all know he doesn't do well without Bill. I love how Bill takes care of him when he comes home, and then of course the amazing scene of them finally giving in to each other at the end, it's sooooooo beautiful, I can't even tell you how much I love it. Favourite favourite favourite!